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jpr44

March 10, 2021

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Conditional, real life and university

This morning two highschool students, Sandra and Paul, are talking about their exams and their future.

Sandra : Hi Paul, how's it going ? Are you satisfied with your studies and your last year ?

Paul : Well, I think if a student works hard he can get the grade he expects without fear.

S: I agree but, what about you ? Are you going to get your grade this year ?

P: Obviously, if I am lucky I'll get my exam in biology and chemistry ;

S: Indeed but why did you talk about chance ? I don't understand, it's not a matter of chance, if you had worked enough, you'll get your exam, isn't it ?

P: Yes, obviously, you're right. I could say « if I were a good student, I would get this damned exam and the As I need to go the university of medicine ».

S: Right, sure, I think I begin to understand, what a poor boy ! I see you're a little scared but don't worry, if you fail you'll retake your exam next year.

P: Very funny, of course but that'll be a waste of time.

S: Sure, you can say that but what's the point ? Actually, if you really want to succeed in the grades you wanted you have no choice. It doesn't matter to say « if I had worked more seriously I would have get this exam ». Be brave my friend, let's go to the highschool, see your results and whatever you get, don't give up, carry on because if you need to retake your year you know it's up to you.You are the master and you know what you have to do.
Now, stop asking yourself, let's see what you've got and after that nevertheless it would be, good or bad , let's go to the pub, if we don't waste more time it'd be open !

Corrections

Conditionality, rReal lLife, and uUniversity

In English, the first letter of every noun, verb, adjetive, adverb, etc., needs to be capitalized in the title.

I feel like "Conditionality" is better than "Conditional" because "Conditional" is an adjetive.

This morning two highschool students, Sandra and Paul, are talking about their exams and their future.

Sandra : Hi Paul, how's it going ?

Are you satisfied with your studies and your last year  of school?

Paul : Well, I think if a student works hard, he can get the grade he expects without fear.

S: I agree but, what about you ?

Are you going to get your grade this year ?

P: Obviously, if I am lucky I'll getpass my exam in biology and chemistry ;

"I am" is often written/said as "I'm".

S: IndeedOk, but why did you talk about chance ?

"Indeed" sounds super formal and isn't really used in casual conversation.

I don't understand, it's not a matter of chance, if you had've worked hard enough, you'll getpass your exam, isn't it right?

P: Yes, obviously, you're right.

I could say « i"If I were a good student, I would getpass this damned exam and the As I need to go the uUniversity of mMedicine »".

The "University of Medicine" sounds like a specific university. If you want to say that he'll study medicine in university, you would phrase it like, "... the As I need to go study medicine in university" or "... to major in medicine".

S: Right, sure, I think I'm beginning to understand, w. What a poor boy !

I'm not sure you meant to imply it, but "What a poor boy" appears mocking here.

I see you're a little scared but don't worry, if you fail you'll retake yourthe exam next year.

P: Very funny, of course I would but that'lld be a waste of time.

S: Sure, you can say that, but what's the point ?

Actually, if you really want to succeed inand get the grades you wanted , you have no choice.

It doesn't matter to say « iif you say, "If I had worked more seriouslyharder, I would have getpassed this exam »".

"I had" is often written/said as "I'd".

"I would" is often written/said as "I'd".

Be brave my friend, let's go to the highschool, see your results and , whatever you get, don't give up, c! Carry on, because if you need to retake your year, you know it's up to you. You are the master and you know what you have to do.

"You are" is often written/said as "you're".

Now, stop askworrying yourself, l! Let's see what you've gotten and after that, nevertheless it would be, good or bad , let's go to the pub, i. If we don't waste any more time it'd won't be open !

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

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jpr44

March 11, 2021

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Thank's!
I'm not sure you meant to imply it, but "What a poor boy" appears mocking here : yes, that's it!

P: Yes, obviously, you're right.


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Conditional, real life and university


Conditionality, rReal lLife, and uUniversity

In English, the first letter of every noun, verb, adjetive, adverb, etc., needs to be capitalized in the title. I feel like "Conditionality" is better than "Conditional" because "Conditional" is an adjetive.

This morning two highschool students, Sandra and Paul, are talking about their exams and their future.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sandra : Hi Paul, how's it going ?


Sandra : Hi Paul, how's it going ?

Are you satisfied with your studies and your last year ?


Are you satisfied with your studies and your last year  of school?

Paul : Well, I think if a student works hard he can get the grade he expects without fear.


Paul : Well, I think if a student works hard, he can get the grade he expects without fear.

S: I agree but, what about you ?


S: I agree but, what about you ?

Are you going to get your grade this year ?


Are you going to get your grade this year ?

P: Obviously, if I am lucky I'll get my exam in biology and chemistry ;


P: Obviously, if I am lucky I'll getpass my exam in biology and chemistry ;

"I am" is often written/said as "I'm".

S: Indeed but why did you talk about chance ?


S: IndeedOk, but why did you talk about chance ?

"Indeed" sounds super formal and isn't really used in casual conversation.

I don't understand, it's not a matter of chance, if you had worked enough, you'll get your exam, isn't it ?


I don't understand, it's not a matter of chance, if you had've worked hard enough, you'll getpass your exam, isn't it right?

I could say « if I were a good student, I would get this damned exam and the As I need to go the university of medicine ».


I could say « i"If I were a good student, I would getpass this damned exam and the As I need to go the uUniversity of mMedicine »".

The "University of Medicine" sounds like a specific university. If you want to say that he'll study medicine in university, you would phrase it like, "... the As I need to go study medicine in university" or "... to major in medicine".

S: Right, sure, I think I begin to understand, what a poor boy !


S: Right, sure, I think I'm beginning to understand, w. What a poor boy !

I'm not sure you meant to imply it, but "What a poor boy" appears mocking here.

I see you're a little scared but don't worry, if you fail you'll retake your exam next year.


I see you're a little scared but don't worry, if you fail you'll retake yourthe exam next year.

P: Very funny, of course but that'll be a waste of time.


P: Very funny, of course I would but that'lld be a waste of time.

S: Sure, you can say that but what's the point ?


S: Sure, you can say that, but what's the point ?

Actually, if you really want to succeed in the grades you wanted you have no choice.


Actually, if you really want to succeed inand get the grades you wanted , you have no choice.

It doesn't matter to say « if I had worked more seriously I would have get this exam ».


It doesn't matter to say « iif you say, "If I had worked more seriouslyharder, I would have getpassed this exam »".

"I had" is often written/said as "I'd". "I would" is often written/said as "I'd".

Be brave my friend, let's go to the highschool, see your results and whatever you get, don't give up, carry on because if you need to retake your year you know it's up to you.You are the master and you know what you have to do.


Be brave my friend, let's go to the highschool, see your results and , whatever you get, don't give up, c! Carry on, because if you need to retake your year, you know it's up to you. You are the master and you know what you have to do.

"You are" is often written/said as "you're".

Now, stop asking yourself, let's see what you've got and after that nevertheless it would be, good or bad , let's go to the pub, if we don't waste more time it'd be open !


Now, stop askworrying yourself, l! Let's see what you've gotten and after that, nevertheless it would be, good or bad , let's go to the pub, i. If we don't waste any more time it'd won't be open !

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