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All in all, stress in modern societies is a significant obstacle for people to enjoy their lives. In my opinion, people should start making changes in their work-life balance and their outlook on the world. Everyone should realize that, otherwise we will face more serious problems in future.


This a possible conclusion for an essay that answers the question: "What are the main causes of stress in modern life, and how could stress be reduced?"

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Conclusion Example

All in all, stress in modern societies is a significant obstacle for people trying to enjoy their lives.

In my opinion, people should start making changes in their work-life balance and their outlook on the world.

Everyone should realize thatis, otherwise we will face more serious problems in future.

saying "this" makes it clearer that you are referring to what you said above

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All in all, stress in modern societies is a significant obstacle for people to enjoy their lives.


All in all, stress in modern societies is a significant obstacle for people trying to enjoy their lives.

In my opinion, people should start making changes in their work-life balance and their outlook on the world.


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Everyone should realize that, otherwise we will face more serious problems in future.


Everyone should realize thatis, otherwise we will face more serious problems in future.

saying "this" makes it clearer that you are referring to what you said above

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