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heatedcanine

Oct. 10, 2024

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Concern Right Now Is The High Actvity of Solar Flares

I'm going to run in the Fukuoka Marathon in 30 days.
As the temperature has become lower and lower, it's much more confortable to run.
When I'm losing weight, it's very tough to run a long distance. I feel as though I'm running out of battery. I feel I have hypoglycemia attack.
When I eat much, I can run longer distance, although I gain weight by 1-2 kilograms.
I need to lose 10 kilograms more in order to get the aimed record, so it's a dillenma and a challenge. But I enjoy it.
I don't feel any knee pains or hip pains, and I think my mental and phsical health condition is rather good.

My biggest concern right now is the higher activity of the solar flares.
They say it affects the accuracy of GPS (Global Positioning System).

I totally rely on my excercise and races on Garmin smartwatch, Forerunner 265.
If GPS doesn't work well and give me the wrong information of my running speed, distance, etc., it would be fatal.

For example, they say that I should practice running in the rain as the training in case of the rainy day official race.
Likewise, I should do my excercise without wearing the smartwatch, Yoda might say:
"Let go, Luke! You should rely on your instinct!"


現在の懸念は、太陽フレアの活動が活発であること

私は30日後に福岡マラソンに出場します。
気温がどんどん低くなってきたので、走るのがずっと快適になりました。
減量している最中は長距離を走るのが非常に辛いです。電池切れのように、低血糖のように感じます。
逆にたくさん食べた時は、もっと長い距離を走れます。しかし体重がてきめんに1-2㎏増えてしまいます。
目標タイムを達成するために、あと10キロ減量する必要があるので、これはジレンマでもあり挑戦でもあります。でも、楽しみながらやっています。
膝や腰に痛みはなく、精神的にも肉体的にも健康状態はかなり良いと思っています。

で、今のところ一番の懸念は、太陽フレアの活動が活発であることです。
それがGPS(全地球測位システム)の精度に影響を与えると言われています。

私は運動やレースでGarminのスマートウォッチForerunner 265に完全に依存しています。
もしGPSがうまく作動せず、走行速度や距離などの情報を誤って伝えられたら、それは致命的です。

例えば、雨の日の公式レースに備えて雨の中での練習が推奨されていますが、それと同様に、スマートウォッチを使わずにトレーニングすべきかもしれません。
ヨーダならこう言うでしょう。「機器を無視しろ、ルーク!本能に従え!」

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Concern Right Now Is The High Actvity ofed About the High Solar Flares Activity

I'm going to run in the Fukuoka Marathon in 30 days.

As the temperature has become lower and lower, it'sdecreases, running outside has gotten much more conmfortable to run.

When I'm losinge weight, it's very tough to run arunning long distances.

I don't quite understand the connection. This makes it sound like you're intentionally losing weight to run long distances. I would say something like: "When I train for marathons, I have to make sure I eat enough. Otherwise, running long distances becomes a challenge."

I often feel as though I'm running out of battery.

I feel I havet almost feels like a hypoglycemia attackc episode.

When I eat mucha lot, I can run longer distances, although I gain weight bybut I gain 1-2 kilograms.

I need to lose 10 kilograms more in order to get the aimed record, so it's a dillenma and a challengt's a dilemma and a challenge, because I need to lose 10 kilograms to achieve my target time.

But I enjoy it.

I don't feel any knee pains or hip pains, and I think my mental and physical health condition is rather good.

My biggest concern right now is the higherincreased activity of the solar flares.

They say it affects theGPS accuracy of GPS (Global Positioning System).

I don't think you have to specify "global positioning system."

I totally rely on myWhen I excercise and races onun races, I completely rely on my Garmin smartwatch, Forerunner 265.

If my GPS doesn't work well and give me the wrong information ofproperly and my running speed, distance, etc., are off, it would be fataldisastrous.

"fatal" means something that can kill you. We don't really use it to exaggerate. People will think you will die.

For example, they say thatmany people say I should practice running in the rain as the training in casein case it rains ofn the rainy day officialday of the race.

Likewise, I should do my excercise without wearing themy smartwatch,. Yoda might say:
"Let go, Luke!

You should rRely on your instinct, you should!"

This is how Yoda would really talk, haha

Feedback

Good luck!

I'm going to run in the Fukuoka Marathon in 30 days.

As the temperature has become lower and lower, it's much more conmfortable to run.

Whilen I'm losing weight, it's very tough to run a long distances.

I feel as though I'm running out of battpower/energy.

I feel IAs if I'm haveing hypoglycemia attack.

When I eat muchore, I can run longer distances, although I gain weight by 1-2 kilograms.

I need to lose 10 more kilograms more in order to get the aimed record, so it's a dillenemma and a challenge.

sorry, i don't understand aimed record. i think you mean to be in the weight class you're aiming for?

