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HelenSnow

Oct. 6, 2025

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Comfort

I'm not sure I got the question right, but I will answer this as I understood.

I can't boast a perfectly healthy back, so I do some exercises every morning. I like spinal stretching, especially the lower back and the area between the shoulder blades. I can't imagine the day starting without this ritual.

I also drink a glass of water on an empty stomach, because at that moment, I feel my body waking up.

I enjoy going to the sauna. I used to go there every week when I was a child, but now, as I live in a flat, not in a house, I like to take a hot shower.

I love getting a massage even more than going to the sauna. It gives me goosebumps when someone is massaging my head or shoulders. I came up with a lifehack for those who have insomnia as I do sometimes. So, the idea is self-massage. At least, you can massage your head, palms, and feet, then you should try to relax each part of your body one by one. It works.

Recently I have bought new clothes to wear to work. It's warm and comfortable, so it helps me to feel better at work and stay focused longer.

All of this is not about feeling alive in adrenaline meaning. To be honest, when I'm in danger, my body doesn't feel alive, on the contrary, it's too stiff to feel anything but fear. So, my point is comfort.

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I'm not sure I got the question right, but I will answer this as I understood it.

I cadon't boast a perfectly healthy back, so I do some exercises every morning.

I like spinal stretching, especially the lower back and the area between the shoulder blades.

Spinal stretching has a bit of a medical connotation, but otherwise fine. Sounds a bit scientific.

I can't imagine the day starting the day without this ritual.

Fine as it was, but this is a bit smoother.

I also drink a glass of water on an empty stomach, because at that moment,'s when I feel my body wakingstart to wake up.

I used to go there every week when I was a child, but now, as I live in a flat, and not in a house, I like to take a hot shower.

It gives met goosebumps when someone is massaging my head or shoulders.

A bit better this way.

At least, yYou can massage your head, palms, and feet, then you should tryrying to relax each part of your body one by one.

"At least" doesn't work here.

It'sThey are warm and comfortable, so itwearing them helps me to feel better at work and stay focused longer.

All of this (My life philosophy / habits) is not about feeling alive in the sense of an adrenaline meaningrush.

"All of this" is a bit vague, but fine otherwise.

Feedback

I know I made a lot of corrections, but it's very good. Everything was perfectly understandable, I just adjusted some sentences so they are a bit smoother and more natural. Very few grammatical mistakes, mostly just stylistic stuff.

I'm curious, what do you do for a living?

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HelenSnow

Oct. 7, 2025

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Thank you! I spend a lot of time editing posts before publishing them. The first versions are always terrible😆

To answer your question about what I do, I'm a frontend developer

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ThePeridot27

Oct. 7, 2025

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Ah, very cool! Good luck learning english. Cheers!

Comfort

I'm not sure I got the question right, but I will answer this as I understood.

I can't boast a perfectly healthy back, so I do some exercises every morning.

This is correct but more common ways to say this are: "I can't claim I have a perfectly healthy back," "I can't say I have the strongest back," "I can't say I've the healthiest back,"

I like spinal stretching, especially the lower back and the area between the shoulder blades.

I can't imagine the day starting without this ritual.

I also drink a glass of water on an empty stomach, because at that moment, I feel my body waking up.

I enjoy going to the sauna.

I used to go there every week when I was a child, but now, as I live in a flat, and not in a house, I like to take a hot shower.

I love getting a massage even more than going to the sauna.

It gives me goosebumps when someone is massaging my head or shoulders.

I came up with a lifehack for those who have insomnia as I do sometimes.

So, the idea is self-massage.

At the very least, you can massage your head, palms, and feet, then you should try to relax each part of your body one by one.

It works.

Recently, I have bought new clothes to wear to work.

It's warm and comfortable, so it helps me to feel better at work and stay focused longer.

All of this is not about feeling alive in a adrenaline meaningsense.

To be honest, when I'm in danger, my body doesn't feel alive, on the contrary, it's too stiff to feel anything but fear.

So, my point is comfort.

Feedback

Great job

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HelenSnow

Oct. 7, 2025

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I appreciate your help!

I'm not sure I got the question right, but I will answer this as I understood it.

I like spinalback stretching, especially the lower back and the area between the shoulder blades.

"Spinal" usually refers to the bones in your back.

I used to go there every week when I was a child, but now, as I live in a flat, and not in a house, I like to take a hot shower.

