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I gonna make a travel

Me and my boyfriend decided make a travel, in the last of this year, to a north from the EUA. The goal is met a new culture while work there, for a few months. So, as i'm begginig in English, i've been training for improve until the fluency. I don't hope to speak perfectly, but i want to be understood so that I can communicate.

I am currently studying nutrition and i like street run, so i created a newsletter about performance nutrition, where i write about carbs, protein, suplementation, etc.


Eu e meu namorado decidimos fazer uma viagem, no final desse ano, para o norte dos EUA. O objetivo é conhecer uma cultura nova enquanto trabalhamos lá, por alguns meses. Então, como eu sou iniciante no inglês, eu tenho treinado para evoluir até a fluência. Eu não espero falar perfeitamente, mas eu quero ser entendida para conseguir me comunicar.

Eu atualmente estou estudando nutrição e eu gosto de corrida de rua, então eu criei uma newsletter sobre nutrição na performance, onde eu escrevo sobre carboidrato, proteína, suplementação, etc.

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I gonna make aam going to travel

Me and my boyfriend decided make ato travel, in at the lastend of this year, to athe north ofrom the EUAUSA (?).

Google Translate tells me EUA is Portugese for the USA.

"North from the USA" would mean starting at the USA and going North (i.e. going to Canada). If you're going to northern parts of the USA, you'd say "to the north of the USA" or "to the northern US"

The goal is metexperience a new culture while working there, for a few months.

So, as iI'm begginning ito learn English, iI've been training forto improve until themy fluency.

I don't hopeaim to speak perfectly, but iI want to be understood so that I can communicate.

I am currently studying nutrition and iI like street runrunning, so iI created a newsletter about performanceathletic nutrition, where iI write about carbs, protein, supplementations, etc.

I gonna make aam going to travel

Me and my boyfriend decided make ato go travelling, in at the last of thisend of last year, to athe north ofrom the EUA.USA

The goal is met aencounter new cultures while working there, for a few months.

So, as iI'm a begginigner in English, iI've been tpraining for improve until thectising until I can reach fluency.

I don't hope to speak perfectly, but iI want to be understood so that I can communicate.

I am currently studying nutrition and iI like to run in the street runs, so iI created a newsletter about performance nutrition, where iI write about carbs, protein, supplementations, etc.

I’m gonna mtake a travelip

Me and my boyfriend decided mtake a travelip, in the last of this year, to athe north from the EUA.

The goal is metto experience a new culture while we work there, for a few months.

So, as iI'm begginning in English, iI've been training forto improve until themy fluency.

I don't hope to speak perfectly, but iI want to be understood so that I can communicate.

I am currently studying nutrition and iI like to street run, so iI created a newsletter about performance nutrition, where iI write about carbs, protein, supplementation, etc.

Me and my boyfriend and I decided make ato travel, in at the lastend of this year, to a north from the northern EUA.

I was not sure if you wanted to travel to the northern EUA or to an unspecified location north of the EUA.

TheOur goal is metto experience a new culture while working there, for a few months.

So, as iI'm begginig inning English, i I've been training forto improve until themy fluency.

I don't hopeneed to speak perfectly, but iI want to be understood so that I can communicate.

I am currently studying nutrition, and i like street runI enjoy running, so iI created a newsletter about performance nutrition, where iI write about carbs, protein, supplementation, etc.

I would consider splitting the sentence into multiple thoughts to avoid the sentence becoming too long. “Like” works, but “enjoy” adds a little more depth.

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Awesome work. Your communication is mostly very clear.

I gonna make a travel


I’m gonna mtake a travelip

I gonna make aam going to travel

I gonna make aam going to travel

Me and my boyfriend decided make a travel, in the last of this year, to a north from the EUA.


Me and my boyfriend and I decided make ato travel, in at the lastend of this year, to a north from the northern EUA.

I was not sure if you wanted to travel to the northern EUA or to an unspecified location north of the EUA.

Me and my boyfriend decided mtake a travelip, in the last of this year, to athe north from the EUA.

Me and my boyfriend decided make ato go travelling, in at the last of thisend of last year, to athe north ofrom the EUA.USA

Me and my boyfriend decided make ato travel, in at the lastend of this year, to athe north ofrom the EUAUSA (?).

Google Translate tells me EUA is Portugese for the USA. "North from the USA" would mean starting at the USA and going North (i.e. going to Canada). If you're going to northern parts of the USA, you'd say "to the north of the USA" or "to the northern US"

The goal is met a new culture while work there, for a few months.


TheOur goal is metto experience a new culture while working there, for a few months.

The goal is metto experience a new culture while we work there, for a few months.

The goal is met aencounter new cultures while working there, for a few months.

The goal is metexperience a new culture while working there, for a few months.

So, as i'm begginig in English, i've been training for improve until the fluency.


So, as iI'm begginig inning English, i I've been training forto improve until themy fluency.

So, as iI'm begginning in English, iI've been training forto improve until themy fluency.

So, as iI'm a begginigner in English, iI've been tpraining for improve until thectising until I can reach fluency.

So, as iI'm begginning ito learn English, iI've been training forto improve until themy fluency.

I don't hope to speak perfectly, but i want to be understood so that I can communicate.


I don't hopeneed to speak perfectly, but iI want to be understood so that I can communicate.

I don't hope to speak perfectly, but iI want to be understood so that I can communicate.

I don't hope to speak perfectly, but iI want to be understood so that I can communicate.

I don't hopeaim to speak perfectly, but iI want to be understood so that I can communicate.

I am currently studying nutrition and i like street run, so i created a newsletter about performance nutrition, where i write about carbs, protein, suplementation, etc.


I am currently studying nutrition, and i like street runI enjoy running, so iI created a newsletter about performance nutrition, where iI write about carbs, protein, supplementation, etc.

I would consider splitting the sentence into multiple thoughts to avoid the sentence becoming too long. “Like” works, but “enjoy” adds a little more depth.

I am currently studying nutrition and iI like to street run, so iI created a newsletter about performance nutrition, where iI write about carbs, protein, supplementation, etc.

I am currently studying nutrition and iI like to run in the street runs, so iI created a newsletter about performance nutrition, where iI write about carbs, protein, supplementations, etc.

I am currently studying nutrition and iI like street runrunning, so iI created a newsletter about performanceathletic nutrition, where iI write about carbs, protein, supplementations, etc.

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