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hebereke

April 26, 2020

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Common thing

Living in foreign countries let us realize that “all humans are alike.” I personally learned that through friendships with my British friends. Their reactions of grief and joy, and the considerate attitude to others are exactly the same as that of the Japanese. They are shy and difficult to make friend with, but once you become friends with them, you will surprise how deeply you can touch teach other's hear strings .


外国に住んでみると、「人間、みな同じ」という感想を持つ。イギリス人に付き合ってみても確かにそう思えてくる。彼らが悲しみや喜びに反応する様や相手の立場を考える点はいかにも日本人に似ている。恥ずかしがり屋で、すぐに友人にはなれないが、いったん友人になれば驚くほど互いの心の琴線に触れあうことができる。

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Things in Common thing

If you say 'common things', it usually means 'general things' or 'regular things'.

'Things in common' is usually for relationships between people or things. This seems like it's what you're talking about.

They are shy and difficult to make friends with, but once you become friends with them, you will surprise how deeply you can touch teach other's hear tstrings .

Common tThing

Living in foreign countries lets us realize that all humans are alike. I personally learned that through friendships with my British friends.

The quotation marks aren't needed unless quoting something that somebody said, a book, or something like that, in which case, the author or speaker should be stated.

Their reactions of grief and joy, and the considerate attitude towards others are exactly the same as that of the Japanese.

They are shy and difficult to make friend with, but once you become friends with them, you will be surprised how deeply you can touch teach other's heart strings .

I'm not sure what you were looking to say there at the end, but I think it was what I corrected it to.

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It was mostly well written. Good job!

Common thing


Common tThing

Things in Common thing

If you say 'common things', it usually means 'general things' or 'regular things'. 'Things in common' is usually for relationships between people or things. This seems like it's what you're talking about.

Living in foreign countries let us realize that “all humans are alike.” I personally learned that through friendships with my British friends.


Living in foreign countries lets us realize that all humans are alike. I personally learned that through friendships with my British friends.

The quotation marks aren't needed unless quoting something that somebody said, a book, or something like that, in which case, the author or speaker should be stated.

Their reactions of grief and joy, and the considerate attitude to others are exactly the same as that of the Japanese.


Their reactions of grief and joy, and the considerate attitude towards others are exactly the same as that of the Japanese.

They are shy and difficult to make friend with, but once you become friends with them, you can deeply communicate with them.


They are shy and difficult to make friend with, but once you become friends with them, you will surprise how deeply you can touch teach other's hear strings .


They are shy and difficult to make friend with, but once you become friends with them, you will be surprised how deeply you can touch teach other's heart strings .

I'm not sure what you were looking to say there at the end, but I think it was what I corrected it to.

They are shy and difficult to make friends with, but once you become friends with them, you will surprise how deeply you can touch teach other's hear tstrings .

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