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Jan. 22, 2023

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Compensation

Government compensated purchase power loos of working class by increasing the minimum wage to 850 USD because the inflation is hiking and people’s purchase power are going down. It means we, Bureo Veristas’ employees, lose purchase power too. I pay 65% of my salary for rent+heating. I am paid just 70 USD more than the minimum wage but I took on 100.000 USD responsibility 2 day ago, on behalf of Veristas. I always do the my best for Veristas and I express with all my heart that you may supersede me with anybody who may accept the same salary+car+fuel if you really think anybody can take on this role with same or cheaper cost. You are owner of the company and intend to make cost saving on our salaries. I understand your concern.

The government raises the minimum wage by net amount, but you grant us gross amount. For example, if the minimum wage is hiked 30% net, but we are given 30% gross which corresponds to 22%-25%, in this case the gap between minimum wage and our salaries is closed. The minimum wage is paid for only unqualified or newly graduated employees.

Merry and Jason asked me to convey you following issues;
• Do you mind if we explains what we suffer in Georgia to Applus Corporate? Because they don’t understand what is going on in Turkey. We explains this issue better.
• In 2016 and 2020, no salary increment were made. This is another reason closing the gap between minimum wage and other salaries. Can you compensate these years?
• We cannot focus on our job because we think of how to cover our expenses. This reduces our performance.

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GThe government compensated purchase power loos of working class by increasing the minimum wage to 850 USD because the inflation is hiking and people’s purchase power are going downis helping the working class fight inflation by increasing the minimum wage to 850 USD.

It means that we, Bureo Veristas employees, are loseing purchaseing power, too.

I pay 65% of my salary for rent+Sixty-five percent of my salary goes to rent and paying for heating.

I am paid just $70 USD more than the minimum wage, but I took on 100.000 USD responsibilityloan 2 day ago, on behalf of Veristas.

I always do the my best for Veristas and I express with all my heart that you may supersede me with anybody who may accept the same salary+car+fuel if you really think anybodyacknowledge that they may replace me with anybody who can take on this role wiand do the same wor cheaper costk for less pay.

You are owner of the company and intend to make cost saving on ouThe company will always try to minimize their expenses by paying lower salaries.

I understand youtheir concern.

The government raises the minimum wage by net amount, but youthe company grants us a gross amount.

For example, if the minimum wage is hiked 30% net, butincreased by a net 30%, we are given a 30% gross increase which corresponds to 22%-25%, i. In this case the gap between minimum wage and our salaries is closed.

The minimum wage is paid for onlyonly paid to unqualified or newly graduated employees.

Merry and Jason asked me to conveydiscuss with you following issues;

• Do you mind if we explains whato we suffers in Georgia to Applus Corporate?

Because they don’t understand what is going on in Turkey.

• We cannot focus on our job because we have think of how to cover our expenses.

GThe government compensatedincreased the purchaseing power loos ofof the working class by increasing the minimum wage to 850 USD, mainly because the inflation is hiking and people’s purchaseing power are going down.

Use the article "the" for most nouns like "government" "purchasing power" and "working class"
Most abstract nouns like "inflation" "love" "justice" don't require an article

It means we, Bureo Veristas’ employees, lose purchaseing power too.

I pay 65% of my salary for rent+goes towards rent and heating.

It's easier to focus on the salary as the main subject.
"goes towards" is a more informal and stylistic way of saying "pay for"

I am paid just 70 USD more than the minimum wage but I took on 100.000 USD responsibility(debt?) 2 day ago, on behalf of Veristas.

I don't know what "responsibility" is referring to

I always do the my best for Veristas and I expressmean with all my heart that you may supersedcan replace me with anybody who may accept the same salary+, car+, and fuel if you really think anybodthey can take on this role with the same or cheaper costrates.

"To mean with all your heart" is the expression
Supersede is too formal
"costs" when it comes to employee salary usually uses "rates", like "hourly rates"

You are the owner of the company and intend to make costa profit by saving on our salaries.

make a profit BY
cost doesn't really make sense for the context. Do you mean profit?

The government raises the minimum wage by net amount, but you grant us gross amount.

For example, if the minimum wage is hiked 30% net, but we are given 30% gross which corresponds to 22%-25%, in this case the gap between minimum wage and our salaries is closed.

The minimum wage is paid forto only unqualified or newly graduated employees.

Paid to: to direct pay at a person
Pay for: usually material costs

Merry and Jason asked me to convey you the following issues;

• Do you mind if we explains what (we suffered/ are suffering) in Georgia to Applus Corporate?

Don't know if this suffering is in the past or is ongoing right now, in which case use past tense or present tense at your discretion

Because they don’t understand what is going on in Turkey.

We will explains this issue better.

You have not began explaining by the point of this sentence-- use future tense

• In 2016 and 2020, no salary incrementraises were made.

This is another reason that is closing the gap between minimum wage and other salaries.

