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Computers is life now in the moment of today.

If we want to admit is good, but if not it don't matter. The world changed the day because of the virus we all moved to the lockdown and the computer use became essentially. I which to convincing you to improvement your technological abilities because if you only know to tik tok and to facebooks, you are in the past. In my case, I am always been liking to type my words in the keys of the computer, but with the advent of the virus of Covid all peoples are not touching the keys for communications with all the peoples, and no matter what she says, all the people have the need to push the keys now. before was something to choice from, but in the moments of the living of today nobody gives us choose, or you type on the computer or you are out. In these journal I will to tell you the reasons all the people needs resistance for the use of computers so much if she wants too perserve a pinch of what life it was before in the years ago prior to the Covid pandemic.

First off all the computer connect you to the web and to the rest of the worked if that is what you what, and that is fine, but it also open many doors that takes you to others pages that are not in the interest of what you are doing at the moment only to exacerbate your distractions to endless loops of time wastings that never end. in the workplace for example you can talked to your workers friends for a tiny moment but at the point of some time you should to came back to your obligations for not to get scolded from the master of the company. So you had the leader always on your top to command you to continues to the work if the wastings of time is too many so you never shoulve had to many times for wasting or you had the consequences that came along with it, so you became more productvity to the company and to the other employees. Those is not the case today, becaues in the sanctity of the house, you can give love to the plants in the garden, or have enjoys with the pets when they came to chew to your feet to get feed, or if tiring go to the bed to sleep for minutes and you go back to the screen when you wants not when you haves. This new modality is making the humans evolve to least production makers which to the peoples is never a good idea for all needs to be productive and the companies no can have peoples which do not has compenetrations with the task.

Now in this moments let's us to made connections to the realities of the pupils who now connection and reception the classes on the online Internet modality. To many pupils have becoming much productive with the use of the computer and now personalization the class and materials they use for to learn the class well, but on the other hand exist other pupils who now are becoming more laziness to extremes. Let's us to talking about the latter. The reason for the situation I talk to you in actuality may derive from a multitude of factors like because they haven't no supervisions from the parents, or they acting like the online modality is the apocalypse, but no apocalypse of the religious way, but the zombie way, and because of this they feel life is over and no responsability is necessary so cheating and cheaters has becoming the new way, and with no shame they get hundreds in all activities and they say all people cheating now, so why not me, and all people in the families may also to say if all people cheat, my boy and girl can to cheat too. In some others cases the situation for the laziness may to be depression or to the feeling that the world is ending, and also may to be too that the families are experimenting domestic difficulties and economical stress and with much inevitability the pupil suffer too the effect of the butterfly and reacts with a demonstration for the lazy way and do not work on nothing, shuts off the camera, and always has bad internet in the house, and the electricity never functions. Now to the first. Another version of pupil is also evident. the pupil who is smart and has no time to waste and listen to ridiculous non sensical chit chat but she who wish to be the pupil of the Cum Laude now is full of freedom. She use the time is manners which is wise, and complete all the tasks before to the end of the period, and consults sources that are full of reliability, and do not fall behind in nothing, and now she feels that nobody is pulling her on the shoulders to spend bad her time, and she likes. She now have more productivity because she no travels in the bus, neither never suffers the asphyxiations of traffic in the capital, and because she no has to get out of the bed before the light of sky is visible, she now has breakfast in the house and all this sums to the better experience she has now.


After to have give you all the reasons important for the use of the computers in the nowadays, it is with no doubtings that you now can agree that the use of computers in the work or school is mandatory today, and if you are a person who knows not to use one you are out of the new world. You now are in the past, the century is 21, but you are in the 20. Obsolete you are because no can function in the school and in the work, and the life is not giving opportunities if you do not engage correct to the internet to do you performance in the correct way. If you are of the ones people who still needs brush up on the technology, you must to do it now, because it will be to late.

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Computers is are life now in the moment of today.

