Aug. 27, 2021
I had a jazz drums lesson in the afternoon and learn sometbing new.
Then I went swimming at 19:30 tonight. It was fewer people than yesterday, so I could swam freely. I have swam 70 minutes, so I was very happy. Water in the pool was a little dirty, but I could still see the shadow of lights on the bottom of the pool. It looked like geometry patterns.
When I came home, I got a bad news of my job. I hadn't been thoughtful, so I thought I did have a choice, but it didn't. So I have to try my best to correct it. Wish I am doing well.
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It is unclear exactly what is being said here, but I have tried to correct the grammar a bit.
So I have to try my best to correct it.
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I had a jazz drums lesson in the afternoon and learn sometbing new. I had |
Then I went swimming at 19:30 tonight. Then I went swimming at English speakers seldom use 24 hour time, and rather add "am/pm" or extra context to say morning vs. evening. |
It was fewer people than yesterday, so I could swam freely.
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I have swam 70 minutes, so I was very happy. I |
Water in the pool was a little dirty, but I could still see the shadow of lights on the bottom of the pool. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
It looked like geometry patterns.
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When I came home, I got a bad news of my job. When I came home, I got a bad news |
I hadn't been thoughtful, so I thought I did have a choice, but it didn't. I hadn't been thoughtful, so I thought I It is unclear exactly what is being said here, but I have tried to correct the grammar a bit. |
So I have to try my best to correct it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Wish I am doing well.
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