Feb. 1, 2022
Comment of a Movie Scene with possible Spoiler
This last Sunday afternoon, my girlfriend was watching a movie. I was sitting close to her but I didn't have to much atention to TV. The film is "Florence Foster Jenkins" and if you have thought see it, you don't should read more. I would want to comment one scene but is possible I will have a little spoiler. The soprano (Meryl Streep) is in a big room with her master of canto and her husband (Hugh Grant). They are doing an audition to find a pianist to accompany to Florence in a sort of music performances. The next candidate (Simon Helberg) enter in the room, and after a short conversation, he begin to play the piano... until he listen her voice and doubt for a moment.
At the end, he get the job, but he has the impression that all this is a joke. He go out from the room very happy but in the elevator is impossible for him avoid to smile at first and laughting at the end. I did not give much attention at first, but seing this scene, I begin to laught a lot, with plenty of tears at the eyes. About the real character, Florence Foster, I'm sure she sang with the heart, in addition, no one was forced to listen her in hers theatrical performances.
Comment ofs About a Movie Scene with pPossible Spoilers
No need to capitalise "movie scene" or "spoiler" unless you're using title case, and in title case other words need to be capitalised too.
This last Sunday afternoon, my girlfriend was watching a movie.
I was sitting close to her but I didwasn't havepaying too much attention to the TV.
The film iwas "Florence Foster Jenkins" and if you have thought seeabout seeing it, you don't shouldn't read any more.
I would want to commenlike to talk about one scene but it's possible I will havwrite a little spoiler.
The sopranoFlorence (Meryl Streep), a soprano, is in a big room with her master of cantovocal coach and her husband (Hugh Grant).
You've referred to Florence before, but you haven't explicitly said that she's a soprano, so this sounds weird with "the".
They are doing an audition to find a pianist to accompany to Florence in a sort of musical performances.
"accompany to" is used when we have a destination, "I will accompany you to Paris". When it's just playing music, no "to".
The next candidate (Simon Helberg) enter in s the room, and after a short conversation, he begins to play the piano... until he listens her voice and doubts for a moment.
Present simple tense conjugates differently when the subject is third person singular. I enter, you enter, they enter - but *he* enterS. This is very important.
At the end, he gets the job, but he has the impression that all this is a joke.
He go out fromleaves the room very happy but in the elevator it's impossible for him to avoid to smileing at first and laughting atby the end.
"he goes out from" would be correct grammar, but "leaves" is much more natural.
I did not givepay much attention at first, but seeing this scene, I begian to laught a lot, with plenty of tears at thein my eyes.
About the real character, Florence Foster, I'm sure she sang with the heart, and in addition, no one was forced to listen to her in hers theatrical performances.
Feb. 2, 2022
Thanks for corrections and feedback.
Comment ofn a Movie Scene (with possible Sspoilers)
This lLast Sunday afternoon, my girlfriend was watching a movie.
I was sitting close to her, but I didwasn't have topaying much attention to the TV.
The film iwas "Florence Foster Jenkins" and if you havare thought seeinking about watching it, you don't shouldn't read more of this post.
I would want to comment on one scene, but it is possible I will havespoil the plot a little spoiler.
The soprano (Meryl Streep) is in a big room with her master of canto and her husband (Hugh Grant).
They are doing an audition to find a pianist to accompany to Florence infor a soret of music performances.
The next candidate (Simon Helberg) enter in s the room, and after a short conversation, he begins to play the piano... until he listens to her voice and doubts for a moment.
If the subject is singular ("he", "she", "that person"), the verb should be plural (as in "he enters", "she gets", "that person runs"). If the subject is plural ("the children", "those people"), the verb should be singular (as in "the children play", "those people talk").
At the end, he gets the job, but he has the impression that all this is all a joke.
Minor correction - it's more natural to say "This is all a joke".
He go out fromleaves the room very happy but, and in the elevator it is impossible for him to avoid to smileing at first and laughting at the end.
I did not give the movie much attention at first, but seeing this scene, I begian to laught a lot, with plenty of tears at thein my eyes.
About the real character, Florence Foster, I'm sure she sang with the heart, i: In addition, no one was forced to listen to her voice in hers theatrical performances.
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Feb. 2, 2022
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