But I enjoy it.

I don't feel any knee pains or hip pains, and I think my mental and physical health condition is rather good.

My biggest concern right now is the higherincreased activity of the solar flares.

They say it affects the accuracy of GPS (Global Positioning System).

I totally rely on my excercise and races on Garmin smartwatch, a Forerunner 265, for my exercise and races.

sorry i don't understand
is this what you meant?

If the GPS doesn't work well and gives me the wrong information ofabout my running speed, distance, etc., it would be fataawful.

it would be fatal implies you would literally die because of incorrect information

For example, they say that I should practice running in the rain as the training in case of the rainy dayrainy weather during the official race.

Likewise, I should do my excercise without wearing the smartwatch,. As Yoda might say:
"Let go, Luke!

You should rely on your instincts!"

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heatedcanine

Oct. 10, 2024

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>sorry, i don't understand aimed record. i think you mean to be in the weight class you're aiming for?
My aimed record for the next marathon is 5:59 for 42.195 kilometers.
My previous record was 6:30.
If you lose one kilograms, you can run a full marathon faster by 3 minutes.
Therefore, in order to run faster 30 minutes, I should lose weight by 10 kilograms.

>sorry i don't understand
is this what you meant?
Yes. Thank you!

>it would be fatal implies you would literally die because of incorrect information
Yeah, "fatal" is a figurative, exgeggerated, and funny expression to mean, "it would cause me a big trouble."
Actually it may include, overpacing that will cause me drop out, or I will really have a heart attack.
The smartwatch checks my running pace, heart rate, pitch, time, distance, oxygen saturation, stress level, ... everything!

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heatedcanine

Oct. 10, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections and comment! :)

Concern Right Now Is The Highs About The Increased Activity of Solar Flares

I'm going to run in the Fukuoka Marathon in 30 days.

As the temperature has become lower and lower, it's much more confortable to run.

Original sentence is good!

You could say:
"As the temperature has started to drop, ..." or
"As the temperature has started dropping, ..."

When I'mSince I'm actively losing weight, it's very tough to run a long distances.

Or:
"I am losing weight and it's become very tough to run long distances"

I feel as though I'm running out of battery.

Nice sentence!

You could take it even further and specify *when* you feel like this. For example:
"After only 10km, I feel as though I'm running out of battery"

Sometimes, I feel I'm haveing a hypoglycemiac attack.

For this, I think you *need* to at least somewhat specify when you feel like this.

Other suggestions:
"If I push myself too hard, I feel like I'm having a hypoglycemic attack" or
"If I push myself too hard, I feel like I might have a hypoglycemic attack"
etc.

When I eat too much, I can run longer distances, although I gain weight by 1-2 kilograms in weight.

I need to lose 10 kilograms more in order to get the aimed recordhit my target, so it's a dillenemma and a challenge.

Or:
"I need to lose 10kg more in order to hit my personal best, ...."

But I enjoy it.

I don't feel any knee pains or hip pains, and I think my mental and physical health condition is rather good.

Or:
"I don't feel any pain in my knees or hips, and I think my mental and physical health is rather good"

My biggest concern right now is the higherincreased activity of the solar flares.

They say it affects the accuracy of GPS (Global Positioning System).

I totally rely on my excercise and races on Garmin smartwatch, Forerunner 265Garmin Forerunner smartwatch during my training and races.

In English, we often don't include the specific make/model of the product we are talking about. It can come across like you are trying to show-off.

If GPS doesn't work well and gives me the wrong information ofabout my running speed, distance, etc., it would be fatal.

The use of the word "Fatal" is very dramatic! It makes it sounds like a matter of life and death.

For example, they say event organizers suggest that I should practice running in the rain, as thit may be training in case of the rainy dayon the official race day.

Who is "they"?

Likewise, I should do my excercisetraining without wearing thea smartwatch, Yoda might say: . In the words of Yoda,
"Let go, Luke!

Or:
"Likewise, I should exercise without wearing a smartwatch"

You should rely on your instincts!"

Feedback

Great post!

If it's that bad, maybe you can go "old school" and use an analogue stop-watch ⏱️

Good luck with your training. Not long to go now!

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heatedcanine

Oct. 10, 2024

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>In English, we often don't include the specific make/model of the product we are talking about. It can come across like you are trying to show-off.
Actually, I really wanted to show-off because it was rather expensive watch.
And some members on LangCorrect use the same watch.

>The use of the word "Fatal" is very dramatic! It makes it sounds like a matter of life and death.
Yeah, "fatal" is a figurative, exgeggerated, and funny expression to mean, "it would cause me a big trouble."
Actually it may include, overpacing that will cause me drop out, or I will really have a heart attack.
The smartwatch checks my running pace, heart rate, pitch, time, distance, oxygen saturation, stress level, ... everything!
Analogue stop-watches can't do that much.

