Nov. 12, 2020
Coffee & Chocolate Coca cola
In Japan is different name and should be only coffee without chocolate.
Few weeks ago saw this product in supermarket.
At that moment I through this must a loser product.
So, I take a photo and send it to all my friends.
A real surprise result happen.
Most 20’s young kids like this product a lot.
Or, is either they like it so much or they hated so much.
Because of that next day I go to that supermarket again and buy it.
Today I tried!
Well, young kids you won, I like it too.
But I do think some people won’t like it.
You should try one too.
Coffee & Chocolate Coca cola
In Japan ist is a different name and should be only coffee without chocolate.
Added the word "it" to help it sound more natural.
FA few weeks ago, I saw this product in the supermarket.
Added a few words to make it sound more natural.
At that moment I throught this must a loserbad product.
Used wrong word. They are similar sounding but different meanings so I corrected it. I changed loser to bad to make the sentence sound more natural to natives ears.
So, I takeook a photo and sendt it to all my friends.
You are speaking in past tense, but wrote in present tense in this sentence. I corrected your tenses.
A real surprise result happenhappened as a result.
Reworded it to make it sound more natural.
Most 20’s young kids like this product a lot.
The age wasn't necessary as young kids relays the message.
Or, is eithert's because they like it so much or they hated so much.
Reworded to make it sound more natural.
Because of that next day I gowent to thate supermarket again and buyaught it.
You were referring to past tense again, but wrote in present tense. I corrected your tenses.
Today I tried it!
Well, young kids you won, I like it too.
But I do think some people won’t like it.
You should try one too.
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Very good overall! I understand the content without much trouble. You just need to continue to practice and you will sound more natural over time. Make sure you pay attention to your tenses! The meanings can change a lot if you confuse them. Good job!
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Coffee & Chocolate Coca cola This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In Japan is different name and should be only coffee without chocolate. In Japan i Added the word "it" to help it sound more natural. |
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Few weeks ago saw this product in supermarket.
Added a few words to make it sound more natural. |
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At that moment I through this must a loser product. At that moment I th Used wrong word. They are similar sounding but different meanings so I corrected it. I changed loser to bad to make the sentence sound more natural to natives ears. |
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So, I take a photo and send it to all my friends. So, I t You are speaking in past tense, but wrote in present tense in this sentence. I corrected your tenses. |
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A real surprise result happen. A Reworded it to make it sound more natural. |
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Most 20’s young kids like this product a lot. Most The age wasn't necessary as young kids relays the message. |
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Or, is either they like it so much or they hated so much. Or Reworded to make it sound more natural. |
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Because of that next day I go to that supermarket again and buy it. Because of that next day I You were referring to past tense again, but wrote in present tense. I corrected your tenses. |
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Today I tried! Today I tried it! |
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Well, young kids you won, I like it too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But I do think some people won’t like it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You should try one too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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