Dec. 10, 2022
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Only two weeks and my father came back from his travel. I have afraid because of my school perform. They aren't so good in the last time. I mean the once is always difficult but the school is very hard. It gives no practices only read and write. The test are not better the school is hard and offul. But I hope that it will better than before. The listening for me will always harder and teachers studies to hard with us. The classes are very big we are 30 children and it difficult to kept the consecrate and all.
But thanks for listening
Only two weeks and my father cahas come back from his travel.
I haveam afraid because of my school performance.
They aren'tIt hasn't been so good sin thece he was gone. (Or: it hasn't been as good as last time.)
I mean the once is al, it ways difficult but theefore, but school is very hard.
It giveThere is no practices, only reading and writeing.
The test are not better, the school is hard and ofawful.
The lListening for me will always be the harderst, and teachers make us studiesy too hard with us.
The classes are very big w. We are in a class of 30 children and it is difficult to keept the consecrate and all concentration.
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Good job Prisci! I'm glad your Dad is home too :)
Come backing Home
OIt has been only two weeks and my father cahas come back from his traveling.
I haveam afraid because of my school performance.
They aren't so good in the lastthis time.
I mean the oncfirst time is always difficult but the school is very hard.
It gives no practices, only reading and writeing.
The tests are not better so the school is hard and ofawful.
But I hope that it will be better than before.
The listening for me will always be harder andbut teachers studies toy hard with us.
The classes are very big w. We are 30 childrenstudents and it is difficult to kept the consecratemaintain concentration and all.
But thanks for listening.
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I hope it gets better! Good work!
Come back
In just two weeks, my father will come back from his travels. (future tense) / Only two weeks andgo, my father came back from his travel.s. (past tense)
I'm not sure which tense you meant, so I added both just in case.
I haveam afraid because of my school performance.
They areIt wasn't so good in the last time.
I mean the once is alwayeven doing well once is difficult, but the school is very hard.
I'm not 100% sure what you meant here. This correction might not be right.
It gives no chance to practices, only reading and writeing.
The test are not better, the school is hard and ofawful.
For casual speech, just using a comma is fine, but if this is an essay, then a semicolon (;) is better.
But I hope that it will go better than before.
The listening for me willis always harder and the teachers make us studiesy too hard with us.
The classes are very big w. There are 30 children and it's difficult for all of them to keept their consecrate and allcentration.
But thanks for listening
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Only two weeks and my father came back from his travel. In just two weeks, my father will come back from his travels. (future tense) / Only two weeks a I'm not sure which tense you meant, so I added both just in case.
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They aren't so good in the last time.
They aren't so good
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I mean the once is always difficult but the school is very hard. I mean I'm not 100% sure what you meant here. This correction might not be right. I mean the I mean |
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It gives no practices only read and write. It gives no chance to practice It gives no practice
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The test are not better the school is hard and offul. The test are not better, the school is hard and For casual speech, just using a comma is fine, but if this is an essay, then a semicolon (;) is better. The tests are not better so the school is hard and The test are not better, the school is hard and |
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But I hope that it will better than before. But I hope that it will go better than before. But I hope that it will be better than before. |
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But thanks for listening This sentence has been marked as perfect! But thanks for listening. |
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The listening for me will always harder and teachers studies to hard with us. The listening for me The listening for me will always be harder
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The classes are very big we are 30 children and it difficult to kept the consecrate and all. The classes are very big The classes are very big The classes are very big |
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