Oct. 22, 2020
Concentration of Co2 in the ocean
Ocean researchers developed carbon dioxide sensors and placed them across the planet. Last 30 years, these sensors detected the continuous increase of carbon dioxide in the ocean. The rise of Co2 concentration may harm marine life in many ways.
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In general, it's best to introduce the full term (Carbon Dioxide) before abbreviating it.
Ocean researchers developed carbon dioxide sensors and placed them across the planet.
LOver the last 30 years, these sensors have detected thea continuous increase of carbon dioxide levels in the ocean.
Could also be "in the last 30 years," but your sentence is showing progression over time, and "over" helps to convey a progression over time.
To be extremely technical, it's not that CO2 is increasing, but that the level of CO2 is increasing, so I added the word "level." You could also use some other term such as "amount" (e.g., "increase of the amount of carbon dioxide in the ocean") or "concentration" like you used in the next sentence (e.g., "increase in the concentration of carbon dioxide in the ocean").
The rise of Cothe CO2 concentration may harm marine life in many ways.
Concentration of Co2 in the oOcean
Ocean researchers developed carbon dioxide sensors and placed them across the planet.
Lin the last 30 years, these sensors have detected the continuous increase of carbon dioxide in the ocean.
The rise ofing Co2 concentration may harm marine life in many ways.
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Concentration of Co2 in the ocean
Ocean researchers developed carbon dioxide sensors and placed them across the planet.
LIn the last 30 years, these sensors detected the continuous increase of carbon dioxide in the ocean.
The rise of Co2in the concentration of CO2 may harm marine life in many ways.
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Last 30 years, these sensors detected the continuous increase of carbon dioxide in the ocean.
Could also be "in the last 30 years," but your sentence is showing progression over time, and "over" helps to convey a progression over time. To be extremely technical, it's not that CO2 is increasing, but that the level of CO2 is increasing, so I added the word "level." You could also use some other term such as "amount" (e.g., "increase of the amount of carbon dioxide in the ocean") or "concentration" like you used in the next sentence (e.g., "increase in the concentration of carbon dioxide in the ocean"). |
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