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Jan. 13, 2025

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Coming of Age Day

This Monday is one of national holidays in Japan. It is a day for celebrating new adults. Young people turning 20 years old wear traditional Japanese cloths, 振袖 (Fu-ri-so-de) for women or 袴(Ha-ka-ma) for men. Celebration events are held by individual cities with unique customs. For example, Micky Mouse is introduced to the ceremony in Urayasu city, at which Tokyo Disney Land is located. Young people at Kitakyushu city celebrate the day by dressing up in flashy costumes.


この月曜日は祝日だ。新成人をお祝いするための日である。20歳になると、日本の伝統的な装いである振袖又は袴に身を包む。お祝いの会は自治体ごとに開催され、地方により独特な風習をもつ。例えば、東京ディズニーランドのある浦安市ではミッキーマウスが成人式に呼ばれる。北九州市の若者は派手な衣装に身を包んでこの日を祝う。

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This Monday is one ofIt will be a national holidays in Japan. next Monday.

Next Monday is a national holiday in Japan.

It is a day for celebrating new adults.people entering adulthood.

Young people turning 20 years old wear traditional Japanese clothes, 振袖 (Fu-ri-so-de) for women or 袴(Ha-ka-ma) for men.

Celebration events are held by individual cities with uniqueIndividual cities hold celebrations, each having their their own customs.

For example, Mickey Mouse is introduced topart of the ceremony in Urayasu city, at which Tokyois where Disney Land Tokyo is located.

Young people at Kitakyushu city celebrate the day by dressing up in flashy costumes.

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Great post!

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tommy

Jan. 19, 2025

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Thanks!

This Monday is one of the national holidays in Japan.

Young people turning 20 years old wear traditional Japanese clothes, 振袖 (Fu-ri-so-de) for women or 袴(Ha-ka-ma) for men.

"cloths" are like 布巾 etc. "clothes" are things you wear.

Celebrationory events are held by individual cities with unique customs.

Celebratory is the adjective of celebration. You could describe something as "the XYZ Celebration Event" as the title or whatever, but you wouldn't use "Celebration event" as a noun in regular speech.

For example, Micky Mouse is introduced to the ceremony in Urayasu city, at which(the city of Urayasu / Urayasu City / Urayasu), where Tokyo Disney Land is located.

When "city" is part of the place name, it gets capitalised just like the rest of the name. If it's not part of the place name, it usually gets omitted, or moved to the front like "the city of Urayasu"

Young people atin Kitakyushu city celebrate the day by dressing up in flashy costumes.

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Did you attend any of the events today?

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tommy

Jan. 19, 2025

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Thank you. I didn't attend it when I was 20. For over 20, there is nothing to do with this event any more.

This Monday is one of the national holidays in Japan.

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Coming of Age Day

This Monday is one of national holidays in Japan.

It is a day for celebrating new adults.

Young people turning 20 years old wear traditional Japanese clothsing, 振袖 (Fu-ri-so-de) for women or 袴(Ha-ka-ma) for men.

You can say "20 years old" but I feel it's more natural to just say "20"

Celebrations/Celebratory events are held by individualdifferent cities with unique customs.

For example, Micky Mouse iwas introduced to the ceremony in Urayasu city, at which Tokyo Disney Land is located.

Young people at Kitakyushu city celebrate the day by dressing up in flashy costumes.

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Good writing! Very interesting

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tommy

Jan. 13, 2025

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Thank you!

Coming of Age Day


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This Monday is one of national holidays in Japan.


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This Monday is one of the national holidays in Japan.

This Monday is one of the national holidays in Japan.

This Monday is one ofIt will be a national holidays in Japan. next Monday.

Next Monday is a national holiday in Japan.

It is a day for celebrating new adults.


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It is a day for celebrating new adults.people entering adulthood.

Young people turning 20 years old wear traditional Japanese cloths, 振袖 (Fu-ri-so-de) for women or 袴(Ha-ka-ma) for men.


Young people turning 20 years old wear traditional Japanese clothsing, 振袖 (Fu-ri-so-de) for women or 袴(Ha-ka-ma) for men.

You can say "20 years old" but I feel it's more natural to just say "20"

Young people turning 20 years old wear traditional Japanese clothes, 振袖 (Fu-ri-so-de) for women or 袴(Ha-ka-ma) for men.

"cloths" are like 布巾 etc. "clothes" are things you wear.

Young people turning 20 years old wear traditional Japanese clothes, 振袖 (Fu-ri-so-de) for women or 袴(Ha-ka-ma) for men.

Celebration events are held by individual cities with unique customs.


Celebrations/Celebratory events are held by individualdifferent cities with unique customs.

Celebrationory events are held by individual cities with unique customs.

Celebratory is the adjective of celebration. You could describe something as "the XYZ Celebration Event" as the title or whatever, but you wouldn't use "Celebration event" as a noun in regular speech.

Celebration events are held by individual cities with uniqueIndividual cities hold celebrations, each having their their own customs.

For example, Micky Mouse is introduced to the ceremony in Urayasu city, at which Tokyo Disney Land is located.


For example, Micky Mouse iwas introduced to the ceremony in Urayasu city, at which Tokyo Disney Land is located.

For example, Micky Mouse is introduced to the ceremony in Urayasu city, at which(the city of Urayasu / Urayasu City / Urayasu), where Tokyo Disney Land is located.

When "city" is part of the place name, it gets capitalised just like the rest of the name. If it's not part of the place name, it usually gets omitted, or moved to the front like "the city of Urayasu"

For example, Mickey Mouse is introduced topart of the ceremony in Urayasu city, at which Tokyois where Disney Land Tokyo is located.

Young people at Kitakyushu city celebrate the day by dressing up in flashy costumes.


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Young people atin Kitakyushu city celebrate the day by dressing up in flashy costumes.

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