May 9, 2025
Come Back Home Seemed Better
Narita Airport was noisy and bustling. A group of young men walked alongside the police, each wearing a black headband on their arm, perhaps a clumsy attempt to conceal their handcuffs. The police officer passed around a stack of passports and tickets, loudly calling out each name.
Their mouths ticked off the roll call, and their hands returned the "certificate of identity" that a long time ago those younger men had torn away themselves. Back then, when they had torn it, their eyes clouded by greed, sweat pouring down as they desperately hoped for a quick escape. Now, they were unintentionally caught, or that is what they want to see themselves as. This place is no longer a refuge, so they return to where they grew up, hoping to start a new life.
On the other side, prison awaits, family awaits, and the future awaits. Perhaps it would have been better to continue being lost on this side.
I saw many young people similar to those in Japan when I went to a Vietnamese restaurant and traveled around Japan. Together talked, together drank, and all of them spoke so badly that they ran away and couldn't come back to their present whenever. But only some of them made it. The others are still wandering, lost somewhere.
Comeing Back Home Seemed Better
Narita Airport was noisy and bustling.
A group of young men walked alongside the police, each wearing a black headarmband on their arm, perhaps a clumsy attempt to conceal their handcuffs.
Possibly armband might be better to use as you are talking about someone's arm
The police officer passed around a stack of passports and tickets, loudly calling out each name.
Their mouthsy ticked off the roll call, and their hands returned the "certificate of identity" that a long time ago those younger men had torn away themselvesup.
Back then, when they had torn it up, their eyes had been clouded by greed, sweat pouring down as they desperately hoped for a quick escape.
Now, they were unintentionally caught, or that is whathow they want to see themselves as.
This place is no longer a refuge, so they return to where they grew up, hoping to start a new life.
On the other side, prison awaits, family awaits, and the future awaits.
Perhaps it would have been better to continue being lost on this side.
I saw many young people similar to those in Japan when I went to a Vietnamese restaurant and traveled around Japan.
Together talked, together, drank, together and all of them spoken to so badly that they ran away and couldn't come back to their present whenever.
But only some of them made it.
The others are still wandering, lost somewhere.
Comeing Back Home Seemed Better
Narita Airport was noisy and bustling.
A group of young men walked alongside the police, each wearing a black headband on their arm/wrists, perhaps a clumsy attempt to conceal their handcuffs.
Their mouths ticked off the roll call, and their hands returned the "certificate of identity" that a long time ago those younger men had torn away themselves.
I'm not following what torn away refers to here
Back then, when they had torn it, their eyes clouded by greed, sweat pouring down as they desperately hoped for a quick escape.
I'm not following what torn refers to here. We can tear up a piece of paper, but perhaps you mean something like lose privilege for something?
Now, they were unintentionally caught, or that is whathow they want to see themselves as.
This place is no longer a refuge, so they returned to where they grew up, hoping to start a new life.
On the other side, prison awaits, family awaits, and the future awaits.
Perhaps it would have been better to continue being lost on this side.
I saw many young people similar to those in Japan when I went to a Vietnamese restaurant and traveled around Japan.
This suggests you only ever once went to a Vietnamese resturant
Together they talked, together drank, and all of them spoke so badly (about...?) that they ran away and couldn't come back to their present whenever they wanted.
But only some of them made it.
The others are still wandering, lost somewhere.
May 9, 2025
Thank you!
"I'm not following what torn away refers to here", I mean the verb "tear and throw away". Sorry, writing is lacking.
When they escape their company and start working illegally, they often destroy their passport (by tearing, throwing, or burning) as a ritual to start everything.
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Their mouths ticked off the roll call, and their hands returned the "certificate of identity" that a long time ago those younger men had torn away themselves. Their mouths ticked off the roll call, and their hands returned the "certificate of identity" that a long time ago those younger men had torn away themselves. I'm not following what torn away refers to here The |
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