June 4, 2023
COMPANY TRIP
I had a vacation in the last year. My company has about 30 staffs. We went to visit a beach city of Viet Nam. The name's beach city is Phu Quoc. It has great nightlife and there are a lot of beautiful beaches. Where We stayed is a hotel near the beach. We stayed there 3 days 2 nights. In the morning, I had bread for breakfast. Then I went to the beach with my co-workers. We had great time there. The air is clean there, I like it. In the evening, We had sea food for dinner at night market. I drived around city by motobike. I bought some things there.
My company has about 30 staffs.
Staff should not be plural
Where We stayed isn a hotel near the beach.
We had a great time there.
The air is clean there,; I like it.
June 7, 2023
Thank you very much!
I hadtook a vacation in the last year.
My company has about 30 staffemployees.
We went to visit a beach city ofin Viet Nam.
The name's of the beach city is Phu Quoc.
It has great nightlife and there are a lot of beautiful beaches.
Where Wwe stayed i, there was a hotel near the beach.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.
We stayed there for 3 days and 2 nights.
In the morning, I had bread for breakfast.
Then I went to the beach with my co-workers.
We had great time there.
The air is clean there, I like it.
In the evening, Wwe had sea food for dinner at a night market.
I drioved around the city by motorbike.
I bought some things there.
This is correct, but it would be more natural to say "I bought a few souvenirs" or something like that.
June 7, 2023
Thank you very much!
COMPANY TRIP
I had awent on vacation in the last year.
My company has about 30 staffs.
"staff" is uncountable (unless you mean a big stick a wizard or warrior might use).
We went to visited a beach city ofin Viet Nnam.
The name's of the beach city is Phu Quoc.
or "the beach city's name" name is "owned" by beach city.
It has great nightlife and there are a lot of beautiful beaches.
Where We stayed isn a hotel near the beach.
We stayed there for 3 days and 2 nights.
you do something "for" a time period
In the morning, I had bread for breakfast.
Then I went to the beach with my co-workers.
We had a great time there.
The air is clean there,. I like it.
Two sentences needs . between
In the evening, Wwe had sea food for dinner at the night market.
lower case "w" as not a new sentence.
I drioved a round city by motorbike. and
drive is a strong verb and the past tense is therefore irregular
I bought some things there.
join these two sentences together.
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Sounds very pleasant.
June 7, 2023
Thank you very much!
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My company has about 30 staffs. My company has about 30 staff "staff" is uncountable (unless you mean a big stick a wizard or warrior might use). My company has about 30 My company has about 30 staff Staff should not be plural |
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We went to visit a beach city of Viet Nam. We We went to visit a beach city |
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The name's beach city is Phu Quoc. The name or "the beach city's name" name is "owned" by beach city. The name |
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It has great nightlife and there are a lot of beautiful beaches. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Where We stayed is a hotel near the beach.
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We stayed there 3 days 2 nights. We stayed there for 3 days and 2 nights. you do something "for" a time period We stayed there for 3 days and 2 nights. |
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In the morning, I had bread for breakfast. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then I went to the beach with my co-workers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We had great time there. We had a great time there. We had great time We had a great time there. |
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The air is clean there, I like it. The air is clean there Two sentences needs . between The air is clean The air is clean there |
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In the evening, We had sea food for dinner at night market. In the evening, lower case "w" as not a new sentence. In the evening, |
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I drived around city by motobike. I dr drive is a strong verb and the past tense is therefore irregular I dr |
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I bought some things there.
join these two sentences together. I bought some things there. This is correct, but it would be more natural to say "I bought a few souvenirs" or something like that. |
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