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FadyRefat_23

Oct. 8, 2025

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Collage life

As every person has a story that changes the course of events, the collage alterns my attitude from an anxious and shy one, to a sociable person. Not only making friends, but also giving presentations has made me open-minded. Although there were a massive number of challenges, we have learned how to overcome obstacles. I achieved successes because of my determination. So to be a successful person , you should face your problems."

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Collaege life

As every person/ everyone has a story that changes the course of events, the collaege alterns my attitude from an anxious and, shy one, to a sociable person.

Although there were a massive number of challenges, we haved learned how to overcome obstacles.

I achieved my successes because of my determination.

Collaege life

As every person has a story that changes the course of events, the collaege alternchanges my attitude from an anxious and shy one, to a sociable person.

That is more like personality, not attitude.

Not only making friends, but also giving presentations has made me open-minded.

Although there were a massive number of challenges, we have learned how to overcome obstacles.

I achieved successes because of my determination.

So to be a successful person , you should face your problems."

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FadyRefat_23

Oct. 9, 2025

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What is the level of writing skill?

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shadowfax26

Oct. 10, 2025

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I am not a trained professional, so I have no idea where to put you.

Collage life


Collaege life

Collaege life

As every person has a story that changes the course of events, the collage alterns my attitude from an anxious and shy one, to a sociable person.


As every person has a story that changes the course of events, the collaege alternchanges my attitude from an anxious and shy one, to a sociable person.

That is more like personality, not attitude.

As every person/ everyone has a story that changes the course of events, the collaege alterns my attitude from an anxious and, shy one, to a sociable person.

Not only making friends, but also giving presentations has made me open-minded.


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Although there were a massive number of challenges, we have learned how to overcome obstacles.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Although there were a massive number of challenges, we haved learned how to overcome obstacles.

I achieved successes because of my determination.


I achieved successes because of my determination.

I achieved my successes because of my determination.

So to be a successful person , you should face your problems."


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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