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In English, the nouns, adverbs, pronouns, verbs, etc, are all capitalized in titles.

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"Cannot" is often written as "can't".

1. (oOne of mMy fFriend's)

This doesn't really make sense.

PThe percentage of people who are satisfied with themselves is 46% in Japan, and 86% in the United States.

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"Are satisfied with themselves", (right after "in Japan"), is technically correct but kind of repetitive and unnecessary.

IOn the contraryflip side, I think that in American, people are so positive and confident of themselves and positive, so the percentage is high compared with the scores of Japanese people.

"On the contrary" I feel is more often used in discussions or arguments with someone.

2. (mMine)

According to the survey, the number of people who want to be useful for mytheir country is larger in Japan than in the U.S. I think that this shows the difference of characteristics between the two.

Japanese are said to put the emphasis on groups.

They are not willing to make argumentsargue because it disturbs the atmosphere.

"They are" is commonly written as "They're".

ComparativelyHowever, Americans are said to put the emphasis onze the individuals.

They will not hesitate to go against the others, because they have a right to do so, and a want to do so.

"Will not" is commonly written as "won't".

I think this difference madeat this led to the different scores oin the survey.

It shows that many people it in the U.S. are satisfied with themselves but much fewer people in Japan are satisfied with themselves thatn in the U.S. I think Japanese people are so modest and want to improve themselves, so the percentage is lower compared with American people.

IOn the contrary, I think American people are so confident of themselves and positive so the percentage is higher compared with Japanese people.

According to the survey, the number of people who want to be useful for my countryin Japan is larger in Japan than in the U.S. I think this shows the difference of characteristics between the two.

They are not willing to make arguments because it disturbs the atmosphere.

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1. (one of my friend's)

PThe percentage of people who are satisfied with themselves is 46% in Japan, and 86% in the United States.

ItThis shows that many people it in the U.S. are satisfied with themselves but muchany fewer people in Japan are satisfied with themselves that in the U.S. I think Japanese people are so modest and want to improve themselves, so the percentage is low compared with American people.

many is for countable nouns. People are countable.

IOn the contrary, I think American people are so confident of themselves and positive so the percentage is high compared with Japanese people.

According to the survey, the number of people who want to be useful for mytheir country is larger in Japan than in the U.S. I think this shows the difference ofin characteristics between the two.

I assume you don't mean my country (where you live).

Japanese people are said to put the emphasis on groups.

They are not willing to make argumentsargue because it disturbs the atmosphere.

Comparatively, Americans are said to put the emphasis on individuals.

They will not hesitate to go against the others, because they have a right to do so, and want to do so.

I think this difference madecaused the different scores on the survey.