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Coaches working in Türkiye

Foreign coaches come to Türkiye to get payout when they are fired, not to be successful. Boards of local teams do not understand that a foreign coach cannot successful as they do not know about the dynamics of Türkiye's football league. Former coach of Fenerbahçe, Ismail Kartal, won 99 points, which was one of highest points that Fenerbahçe won ever. I mean that Turkish coaches have more potentional to be successful than any worldwide famous coach like Mourinho. Another example is Okan Buruk, Galatasaray's coach. This list goes on. To me, the whole local teams in Türkiye should be coached by local coaches. This way, Turkish football teams may achieve more goals in 5 years.
Now let's make prediction. What team Mourinho will train, and how much payout he will earn to be sacked.

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Foreign coaches come to Türkiye to get a payout when they are fired, not to be successful.

Boards of local teams do not understand that a foreign coach cannot be successful as they do not know about the dynamics of Türkiye's football league.

FThe former coach of Fenerbahçe, Ismail Kartal, wonachieved 99 points, which was one of highest points that Fenerbahçe won ever.

"achieved" is more natural than "won" here, as it focuses a bit more on the challenge of getting 99 points. "won" also makes it sound a bit like the coach was the only one involved.

I mean that Turkish coaches have more potentional to be successful than any worldwide famous coach like Mourinho.

"any" would be used for an unspecified coach, but once you give a specific example like Mourinho, it's better to say "a worldwide famous coach"

To me, the whole local teams in Türkiye should be coached by local coaches.

Now let's make a prediction.

Whatich team Mourinho will train, and how much of a payout he will earn to be sacked.

Coaches working in Türkiye

Foreign coaches come to Türkiye to get payouts when they are fired, not to be successful.

BThe boards of local teams do not understand that a foreign coach cannot successful as they do not know about the dynamics of Türkiye's football league.

Former coach of Fenerbahçe, Ismail Kartal, woled his team to win 99 points, which was one of the highest points thatrecords for Fenerbahçe won ever.

(1) It is the team, not the coach, that wins the points.
(2) I rephrased the second half of your sentence so that it sounds more natural and fluent.

I mean that Turkish coaches have more potentional to be successful than any worldwide famous coach like Mourinho.

Another example is Okan Buruk, Galatasaray's coach.

This list goes on.

Alternatively, and perhaps more commonly: "The list goes on."

To me, the wholeIn my opinion, all local teams in Türkiye should be coached by local coaches.

I tweaked your sentence so that it sounds more natural. "The whole local teams" is not grammatical.

This way, Turkish football teams may achievscore more goals in the next 5 years.

(1) The more common verb to use here is "score".
(2) You should specify which "5 years" it is that you're referring to.

Now let's make prediction.

Whatich team will Mourinho will train, and how much payout he will he earn to bewhen (he gets) sacked.?

Changing this to question is more natural-sounding here.

Coaches working in Türkiye


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Foreign coaches come to Türkiye to get payout when they are fired, not to be successful.


Foreign coaches come to Türkiye to get payouts when they are fired, not to be successful.

Foreign coaches come to Türkiye to get a payout when they are fired, not to be successful.

Boards of local teams do not understand that a foreign coach cannot successful as they do not know about the dynamics of Türkiye's football league.


BThe boards of local teams do not understand that a foreign coach cannot successful as they do not know about the dynamics of Türkiye's football league.

Boards of local teams do not understand that a foreign coach cannot be successful as they do not know about the dynamics of Türkiye's football league.

Former coach of Fenerbahçe, Ismail Kartal, won 99 points, which was one of highest points that Fenerbahçe won ever.


Former coach of Fenerbahçe, Ismail Kartal, woled his team to win 99 points, which was one of the highest points thatrecords for Fenerbahçe won ever.

(1) It is the team, not the coach, that wins the points. (2) I rephrased the second half of your sentence so that it sounds more natural and fluent.

FThe former coach of Fenerbahçe, Ismail Kartal, wonachieved 99 points, which was one of highest points that Fenerbahçe won ever.

"achieved" is more natural than "won" here, as it focuses a bit more on the challenge of getting 99 points. "won" also makes it sound a bit like the coach was the only one involved.

I mean that Turkish coaches have more potentional to be successful than any worldwide famous coach like Mourinho.


I mean that Turkish coaches have more potentional to be successful than any worldwide famous coach like Mourinho.

I mean that Turkish coaches have more potentional to be successful than any worldwide famous coach like Mourinho.

"any" would be used for an unspecified coach, but once you give a specific example like Mourinho, it's better to say "a worldwide famous coach"

Another example is Okan Buruk, Galatasaray's coach.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To me, the whole local teams in Türkiye should be coached by local coaches.


To me, the wholeIn my opinion, all local teams in Türkiye should be coached by local coaches.

I tweaked your sentence so that it sounds more natural. "The whole local teams" is not grammatical.

To me, the whole local teams in Türkiye should be coached by local coaches.

This way, Turkish football teams may achieve more goals in 5 years.


This way, Turkish football teams may achievscore more goals in the next 5 years.

(1) The more common verb to use here is "score". (2) You should specify which "5 years" it is that you're referring to.

Now let's make prediction.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now let's make a prediction.

What team Mourinho will train, and how much payout he will earn to be sacked.


Whatich team will Mourinho will train, and how much payout he will he earn to bewhen (he gets) sacked.?

Changing this to question is more natural-sounding here.

Whatich team Mourinho will train, and how much of a payout he will earn to be sacked.

This list goes on.


This list goes on.

Alternatively, and perhaps more commonly: "The list goes on."

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