Thank you for your corrections and comment!

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lummers

Oct. 10, 2024

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For the second point, you could maybe write something like:

"If (the) GPS doesn't work well and gives me the wrong information, it could be fatal; the device checks a range of data - overall pace, heart rate, oxygen saturation - which I use to avoid over-pacing to prevent something serious like a heart attack."

Concern Right Now Is The High Activity of Solar Flares Is The Main Concern Right Now

I'm gointending/planning to run in the Fukuoka Marathon in 30 days.

As the temperature has become lowdecreases further and lowfurther, it's much more conmfortable to run.

“It’s much more comfortable to run” works fine, but “running becomes more comfortable” might be better.

When I'm losing weight, it's very tough to run a long distance.

I feel as though I'm running out of battery.

I feel like I have hypoglycemia attacka fall in blood sugar levels.

Hypoglycemia isn’t really a commonly used word.

When I eat mucha lot, I can run longer distances, although I gain weight by 1-2 kilograms.

I need to lose more 10 kilograms more in order to get the aimed record, so it's a dillenemma and a challenge.

But I enjoy it.

I don't feel any knee pains or hip pains, and I think my mental and phsical health condition is rather good.

My biggest concern right now is the higher activity of the solar flares.

They say it affects the accuracy of GPS (Global Positioning System).

I totally rely on my excercise and races onusing the Garmin smartwatch, Forerunner 265.

Just Garmin Smartwatch is enough :)

If GPS doesn't work well and give me the wrong information of my running speed, distance, etc., it would be fataldangerous/bad.

Fatal means that you could die because of it. If that’s what you meant though, then ignore my correction.

For example, they say that I should practice running in the rain as the training in case of the rainy day official race.

Likewise, I shouldf I do my excercise without wearing the smartwatch, Yoda might say:
"Let go, Luke!

You should rely on your instinct!"

heatedcanine's avatar
heatedcanine

Oct. 10, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections and comment.

Yeah, "fatal" is a figurative, exgeggerated, and funny expression to mean, "it would cause me a big trouble."
Actually it may include, overpacing that will cause me drop out, or I will really have a heart attack.
The smartwatch checks my running pace, heart rate, pitch, time, distance, oxygen saturation, stress level, ... everything!

Concern Right Now Is The High Actvity of Solar Flares


Concern Right Now Is The High Activity of Solar Flares Is The Main Concern Right Now

Concern Right Now Is The Highs About The Increased Activity of Solar Flares

Concern Right Now Is The High Actvity ofed About the High Solar Flares Activity

I'm going to run in the Fukuoka Marathon in 30 days.


I'm gointending/planning to run in the Fukuoka Marathon in 30 days.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As the temperature has become lower and lower, it's much more confortable to run.


As the temperature has become lowdecreases further and lowfurther, it's much more conmfortable to run.

“It’s much more comfortable to run” works fine, but “running becomes more comfortable” might be better.

As the temperature has become lower and lower, it's much more confortable to run.

Original sentence is good! You could say: "As the temperature has started to drop, ..." or "As the temperature has started dropping, ..."

As the temperature has become lower and lower, it's much more conmfortable to run.

As the temperature has become lower and lower, it'sdecreases, running outside has gotten much more conmfortable to run.

When I'm losing weight, it's very tough to run a long distance.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I'mSince I'm actively losing weight, it's very tough to run a long distances.

Or: "I am losing weight and it's become very tough to run long distances"

Whilen I'm losing weight, it's very tough to run a long distances.

When I'm losinge weight, it's very tough to run arunning long distances.

I don't quite understand the connection. This makes it sound like you're intentionally losing weight to run long distances. I would say something like: "When I train for marathons, I have to make sure I eat enough. Otherwise, running long distances becomes a challenge."

I need to lose 10 kilograms more in order to get the aimed record, so it's a dillenma and a challenge.


I need to lose more 10 kilograms more in order to get the aimed record, so it's a dillenemma and a challenge.

I need to lose 10 kilograms more in order to get the aimed recordhit my target, so it's a dillenemma and a challenge.

Or: "I need to lose 10kg more in order to hit my personal best, ...."

I need to lose 10 more kilograms more in order to get the aimed record, so it's a dillenemma and a challenge.

sorry, i don't understand aimed record. i think you mean to be in the weight class you're aiming for?

I need to lose 10 kilograms more in order to get the aimed record, so it's a dillenma and a challengt's a dilemma and a challenge, because I need to lose 10 kilograms to achieve my target time.

But I enjoy it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't feel any knee pains or hip pains, and I think my mental and phsical health condition is rather good.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't feel any knee pains or hip pains, and I think my mental and physical health condition is rather good.

Or: "I don't feel any pain in my knees or hips, and I think my mental and physical health is rather good"

I don't feel any knee pains or hip pains, and I think my mental and physical health condition is rather good.