If we want to admit (insert the thing that's good) is good, but if not it doesn't matter.

admit what is good?

The world changed the dayour lives because of the virus we all moved to the lockdown and thewent into lockdown. Because of this, computer use became essentially.

I whichant to convincinge you to improvement your technological abilities, because if you only know to tik tabout TikTok and to fFacebooks, you are in the past.

Company names need to be capitalized.

In my case, I am always been likingliked to type my words ion thea keys of the computerboard, but with the advent of the virus of Covid all peoples areCovid 19 virus. Everyone who is not touchyping the keys foro communicationse with all the peopleothers, and no matter what sthey says, all the people have the need to push the keys noweveryone has to type.

I think you meant to write "they" instead of "she".

before there was something to choicose from, but in the moments of the living of today, nobody gives us chooseices, or you type on the computer or you are out.

What do you mean by "or you type on the computer or you are out."?

In theseis journal I will to tell you the reasons all the peopleveryone needs to resistance for the use of using computers so much i. If sthey wants too pereserve a pinch of what life it was like before in the years ago prior to the Covid pandemic.

Again, I think you meant to write "they" instead of "she".

First off all the, computers connect you to the web and to the rest of the workeld if that is what you what, andant: that is fine, but it also opens many doors that takes you to others pages that are not in the interest of what you are doing at the moment onlyyour best interest. These other webpages only exist to exacerbate your distractions to endless loops of time wastings that never ends.

in the workplace, for example, you can talked to your co-workers and friends for a tiny moment but at the point ofbit, but after some time you should to camego back to your obligations for not to get scolded from the master of the companywork or else you will get scolded by your supervisor, or someone higher up.

So you had the leader always on your top to command you to continues to the work if thThe leader is there to command what you should continue working on if you're wastings of time is too many so you never shoulve had to many times for wasting or you haduch you will experience the consequences that caome along with it, so. Because of that, you becaome more productvity to the company and to the other employeesive when working.

Here's a tip, use 'Much' with uncountable nouns and 'Many' with countable nouns.

Thoseat is not the case today, becaues in the sanctity of these when entering your house, you can givefeel the sanctity, this makes it possible to love to the plants in the garden, or have enjoys time with the pets when they caome toand chew ton your feet to get feed, or if tiringyou're tired, go to the bed to sleep for a few minutes and you can go back to the screen when you wants to, not when you haves to.

What do you mean by "to the screen"?

This new modality is making the humans evolve to at the very least, production makers, which to the peoples is never a good idea for all. Since this means everyone needs to be productive and the companies no can have peoples which do not hasve compenetrlications with the task.

I don't know what "production makers" are.

Now in this moments let's us to madke connections to the realities of the pupils who now connection and reception the classes on the online Internet modalitywith our pupils who now connect to get to classes.

To mMany pupils have becoming muche more productive with the use of the computers, and now personalization thein class and learning materials they use for to learn the class well, but on the other hand exist, other pupils whoare now are becoming more laziness to, bringing it to the extremes.

Let's us to talkings talke about the latter.

The reasons for the situation I talk to youto unfold like this is because; in actuality it may derive from a multitude of factors like because theystudents haven't no supervisions from their parents, or they're acting like the online modality is there is an apocalypse, but not an apocalypse of the religious way, but the zombie way, and bapocalypse in a way. Because of this, they feel life is over and no responsaibility is necessary so cheating and cheaters hais becoming the new way, and. This results in cheaters with no shame as they get one hundreds in all activities and they say all peopl percent in all their work. Some say that everyone cheatings now, so why not me, and all people in the. Because of this, families may also to say, if all peopleveryone cheats, my boy and girlchildren can to cheat too.

In some others cases the situation for thecause for laziness may to be because of depression or to the feeling that the world is ending, and also may to be too that the. In addition, families are experimentcing domestic difficulties and economical stress and with much inevitability the pupil suffer too the effect of the butterfly and reacts with a demonstration for the lazy way and do not work on, it is inevitable that the student suffer. Examples of how someone can continue to be lazy includes; doing nothing, shutsturning off their camera, and always has bad internet making the house, and the electricity never functionsexcuse of having bad internet.

