kiwy's avatar
kiwy

Aug. 27, 2021

0
Complicated

I had a jazz drums lesson in the afternoon and learn sometbing new.
Then I went swimming at 19:30 tonight. It was fewer people than yesterday, so I could swam freely. I have swam 70 minutes, so I was very happy. Water in the pool was a little dirty, but I could still see the shadow of lights on the bottom of the pool. It looked like geometry patterns.
When I came home, I got a bad news of my job. I hadn't been thoughtful, so I thought I did have a choice, but it didn't. So I have to try my best to correct it. Wish I am doing well.

Corrections
0

Complicated

I had a jazz drums lessons in the afternoon and learned sometbhing new.

Then I went swimming at 197:30 tonighthis evening.

English speakers seldom use 24 hour time, and rather add "am/pm" or extra context to say morning vs. evening.

It wasThere were fewer people than yesterday, so I could swaim freely.

I have swam 70 minutes, so Iand was very happy with that.

Water in the pool was a little dirty, but I could still see the shadow of lights on the bottom of the pool.

ItThey looked like geometryic patterns.

When I came home, I got a bad news ofabout my job.

I hadn't been thoughtful, so I thought I did havehad a choice, but itI didn't.

It is unclear exactly what is being said here, but I have tried to correct the grammar a bit.

So I have to try my best to correct it.

WishI hope I am doing well.

kiwy's avatar
kiwy

Aug. 28, 2021

0

Thank you.

Complicated


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I had a jazz drums lesson in the afternoon and learn sometbing new.


I had a jazz drums lessons in the afternoon and learned sometbhing new.

Then I went swimming at 19:30 tonight.


Then I went swimming at 197:30 tonighthis evening.

English speakers seldom use 24 hour time, and rather add "am/pm" or extra context to say morning vs. evening.

It was fewer people than yesterday, so I could swam freely.


It wasThere were fewer people than yesterday, so I could swaim freely.

I have swam 70 minutes, so I was very happy.


I have swam 70 minutes, so Iand was very happy with that.

Water in the pool was a little dirty, but I could still see the shadow of lights on the bottom of the pool.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It looked like geometry patterns.


ItThey looked like geometryic patterns.

When I came home, I got a bad news of my job.


When I came home, I got a bad news ofabout my job.

I hadn't been thoughtful, so I thought I did have a choice, but it didn't.


I hadn't been thoughtful, so I thought I did havehad a choice, but itI didn't.

It is unclear exactly what is being said here, but I have tried to correct the grammar a bit.

So I have to try my best to correct it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Wish I am doing well.


WishI hope I am doing well.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium