Dec. 20, 2021
Cold
It was cloudy and cold yesterday. My neighbor was very noisy because of the building constructing. I wanted to find somewhere to stay for afternoon. I didn't want to ribe a bike to De, who I visited a lot, because it was a little far away. I called a friend nearby, but she wasn't at home. Finally, I went to the teaching building, and had a seat at the reading corner since I didn't want to ask the securer to open the office's door. I calmly did two sets of listening exercise.
It's colder today, and drizzled. After class, I went to the meeting room. Nobody was there. I did a set of listening and checked the answer, relistened. The room was colder than the classroom, and I also was hungry, though. To my surprise, I was still calm. Maybe I know that if I want to catch my goal, I really need to work harder. I need to get a good score in IELTS, only then can I apply the school I want to study in.
I like cold weather because I think it makes me calm. I dislike hot weather because it drive me irritable.
Preparing for IELTS is quite hard for me, and I know that applying schools won't be easy either. No pay no gain. I need to stay calm and try my best, just step by step.
Cold
It was cloudy and cold yesterday.
My neighbor was very noisy because of the building constructiong.
I wanted to find somewhere to stay for the afternoon.
I didn't want to ribde a bike to De, who I visited/used to visit a lot, because it was a little far away.
If you visited De a lot in the past but not as often anymore, it sounds better to say "used to visit" instead of "visited," and if you still visit a lot currently it should be "visit."
I called a friend nearby, but she wasn't at home.
There's nothing wrong with saying "at home," but it sounds a little more natural to leave out "at" here.
Finally, I went to the teaching building, and had a seat at the reading corner since I didn't want to ask the securer to open the office's door.
I calmly did two sets of listening exercises.
It's colder today, and it drizzled.
After class, I went to the meeting room.
Nobody was there.
I did a set of listening and checked the answer, rethen listened again.
It's more common to say "listen again" than "relisten."
The room was colder than the classroom, and I also was hungry, thoughwas also hungry.
To my surprise, I was still calm.
Maybe I know that if I want to catreach my goal, I really need to work harder.
I need to get a good score in IELTS,; only then can I apply to the school I want to study inattend.
I like cold weather because I think it makes me calm.
I dislike hot weather because it drivemakes me irritable.
We typically only say "drives me" with "drives me crazy," "drives me insane," or "drives me mad." With other adjectives we usually say "makes me" instead.
Preparing for IELTS is quite hard for me, and I know that applying to schools won't be easy either.
No payin no gain.
I need to stay calm and try my best, just step by step.
Dec. 20, 2021
I didn't mean to also mark the ones I corrected as correct; if a sentence has both a corrected version and a version that says it's correct as is just pay attention to the corrected one instead. Sorry about that!
Dec. 21, 2021
It's fine. Thanks for your correction.
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Cold This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was cloudy and cold yesterday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My neighbor was very noisy because of the building constructing. My neighbor was very noisy because of the building construction |
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I wanted to find somewhere to stay for afternoon. I wanted to find somewhere to stay for the afternoon. |
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I didn't want to ribe a bike to De, who I visited a lot, because it was a little far away. I didn't want to ri If you visited De a lot in the past but not as often anymore, it sounds better to say "used to visit" instead of "visited," and if you still visit a lot currently it should be "visit." |
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I called a friend nearby, but she wasn't at home. I called a friend nearby, but she wasn't There's nothing wrong with saying "at home," but it sounds a little more natural to leave out "at" here. |
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Finally, I went to the teaching building, and had a seat at the reading corner since I didn't want to ask the securer to open the office's door. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I calmly did two sets of listening exercise. I calmly did two sets of listening exercises. |
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It's colder today, and drizzled. It's colder today, and it drizzled. |
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After class, I went to the meeting room. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nobody was there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I did a set of listening and checked the answer, relistened. I did a set of listening and checked the answer, It's more common to say "listen again" than "relisten." |
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The room was colder than the classroom, and I also was hungry, though. The room was colder than the classroom, and I |
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To my surprise, I was still calm. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Maybe I know that if I want to catch my goal, I really need to work harder. Maybe I know that if I want to |
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I need to get a good score in IELTS, only then can I apply the school I want to study in. I need to get a good score in IELTS |
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I like cold weather because I think it makes me calm. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I dislike hot weather because it drive me irritable. I dislike hot weather because it We typically only say "drives me" with "drives me crazy," "drives me insane," or "drives me mad." With other adjectives we usually say "makes me" instead. |
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Preparing for IELTS is quite hard for me, and I know that applying schools won't be easy either. Preparing for IELTS is quite hard for me, and I know that applying to schools won't be easy either. |
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No pay no gain. No pa |
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I need to stay calm and try my best, just step by step. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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