I am not sure how the butterfly effect relates to this. Last two points I think were redundant.

Now to the first.

No idea what you mean.

Another version of pupil is also evident.

Again, have no idea what you mean.

tThe pupilstudent who is smart and has no time to waste and listen to ridiculous non sensical chit chat but shthey are one who wishes to be the pupil of the Cum Laude now is full of freedom.

Again, did you mean to say they insead of she?

No idea what this means ""

She uses the time isn a manners which is wise, and completes all their tasks before to the end of the periodhe due date, and consults sources that are full of reliability, andreliable. They also do not fall behind in noanything, and now sthey feels that nobody is pulling her on the shoulders to spend bad her time, and she likes great, and likes how nobody is being a bad influence.

She now haves more productivity because she no longer travels in the bus, neither never suffers the asphyxiations of traffic in the capital, and because she no has to getnot gotten out of the bed before the light of sky is visible, she nowcan hasve breakfast in the house and all this, this all sums to the better experience she has now.

At this point I'm starting to think you meant to type she, but the thing is, why didn't you use "she" at the start?

After to have givegiving you all the reasons it is important for the use of thus to use computers in the nowadays, it is with no doubtings that you now can agree that the use of computers in the work orand school is mandatory today, and i. If you are a person who knows notdoes not know how to use one, you are out of the new world.

You now areare now in the past,; the century is 21, but you are in the 20.

Obsolete you are because noYou are obsolete if you cannot function in the school and in the work, and the lor at work. Life is not giving opportunities, if you do not engage correct to the internet to do you performance in the correct use the internet your letting so many opportunities go away.

If you are one of the ones people who still needs to brush up on the technologyical abilities, you must to do it now, becauor else it will be too late.

Feedback

You seem to be struggling in terms of adding "the" to some nouns and verbs that don't need the article. You should also review the present tense.

Computers is life now in the moment of today.


Computers is are life now in the moment of today.

If we want to admit is good, but if not it don't matter.


If we want to admit (insert the thing that's good) is good, but if not it doesn't matter.

admit what is good?

The world changed the day because of the virus we all moved to the lockdown and the computer use became essentially.


The world changed the dayour lives because of the virus we all moved to the lockdown and thewent into lockdown. Because of this, computer use became essentially.

I which to convincing you to improvement your technological abilities because if you only know to tik tok and to facebooks, you are in the past.


I whichant to convincinge you to improvement your technological abilities, because if you only know to tik tabout TikTok and to fFacebooks, you are in the past.

Company names need to be capitalized.

In my case, I am always been liking to type my words in the keys of the computer, but with the advent of the virus of Covid all peoples are not touching the keys for communications with all the peoples, and no matter what she says, all the people have the need to push the keys now.


In my case, I am always been likingliked to type my words ion thea keys of the computerboard, but with the advent of the virus of Covid all peoples areCovid 19 virus. Everyone who is not touchyping the keys foro communicationse with all the peopleothers, and no matter what sthey says, all the people have the need to push the keys noweveryone has to type.

I think you meant to write "they" instead of "she".

before was something to choice from, but in the moments of the living of today nobody gives us choose, or you type on the computer or you are out.


before there was something to choicose from, but in the moments of the living of today, nobody gives us chooseices, or you type on the computer or you are out.

What do you mean by "or you type on the computer or you are out."?

In these journal I will to tell you the reasons all the people needs resistance for the use of computers so much if she wants too perserve a pinch of what life it was before in the years ago prior to the Covid pandemic.


In theseis journal I will to tell you the reasons all the peopleveryone needs to resistance for the use of using computers so much i. If sthey wants too pereserve a pinch of what life it was like before in the years ago prior to the Covid pandemic.

Again, I think you meant to write "they" instead of "she".