I don't feel any knee pains or hip pains, and I think my mental and physical health condition is rather good.

My biggest concern right now is the higher activity of the solar flares.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My biggest concern right now is the higherincreased activity of the solar flares.

My biggest concern right now is the higherincreased activity of the solar flares.

My biggest concern right now is the higherincreased activity of the solar flares.

They say it affects the accuracy of GPS (Global Positioning System).


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They say it affects theGPS accuracy of GPS (Global Positioning System).

I don't think you have to specify "global positioning system."

I totally rely on my excercise and races on Garmin smartwatch, Forerunner 265.


I totally rely on my excercise and races onusing the Garmin smartwatch, Forerunner 265.

Just Garmin Smartwatch is enough :)

I totally rely on my excercise and races on Garmin smartwatch, Forerunner 265Garmin Forerunner smartwatch during my training and races.

In English, we often don't include the specific make/model of the product we are talking about. It can come across like you are trying to show-off.

I totally rely on my excercise and races on Garmin smartwatch, a Forerunner 265, for my exercise and races.

sorry i don't understand is this what you meant?

I totally rely on myWhen I excercise and races onun races, I completely rely on my Garmin smartwatch, Forerunner 265.

If GPS doesn't work well and give me the wrong information of my running speed, distance, etc., it would be fatal.


If GPS doesn't work well and give me the wrong information of my running speed, distance, etc., it would be fataldangerous/bad.

Fatal means that you could die because of it. If that’s what you meant though, then ignore my correction.

If GPS doesn't work well and gives me the wrong information ofabout my running speed, distance, etc., it would be fatal.

The use of the word "Fatal" is very dramatic! It makes it sounds like a matter of life and death.

If the GPS doesn't work well and gives me the wrong information ofabout my running speed, distance, etc., it would be fataawful.

it would be fatal implies you would literally die because of incorrect information

If my GPS doesn't work well and give me the wrong information ofproperly and my running speed, distance, etc., are off, it would be fataldisastrous.

"fatal" means something that can kill you. We don't really use it to exaggerate. People will think you will die.

I feel as though I'm running out of battery.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I feel as though I'm running out of battery.

Nice sentence! You could take it even further and specify *when* you feel like this. For example: "After only 10km, I feel as though I'm running out of battery"

I feel as though I'm running out of battpower/energy.

I often feel as though I'm running out of battery.

I feel I have hypoglycemia attack.


I feel like I have hypoglycemia attacka fall in blood sugar levels.

Hypoglycemia isn’t really a commonly used word.

Sometimes, I feel I'm haveing a hypoglycemiac attack.

For this, I think you *need* to at least somewhat specify when you feel like this. Other suggestions: "If I push myself too hard, I feel like I'm having a hypoglycemic attack" or "If I push myself too hard, I feel like I might have a hypoglycemic attack" etc.

I feel IAs if I'm haveing hypoglycemia attack.

I feel I havet almost feels like a hypoglycemia attackc episode.

When I eat much, I can run longer distance, although I gain weight by 1-2 kilograms.


When I eat mucha lot, I can run longer distances, although I gain weight by 1-2 kilograms.

When I eat too much, I can run longer distances, although I gain weight by 1-2 kilograms in weight.

When I eat muchore, I can run longer distances, although I gain weight by 1-2 kilograms.

When I eat mucha lot, I can run longer distances, although I gain weight bybut I gain 1-2 kilograms.

For example, they say that I should practice running in the rain as the training in case of the rainy day official race.


For example, they say that I should practice running in the rain as the training in case of the rainy day official race.

For example, they say event organizers suggest that I should practice running in the rain, as thit may be training in case of the rainy dayon the official race day.

Who is "they"?

For example, they say that I should practice running in the rain as the training in case of the rainy dayrainy weather during the official race.

For example, they say thatmany people say I should practice running in the rain as the training in casein case it rains ofn the rainy day officialday of the race.

Likewise, I should do my excercise without wearing the smartwatch, Yoda might say: "Let go, Luke!


Likewise, I shouldf I do my excercise without wearing the smartwatch, Yoda might say:
"Let go, Luke!

Likewise, I should do my excercisetraining without wearing thea smartwatch, Yoda might say: . In the words of Yoda,
"Let go, Luke!

Or: "Likewise, I should exercise without wearing a smartwatch"

Likewise, I should do my excercise without wearing the smartwatch,. As Yoda might say:
"Let go, Luke!

Likewise, I should do my excercise without wearing themy smartwatch,. Yoda might say:
"Let go, Luke!

You should rely on your instinct!"


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You should rely on your instincts!"

You should rely on your instincts!"

You should rRely on your instinct, you should!"

This is how Yoda would really talk, haha

When I eat much, I can run longer distance.


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