March 28, 2025
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Long time no see~ Recently, I devoted myself to prepare for my exam, so I did not have time to keep writing. Today, I finished. Though I am busy, I keep reading in my spare time. The latest magazine I read is New Philosophyer. The latest one is about choices. Meanwhile, philosophyers who are on the cover are my loved philosophyer, Beauvoir and Sartre. To my delight, Youthful Memoirs written by Beauvoir was published the other day. The main content is about the Beauvoir's diary from 1926 to 1930. As a peer, during my reading, I discovered some the same thoughts and puzzled things like her. Undoutedly, her shown vitality and courage improved me and gave me lots of power! Are you willing to share a amazing reading experience with me? I am eager to share the happiness with you!
ComeI'm Back!
What you wrote is a command.
Though I am busy, I keep reading in my spare time.
The latest magazine I've read is New Philosophyer.
The latest one is about choices.
Meanwhile, the philosophyers who are on the cover are my loved philosophyerfavorites, Beauvoir and Sartre.
As a peer, during mywhile I was reading, I discovered somwe have the same thoughts and puzzled over some things like her.
As a peer? What does that mean?
Undoubtedly, her shown vitality and courage improved me and gave me lots of power!encouraged and motivated me.
Are you willing to share an amazing reading experience with me?
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Was what you read written in English?
March 29, 2025
No. The version I read is written in Chinese. It is called 青春手记。
Long time no see~ Recently, I devoted myself to prepare for my exam, so I did not have time to keep writing.
Today, I finished.
Though I am busy, I keep reading in my spare time.
The latest magazine I read is New Philosophyer.
The latest one is about choices.
Meanwhile, philosophyers who are on the cover are my loved philosophyer, Beauvoir and Sartre.
To my delight, Youthful Memoirs written by Beauvoir was published the other day.
The main content is about the Beauvoir's diary from 1926 to 1930.
As a peer, during my reading, I discovered some of the same thoughts and puzzledwondered the same things likeas her.
"As a peer" and "puzzled" are correct but somewhat formal and not used in everyday speech. We usually use puzzled as "puzzled by" something odd or confusing rather than interesting or curious. Wondered by be a better verb here.
"Things like her" could also be interpreted as like herself, rather than her ideas
Undoubtedly, her shown vitality and courage improved me and gave me lots of trength and courage has made me stronger and I feel empowered!
This is also mostly correct but somewhat formal and not used in everyday speech.
Vitality is mostly used in regards to health. E.g. The spa treatment restored my vitality.
"has improved me" is not a natural phrasing for English. Usually improved is used in a more specific context. E.g. This has improved my writing.
Are you willing to share a amazing reading experience with me?
I am eager to share the happinessis experience with you!
The happiness sounds unnatural.
March 29, 2025
Thank you so much! In the past, I learn English to pass exam rather than daily communication, so my expression is unnatural and too formal. I learnt a lot of correct and natural expression because of your guidance. Thank you again! Have a nice day~
ComeI’m Back!
Long time no see~ Recently, I devoted myself to prepareing for my exam, so I did not have time to keep writing.
Today, I finished.
Though I am busy, I keep reading in my spare time.
The latesmost recent magazine I’ve read is New Philosophyer.
Is it really spelled “Philosophyer” (and not “Philosopher”, for example)?
The latest onissue is about choices.
Meanwhile,The philosophyers who are on the cover are my loved philosophyers I love, Beauvoir and Sartre.
More natural: Two philosophers I love, Beauvoir and Sartre, are on the cover.
To my delight, Youthful Memoirs, written by Beauvoir, was published the other day.
How this relates to the previous sentence isn’t clear to me.
The main content isIt is mainly about the Beauvoir's diary from 1926 to 1930.
As a peer, duringI am the same age as she was at that time. Through my reading, I discovered that I have some of the same thoughts and puzzled over some of the same things likeas her.
This is pretty hard to understand. Does “as a peer” mean you are also a philosopher?
UPDATE: I have changed my correction based on the explanation you provided: “作为那时的波伏娃的同龄人，我发现了我们有很多相同的想法和成长的困扰。”
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If you could add a Chinese version of your writing, it would help me to understand and correct your English, and perhaps I would learn something from your Chinese.
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As a peer, during my reading, I discovered some the same thoughts and puzzled things like her. As a peer, during my reading, I discovered some of the same thoughts and "As a peer" and "puzzled" are correct but somewhat formal and not used in everyday speech. We usually use puzzled as "puzzled by" something odd or confusing rather than interesting or curious. Wondered by be a better verb here. "Things like her" could also be interpreted as like herself, rather than her ideas As a peer, As a peer? What does that mean?
This is pretty hard to understand. Does “as a peer” mean you are also a philosopher? UPDATE: I have changed my correction based on the explanation you provided: “作为那时的波伏娃的同龄人，我发现了我们有很多相同的想法和成长的困扰。” |
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