First off all the computer connect you to the web and to the rest of the worked if that is what you what, and that is fine, but it also open many doors that takes you to others pages that are not in the interest of what you are doing at the moment only to exacerbate your distractions to endless loops of time wastings that never end.


First off all the, computers connect you to the web and to the rest of the workeld if that is what you what, andant: that is fine, but it also opens many doors that takes you to others pages that are not in the interest of what you are doing at the moment onlyyour best interest. These other webpages only exist to exacerbate your distractions to endless loops of time wastings that never ends.

in the workplace for example you can talked to your workers friends for a tiny moment but at the point of some time you should to came back to your obligations for not to get scolded from the master of the company.


in the workplace, for example, you can talked to your co-workers and friends for a tiny moment but at the point ofbit, but after some time you should to camego back to your obligations for not to get scolded from the master of the companywork or else you will get scolded by your supervisor, or someone higher up.

So you had the leader always on your top to command you to continues to the work if the wastings of time is too many so you never shoulve had to many times for wasting or you had the consequences that came along with it, so you became more productvity to the company and to the other employees.


So you had the leader always on your top to command you to continues to the work if thThe leader is there to command what you should continue working on if you're wastings of time is too many so you never shoulve had to many times for wasting or you haduch you will experience the consequences that caome along with it, so. Because of that, you becaome more productvity to the company and to the other employeesive when working.

Here's a tip, use 'Much' with uncountable nouns and 'Many' with countable nouns.

Those is not the case today, becaues in the sanctity of the house, you can give love to the plants in the garden, or have enjoys with the pets when they came to chew to your feet to get feed, or if tiring go to the bed to sleep for minutes and you go back to the screen when you wants not when you haves.


Thoseat is not the case today, becaues in the sanctity of these when entering your house, you can givefeel the sanctity, this makes it possible to love to the plants in the garden, or have enjoys time with the pets when they caome toand chew ton your feet to get feed, or if tiringyou're tired, go to the bed to sleep for a few minutes and you can go back to the screen when you wants to, not when you haves to.

What do you mean by "to the screen"?

This new modality is making the humans evolve to least production makers which to the peoples is never a good idea for all needs to be productive and the companies no can have peoples which do not has compenetrations with the task.


This new modality is making the humans evolve to at the very least, production makers, which to the peoples is never a good idea for all. Since this means everyone needs to be productive and the companies no can have peoples which do not hasve compenetrlications with the task.

I don't know what "production makers" are.

Now in this moments let's us to made connections to the realities of the pupils who now connection and reception the classes on the online Internet modality.


Now in this moments let's us to madke connections to the realities of the pupils who now connection and reception the classes on the online Internet modalitywith our pupils who now connect to get to classes.

To many pupils have becoming much productive with the use of the computer and now personalization the class and materials they use for to learn the class well, but on the other hand exist other pupils who now are becoming more laziness to extremes.


To mMany pupils have becoming muche more productive with the use of the computers, and now personalization thein class and learning materials they use for to learn the class well, but on the other hand exist, other pupils whoare now are becoming more laziness to, bringing it to the extremes.

Let's us to talking about the latter.


Let's us to talkings talke about the latter.

The reason for the situation I talk to you in actuality may derive from a multitude of factors like because they haven't no supervisions from the parents, or they acting like the online modality is the apocalypse, but no apocalypse of the religious way, but the zombie way, and because of this they feel life is over and no responsability is necessary so cheating and cheaters has becoming the new way, and with no shame they get hundreds in all activities and they say all people cheating now, so why not me, and all people in the families may also to say if all people cheat, my boy and girl can to cheat too.


The reasons for the situation I talk to youto unfold like this is because; in actuality it may derive from a multitude of factors like because theystudents haven't no supervisions from their parents, or they're acting like the online modality is there is an apocalypse, but not an apocalypse of the religious way, but the zombie way, and bapocalypse in a way. Because of this, they feel life is over and no responsaibility is necessary so cheating and cheaters hais becoming the new way, and. This results in cheaters with no shame as they get one hundreds in all activities and they say all peopl percent in all their work. Some say that everyone cheatings now, so why not me, and all people in the. Because of this, families may also to say, if all peopleveryone cheats, my boy and girlchildren can to cheat too.