So, the idea is to self-massage.

At least, you can massage your head, palms, and feet, then you should try to relax each part of your body one by one.

It'sThey're warm and comfortable, so it helps me to feel better at work and stay focused longer.

"It's" -> "They're" as you used the plural clothes in the previous sentence

All of this is not about feeling alive in adrenaline meanthe way that people describe the feeling of adrenalinge.

So, my point isfocus is on comfort.

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HelenSnow

Oct. 7, 2025

1

Thank you!

It works.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At least, you can massage your head, palms, and feet, then you should try to relax each part of your body one by one.


At least, you can massage your head, palms, and feet, then you should try to relax each part of your body one by one.

At the very least, you can massage your head, palms, and feet, then you should try to relax each part of your body one by one.

At least, yYou can massage your head, palms, and feet, then you should tryrying to relax each part of your body one by one.

"At least" doesn't work here.

I also drink a glass of water on an empty stomach, because at that moment, I feel my body waking up.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I also drink a glass of water on an empty stomach, because at that moment,'s when I feel my body wakingstart to wake up.

I used to go there every week when I was a child, but now, as I live in a flat, not in a house, I like to take a hot shower.


I used to go there every week when I was a child, but now, as I live in a flat, and not in a house, I like to take a hot shower.

I used to go there every week when I was a child, but now, as I live in a flat, and not in a house, I like to take a hot shower.

I used to go there every week when I was a child, but now, as I live in a flat, and not in a house, I like to take a hot shower.

Comfort


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm not sure I got the question right, but I will answer this as I understood.


I'm not sure I got the question right, but I will answer this as I understood it.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm not sure I got the question right, but I will answer this as I understood it.

I can't boast a perfectly healthy back, so I do some exercises every morning.


I can't boast a perfectly healthy back, so I do some exercises every morning.

This is correct but more common ways to say this are: "I can't claim I have a perfectly healthy back," "I can't say I have the strongest back," "I can't say I've the healthiest back,"

I cadon't boast a perfectly healthy back, so I do some exercises every morning.

I like spinal stretching, especially the lower back and the area between the shoulder blades.


I like spinalback stretching, especially the lower back and the area between the shoulder blades.

"Spinal" usually refers to the bones in your back.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I like spinal stretching, especially the lower back and the area between the shoulder blades.

Spinal stretching has a bit of a medical connotation, but otherwise fine. Sounds a bit scientific.

I can't imagine the day starting without this ritual.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I can't imagine the day starting the day without this ritual.

Fine as it was, but this is a bit smoother.

I enjoy going to the sauna.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love getting a massage even more than going to the sauna.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It gives me goosebumps when someone is massaging my head or shoulders.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It gives met goosebumps when someone is massaging my head or shoulders.

A bit better this way.

I came up with a lifehack for those who have insomnia as I do sometimes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I used to go there every week when I was a child.


Now, as I live in a flat, not in a house, I like to take a hot shower.


I also drink a glass of water on an empty stomach.


At that moment, I feel my body waking up.


So, the idea is self-massage.


So, the idea is to self-massage.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Recently I have bought new clothes to wear to work.


Recently, I have bought new clothes to wear to work.

It's warm and comfortable, so it helps me to feel better at work and stay focused longer.


It'sThey're warm and comfortable, so it helps me to feel better at work and stay focused longer.

"It's" -> "They're" as you used the plural clothes in the previous sentence

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It'sThey are warm and comfortable, so itwearing them helps me to feel better at work and stay focused longer.

All of this is not about feeling alive in adrenaline meaning.


All of this is not about feeling alive in adrenaline meanthe way that people describe the feeling of adrenalinge.

All of this is not about feeling alive in a adrenaline meaningsense.

All of this (My life philosophy / habits) is not about feeling alive in the sense of an adrenaline meaningrush.

"All of this" is a bit vague, but fine otherwise.

To be honest, when I'm in danger, my body doesn't feel alive, on the contrary, it's too stiff to feel anything but fear.


To be honest, when I'm in danger, my body doesn't feel alive, on the contrary, it's too stiff to feel anything but fear.

So, my point is comfort.


So, my point isfocus is on comfort.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At least, you can massage your head, palms, and feet.


Then you should try to relax each part of your body one by one.


So, my feeling alive is about comfort.


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