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College Life

February 21, 2023
College life is really happy. I feel free. I can do anything what I want to do. I can eat anything what I want to eat. There are many delicious food in college. You can also have a sweet love. I want to know how was your college life.

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College Life

February 21, 2023

CMy college life ifeels really happy.

or,

I'm really happy with my life at college.

I feel free.

I can do anything wthat I want to do.

I can eat anything wthat I want to eat.

There are many delicious types of food in college.

You can also have a sweet loveheart.

I want to know how was your college life was.

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Good work! I had a lot of fun in college, too, but I'll never forget how much work it was either.

College life is really happygreat.

"College life" isn't alive so it can't feel happy. instead, you could say "I'm really happy with College life"

I can do anything wthat I want to do.

I can eat anything wthat I want to eat.

You can also have aexperience sweet love.

I can do anything wthat I want to do.

I can eat anything wthat I want to eat.

There are many delicious foods in college.

Foods is plural here

You can also have a sweet lovromance.

The wording here sounds more natural with the word "romance".

I want to know how was your college life was.

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A very nice and very cute journal entry! Just some minor grammatical changes and it's perfect. Good job!

College Life


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February 21, 2023


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College life is really happy.


College life is really happygreat.

"College life" isn't alive so it can't feel happy. instead, you could say "I'm really happy with College life"

CMy college life ifeels really happy.

or, I'm really happy with my life at college.

I feel free.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I can do anything what I want to do.


I can do anything wthat I want to do.

I can do anything wthat I want to do.

I can do anything wthat I want to do.

I can eat anything what I want to eat.


I can eat anything wthat I want to eat.

I can eat anything wthat I want to eat.

I can eat anything wthat I want to eat.

There are many delicious food in college.


There are many delicious foods in college.

Foods is plural here

There are many delicious types of food in college.

You can also have a sweet love.


You can also have a sweet lovromance.

The wording here sounds more natural with the word "romance".

You can also have aexperience sweet love.

You can also have a sweet loveheart.

I want to know how was your college life.


I want to know how was your college life was.

I want to know how was your college life was.

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