In some others cases the situation for the laziness may to be depression or to the feeling that the world is ending, and also may to be too that the families are experimenting domestic difficulties and economical stress and with much inevitability the pupil suffer too the effect of the butterfly and reacts with a demonstration for the lazy way and do not work on nothing, shuts off the camera, and always has bad internet in the house, and the electricity never functions.


In some others cases the situation for thecause for laziness may to be because of depression or to the feeling that the world is ending, and also may to be too that the. In addition, families are experimentcing domestic difficulties and economical stress and with much inevitability the pupil suffer too the effect of the butterfly and reacts with a demonstration for the lazy way and do not work on, it is inevitable that the student suffer. Examples of how someone can continue to be lazy includes; doing nothing, shutsturning off their camera, and always has bad internet making the house, and the electricity never functionsexcuse of having bad internet.

I am not sure how the butterfly effect relates to this. Last two points I think were redundant.

Now to the first.


Now to the first.

No idea what you mean.

Another version of pupil is also evident.


Another version of pupil is also evident.

Again, have no idea what you mean.

the pupil who is smart and has no time to waste and listen to ridiculous non sensical chit chat but she who wish to be the pupil of the Cum Laude now is full of freedom.


tThe pupilstudent who is smart and has no time to waste and listen to ridiculous non sensical chit chat but shthey are one who wishes to be the pupil of the Cum Laude now is full of freedom.

Again, did you mean to say they insead of she? No idea what this means ""

She use the time is manners which is wise, and complete all the tasks before to the end of the period, and consults sources that are full of reliability, and do not fall behind in nothing, and now she feels that nobody is pulling her on the shoulders to spend bad her time, and she likes.


She uses the time isn a manners which is wise, and completes all their tasks before to the end of the periodhe due date, and consults sources that are full of reliability, andreliable. They also do not fall behind in noanything, and now sthey feels that nobody is pulling her on the shoulders to spend bad her time, and she likes great, and likes how nobody is being a bad influence.

She now have more productivity because she no travels in the bus, neither never suffers the asphyxiations of traffic in the capital, and because she no has to get out of the bed before the light of sky is visible, she now has breakfast in the house and all this sums to the better experience she has now.


She now haves more productivity because she no longer travels in the bus, neither never suffers the asphyxiations of traffic in the capital, and because she no has to getnot gotten out of the bed before the light of sky is visible, she nowcan hasve breakfast in the house and all this, this all sums to the better experience she has now.

At this point I'm starting to think you meant to type she, but the thing is, why didn't you use "she" at the start?

After to have give you all the reasons important for the use of the computers in the nowadays, it is with no doubtings that you now can agree that the use of computers in the work or school is mandatory today, and if you are a person who knows not to use one you are out of the new world.


After to have givegiving you all the reasons it is important for the use of thus to use computers in the nowadays, it is with no doubtings that you now can agree that the use of computers in the work orand school is mandatory today, and i. If you are a person who knows notdoes not know how to use one, you are out of the new world.

You now are in the past, the century is 21, but you are in the 20.


You now areare now in the past,; the century is 21, but you are in the 20.

Obsolete you are because no can function in the school and in the work, and the life is not giving opportunities if you do not engage correct to the internet to do you performance in the correct way.


Obsolete you are because noYou are obsolete if you cannot function in the school and in the work, and the lor at work. Life is not giving opportunities, if you do not engage correct to the internet to do you performance in the correct use the internet your letting so many opportunities go away.

If you are of the ones people who still needs brush up on the technology, you must to do it now, because it will be to late.


If you are one of the ones people who still needs to brush up on the technologyical abilities, you must to do it now, becauor else it will be too late.

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