Jan. 30, 2026
Me and my boyfriend decided make a travel, in the last of this year, to a north from the EUA. The goal is met a new culture while work there, for a few months. So, as i'm begginig in English, i've been training for improve until the fluency. I don't hope to speak perfectly, but i want to be understood so that I can communicate.
I am currently studying nutrition and i like street run, so i created a newsletter about performance nutrition, where i write about carbs, protein, suplementation, etc.
Eu e meu namorado decidimos fazer uma viagem, no final desse ano, para o norte dos EUA. O objetivo é conhecer uma cultura nova enquanto trabalhamos lá, por alguns meses. Então, como eu sou iniciante no inglês, eu tenho treinado para evoluir até a fluência. Eu não espero falar perfeitamente, mas eu quero ser entendida para conseguir me comunicar.
Eu atualmente estou estudando nutrição e eu gosto de corrida de rua, então eu criei uma newsletter sobre nutrição na performance, onde eu escrevo sobre carboidrato, proteína, suplementação, etc.
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I am going to travel
Me and my boyfriend decided make ato travel, in at the lastend of this year, to athe north ofrom the EUAUSA (?).
Me and my boyfriend decided to travel at the end of this year, to the north of the USA (?).
Google Translate tells me EUA is Portugese for the USA.
"North from the USA" would mean starting at the USA and going North (i.e. going to Canada). If you're going to northern parts of the USA, you'd say "to the north of the USA" or "to the northern US"
The goal is metexperience a new culture while working there, for a few months.
The goal is experience a new culture while working there for a few months.
So, as iI'm begginning ito learn English, iI've been training forto improve until themy fluency.
So, as I'm beginning to learn English, I've been training to improve my fluency.
I don't hopeaim to speak perfectly, but iI want to be understood so that I can communicate.
I don't aim to speak perfectly, but I want to be understood so that I can communicate.
I am currently studying nutrition and iI like street runrunning, so iI created a newsletter about performanceathletic nutrition, where iI write about carbs, protein, supplementations, etc.
I am currently studying nutrition and I like running, so I created a newsletter about athletic nutrition, where I write about carbs, protein, supplements, etc.
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I am going to travel
Me and my boyfriend decided make ato go travelling, in at the last of thisend of last year, to athe north ofrom the EUA.USA
Me and my boyfriend decided to go travelling, in at the end of last year, to the north of the USA
The goal is met aencounter new cultures while working there, for a few months.
The goal is encounter new cultures while working there for a few months.
So, as iI'm a begginigner in English, iI've been tpraining for improve until thectising until I can reach fluency.
So, as I'm a beginner in English, I've been practising until I can reach fluency
I don't hope to speak perfectly, but iI want to be understood so that I can communicate.
I don't hope to speak perfectly, but I want to be understood so that I can communicate.
I am currently studying nutrition and iI like to run in the street runs, so iI created a newsletter about performance nutrition, where iI write about carbs, protein, supplementations, etc.
I am currently studying nutrition and I like to run in the streets, so I created a newsletter about performance nutrition, where I write about carbs, protein, supplements, etc.
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I’m gonna take a trip
Me and my boyfriend decided mtake a travelip, in the last of this year, to athe north from the EUA.
Me and my boyfriend decided take a trip, in the last of this year, to the north from the EUA.
The goal is metto experience a new culture while we work there, for a few months.
The goal is to experience a new culture while we work there, for a few months.
So, as iI'm begginning in English, iI've been training forto improve until themy fluency.
So, as I'm beginning in English, I've been training to improve my fluency.
I don't hope to speak perfectly, but iI want to be understood so that I can communicate.
I don't hope to speak perfectly, but I want to be understood so that I can communicate.
I am currently studying nutrition and iI like to street run, so iI created a newsletter about performance nutrition, where iI write about carbs, protein, supplementation, etc.
I am currently studying nutrition and I like to street run, so I created a newsletter about performance nutrition, where I write about carbs, protein, supplementation, etc.
Me and my boyfriend and I decided make ato travel, in at the lastend of this year, to a north from the northern EUA.
My boyfriend and I decided to travel at the end of this year to the northern EUA.
I was not sure if you wanted to travel to the northern EUA or to an unspecified location north of the EUA.
TheOur goal is metto experience a new culture while working there, for a few months.
Our goal is to experience a new culture while working there for a few months.
So, as iI'm begginig inning English, i I've been training forto improve until themy fluency.
So as I'm beginning English I've been training to improve my fluency.
I don't hopeneed to speak perfectly, but iI want to be understood so that I can communicate.
I don't need to speak perfectly, but I want to be understood so that I can communicate.
I am currently studying nutrition, and i like street runI enjoy running, so iI created a newsletter about performance nutrition, where iI write about carbs, protein, supplementation, etc.
I am currently studying nutrition, and I enjoy running, so I created a newsletter about performance nutrition where I write about carbs, protein, supplementation, etc.
I would consider splitting the sentence into multiple thoughts to avoid the sentence becoming too long. “Like” works, but “enjoy” adds a little more depth.
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Awesome work. Your communication is mostly very clear.
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Me and my boyfriend decided make a travel, in the last of this year, to a north from the EUA.
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Me and my boyfriend decided
Me and my boyfriend decided Google Translate tells me EUA is Portugese for the USA. "North from the USA" would mean starting at the USA and going North (i.e. going to Canada). If you're going to northern parts of the USA, you'd say "to the north of the USA" or "to the northern US" |
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The goal is met a new culture while work there, for a few months.
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I am currently studying nutrition and i like street run, so i created a newsletter about performance nutrition, where i write about carbs, protein, suplementation, etc.
I am currently studying nutrition, and I would consider splitting the sentence into multiple thoughts to avoid the sentence becoming too long. “Like” works, but “enjoy” adds a little more depth.
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I am currently studying nutrition and
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