Jan. 23, 2022
Collins Big Cat
This week, I heard about the Collins Big Cat and its books.
At first, I thought they were only books for children.
As I read some books higher levels, I felt they were not easy for me.
When I started reading a book on the band 16 Sapphire level, I couldn't understand each page clearly.
The Lexile index of band 16 is between 731 and 770.
As a result, I should read books for 7 or 8 year-old kids according to the Collins Big Cat band.
This system is quite interesting for me.
I will try to read other books and someday I will read books on the band 18 which is the top level of the band.
This week, I hlearned about the Collins 'Big Cat' and its books.
At first, I thought they were only books for children.
As I read some books higher levels, I fel books, I thought they were non't easy for me.
When I started reading a book onat the band 16 Sapphire level (also called level 16), I couldn't understand each page clearly.
The Lexile index of band 16 is between 731 and 770.
As a result, I should read books for 7 or 8 year-old kids according to the Collins Big Cat band.
This system is quite interesting for me.
I will try to read other books, and someday I will read books on the bandbe able to read books at level 18 (which is the top level of the band).
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Jan. 24, 2022
고맙습니다.
Collin’s Big Cat
Not sure if you want to say the Big Cat belonging to Collin, if so you need an apostrophe
This week, I heard about the Collins Big Cat and its books.
At first, I thought they were only books for children.
As I read some books higherof a more advanced levels, I felt they were not easy for me.
When I started to reading a book on the band 16 Sapphire level, I couldn't understand each page clearly.
The Lexile index of band 16 is between 731 and 770.
As a result, I should read books for 7 or 8 year-old kids according to the Collins Big Cat band.
This system is quite interesting for me.
I will try to read other books and someday I will read books on thein band 18 which is the top level of the band.
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Well done. I wish you success with your reading!
Jan. 24, 2022
Thank you so much.
This week, I heard about the Collins Big Cat and itsseries of books.
AHowever, as I read some books higher level books, I felt they were not easy for me.
When I started reading a book on the "band 16 /Sapphire" level, I couldn't understand each page clearly.
I put it into quotations to help readers understand what "band 16/Sapphire" is. If you feel like the audience you are writing for already knows what band 16/Sapphire is, then you don't need to put quotation marks.
The Lexile index of band 16 is between 731 and 770.
As a result, I should read books for 7 tor 8 -year-old kids according to the Collins Big Cat band.
TI think this system is quite interesting for me.
I will try to read other books and someday I will be able to read books on the band 18 which is the top level of the band, the highest band level.
the sentence you wrote was 100% right, except for "the band 18" (should be "band 18") but I wanted to make it sound more natural.
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Your writing is good! I could understand everything you wrote, keep up the good work!
Jan. 23, 2022
Good job!! Reading kids books is always a good start to in reading. I recommend a series called Junie B. Jones it’s a book series about an elementary student named Junie B. Jones and her adventures in school and life. It’s very short and easy to read.
Jan. 23, 2022
Thank you so much!
This week, I heard about the Collins Big Cat system and its books.
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This week, I heard about the Collins Big Cat system and book series.
At first, I thought they were only books for children.
As I read some books higher level books, I felt they were not easy for me.
You could also say:
As I read some books at higher levels, I felt they were not easy for me.
When I started reading a book on the bBand 16 Sapphire level, I couldn't understand each page clearly.
To sound more natural I would say:
When I started reading a book on the Band 16 Sapphire level, I couldn't understand it very well.
The Lexile index of bBand 16 is between 731 and 770.
As a result, I should read books for 7 or 8 year-old kids, according to the Collins Big Cat bands.
This system is quite interesting forto me.
I will try to read other books, and someday I will read books on the bBand 18, which is the top level of the bands.
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Good job! Your writing is very clear. The Collin Big Cat system sounds very useful.
Jan. 23, 2022
Thank you so much.
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