Jan. 13, 2020
Coming-of-age day
This is the first time to post an essay on this website. Correct me if I’m wrong.
It was a coming of age day today in Japan. People who become 20 years of age celebrate being an adult. It’s one of the Japanese traditional events. Have you ever heard of it?
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This is themy first time to post an essay journal on this website.
Correct me if I’m wrongPlease correct my mistakes.
People who become 20 years of agehave turned or will turn 20 years of age between April 2 of the previous year and April 1 of the current year celebrate being an adult.
The dates are according to Wikipedia.
It’s one of the Japanesea traditional Japanese events.
Have you ever heard of it?
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When I rode the train today, I saw girls dressed in beatiful kimonos.
Coming-of-age day
This is themy first time to posting an essay on this website.
An essay is usually something much longer, with multiple paragraphs. Instead you could say “journal entry” or something similar.
It was a cComing of aAge dDay today in Japan.
People who becoame 20 years of age celebrate being an adult.
you can also say “people who turned 20 years old”. Also, I changed it to “became” because i’m assuming everyone is already 20 at this event” but if not it should be “people who will become 20...”
It’s one of the Japanese traditional Japanese events.
Have you ever heard of it?
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Great first post! It sounds like it would be really fun and exciting to celebrate with everyone turning 20!
Jan. 13, 2020
Thank you very much! I attended the ceremony three years ago 😂
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People who become 20 years of age celebrate being an adult. People who bec you can also say “people who turned 20 years old”. Also, I changed it to “became” because i’m assuming everyone is already 20 at this event” but if not it should be “people who will become 20...” People who The dates are according to Wikipedia. |
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