Can you compensate us for these years?

indicate who is being compensated
and compensate for a reason

• We cannot focus on our job because we think of how toinstead think about how we can cover our expenses.

This reduces our performance.

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I'm not sure if this is a draft of a letter to your supervisor or not. In which case... good luck? Writing about economics is difficult but you managed a good job

Compensation


Government compensated purchase power loos of working class by increasing the minimum wage to 850 USD because the inflation is hiking and people’s purchase power are going down.


GThe government compensatedincreased the purchaseing power loos ofof the working class by increasing the minimum wage to 850 USD, mainly because the inflation is hiking and people’s purchaseing power are going down.

Use the article "the" for most nouns like "government" "purchasing power" and "working class" Most abstract nouns like "inflation" "love" "justice" don't require an article

GThe government compensated purchase power loos of working class by increasing the minimum wage to 850 USD because the inflation is hiking and people’s purchase power are going downis helping the working class fight inflation by increasing the minimum wage to 850 USD.

It means we, Bureo Veristas’ employees, lose purchase power too.


It means we, Bureo Veristas’ employees, lose purchaseing power too.

It means that we, Bureo Veristas employees, are loseing purchaseing power, too.

I pay 65% of my salary for rent+heating.


I pay 65% of my salary for rent+goes towards rent and heating.

It's easier to focus on the salary as the main subject. "goes towards" is a more informal and stylistic way of saying "pay for"

I pay 65% of my salary for rent+Sixty-five percent of my salary goes to rent and paying for heating.

I am paid just 70 USD more than the minimum wage but I took on 100.000 USD responsibility 2 day ago, on behalf of Veristas.


I am paid just 70 USD more than the minimum wage but I took on 100.000 USD responsibility(debt?) 2 day ago, on behalf of Veristas.

I don't know what "responsibility" is referring to

I am paid just $70 USD more than the minimum wage, but I took on 100.000 USD responsibilityloan 2 day ago, on behalf of Veristas.

I always do the my best for Veristas and I express with all my heart that you may supersede me with anybody who may accept the same salary+car+fuel if you really think anybody can take on this role with same or cheaper cost.


I always do the my best for Veristas and I expressmean with all my heart that you may supersedcan replace me with anybody who may accept the same salary+, car+, and fuel if you really think anybodthey can take on this role with the same or cheaper costrates.

"To mean with all your heart" is the expression Supersede is too formal "costs" when it comes to employee salary usually uses "rates", like "hourly rates"

I always do the my best for Veristas and I express with all my heart that you may supersede me with anybody who may accept the same salary+car+fuel if you really think anybodyacknowledge that they may replace me with anybody who can take on this role wiand do the same wor cheaper costk for less pay.

You are owner of the company and intend to make cost saving on our salaries.


You are the owner of the company and intend to make costa profit by saving on our salaries.

make a profit BY cost doesn't really make sense for the context. Do you mean profit?

You are owner of the company and intend to make cost saving on ouThe company will always try to minimize their expenses by paying lower salaries.

I understand your concern.


I understand youtheir concern.

The government raises the minimum wage by net amount, but you grant us gross amount.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The government raises the minimum wage by net amount, but youthe company grants us a gross amount.

For example, if the minimum wage is hiked 30% net, but we are given 30% gross which corresponds to 22%-25%, in this case the gap between minimum wage and our salaries is closed.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For example, if the minimum wage is hiked 30% net, butincreased by a net 30%, we are given a 30% gross increase which corresponds to 22%-25%, i. In this case the gap between minimum wage and our salaries is closed.

The minimum wage is paid for only unqualified or newly graduated employees.


The minimum wage is paid forto only unqualified or newly graduated employees.

Paid to: to direct pay at a person Pay for: usually material costs

The minimum wage is paid for onlyonly paid to unqualified or newly graduated employees.

Merry and Jason asked me to convey you following issues;


Merry and Jason asked me to convey you the following issues;

Merry and Jason asked me to conveydiscuss with you following issues;

• Do you mind if we explains what we suffer in Georgia to Applus Corporate?


• Do you mind if we explains what (we suffered/ are suffering) in Georgia to Applus Corporate?

Don't know if this suffering is in the past or is ongoing right now, in which case use past tense or present tense at your discretion

• Do you mind if we explains whato we suffers in Georgia to Applus Corporate?

Because they don’t understand what is going on in Turkey.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We explains this issue better.


We will explains this issue better.

You have not began explaining by the point of this sentence-- use future tense

• In 2016 and 2020, no salary increment were made.


• In 2016 and 2020, no salary incrementraises were made.

This is another reason closing the gap between minimum wage and other salaries.


This is another reason that is closing the gap between minimum wage and other salaries.

Can you compensate these years?


Can you compensate us for these years?

indicate who is being compensated and compensate for a reason

• We cannot focus on our job because we think of how to cover our expenses.


• We cannot focus on our job because we think of how toinstead think about how we can cover our expenses.

• We cannot focus on our job because we have think of how to cover our expenses.

This reduces our performance.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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