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Cold But Good Day
Today is cold day.
However, it’s a good day.
We won a drawing and bought a Switch 2 at a hobby shop!
My daughter really delighted.
Now, we are waiting to finish downloading Mario Kart.
We will enjoy it.
However, it’s a good day.
We won a drawing and bought a Switch 2 at a hobby shop!
"draw" (or "lottery" as others suggest) is the contest
"drawing" is a picture.
My daughter was really delighted.
Today is a cold day.
We won a drawing and bought a Switch 2 at a hobby shop!
"lottery" might be better instead of "drawing"
My daughter was really delighted.
Cold But Good Day
Today is a cold day.
This very much emphasises how cold a day it is compared to other days. If you want to just state that it's cold, you could also say "It's cold today".
However, it’s a good day.
We won a drawingffle and bought a Switch 2 at a hobby shop!
If you mean you won a 抽選 to be able to buy the Switch 2, I think "raffle" or "lottery" would work best. I would also note that many other countries do not use this system, and things like the Switch 2 or concert tickets are sold on a first-come-first-served basis. This could mean that someone not familiar with how Japan does things that you winning a raffle is separate to buying a Switch 2.
If I were rewriting with this in mind I would write something like: "We won a chance to buy a Switch 2 in a raffle, and went to a hobby shop to purchase it."
My daughter was really delighted.
Now, we are waiting to finish downloading Mario Kart.
We will enjoy it.
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Nice! I hope you enjoy your Switch 2. The new Donkey Kong game is also very fun so I'd recommend it!
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Today is cold day. Today is a cold day. This very much emphasises how cold a day it is compared to other days. If you want to just state that it's cold, you could also say "It's cold today". Today is a cold day. |
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However, it’s a good day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! However, it’s a good day. |
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We won a drawing and bought a Switch 2 at a hobby shop! We won a If you mean you won a 抽選 to be able to buy the Switch 2, I think "raffle" or "lottery" would work best. I would also note that many other countries do not use this system, and things like the Switch 2 or concert tickets are sold on a first-come-first-served basis. This could mean that someone not familiar with how Japan does things that you winning a raffle is separate to buying a Switch 2. If I were rewriting with this in mind I would write something like: "We won a chance to buy a Switch 2 in a raffle, and went to a hobby shop to purchase it." We won a drawing and bought a Switch 2 at a hobby shop! "lottery" might be better instead of "drawing" We won a draw "draw" (or "lottery" as others suggest) is the contest "drawing" is a picture. |
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My daughter really delighted. My daughter was really delighted. My daughter was really delighted. My daughter was really delighted. |
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Now, we are waiting to finish downloading Mario Kart. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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