Jan. 18, 2021
Dealing with Coronavirus
An average Joe like I don't know at all how the mutation of a coronavirus works and how often it changes the nature of the virus. However, it seems to me that even the researchers don't know how it works and nobody will end up knowing about it. The antibodies of whooping cough and Japanese B encephalitis usually last from 10 years to 20 years, but the effect of an influenza vaccination will only last from 4 months to half a year.
The researchers don't know that mechanism and if a researcher knew the mechanism, the researcher could get a Nobel award for sure. But with that said, they say that a virus isn't an organism, but the mutation looks like so often to make resistance to the vaccination. A bacteria is an organism and it has made resistance to the antibiotics for a long time.
When we discovered an antibiotic for the first time, we were certain that humankind finally won over the bacteria perfectly. The bacteria are sure to have own cell membrane and the antibiotics destroy this cell membrane, then the bacteria cannot maintain its form anymore. The cell membrane cannot avoid collapsing.
We once thought we had won any of bacterias, but that's not true. Even now the bacterias still exist and getting tougher and tougher against the antibiotics. In accordance with new generation of an antibiotic, and It has evolved to resistant to new antibiotics. Like a bacteria, a virus seems to have evolved gradually to resist to the vaccination.
According to the research of an antibody in infected coronavirus patients, a vaccination most likely is valid for four months or so, and this means that we have to vaccinate for every season. Our future will be dreadful days to come. These awful days most likely will become
our ordinarily days. We have to put on a surgical mask every day.
So we have to find any possible avenues to resolve this impossible mission, and I wish it could be done with the latest medical knowledge.
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Dealing with A Coronavirus
Dealing with Coronavirus
An average Joe like Ime doesn't know at all how the mutation of a coronavirus works and how often it changes the nature of the virus.
An average Joe like me doesn't know at all how the mutation of coronavirus works and how often it changes the nature of the virus.
Using 'a' indicates that you mean not this specific covid-19 coronavirus, but a corona virus in general.
However, it seems to me that even the researchers don't know how it works and nobody will end up knowing about it.
The antibodies of whooping cough and Japanese B encephalitis usually last from 10 years to 20 years, but the effect of an influenza vaccination will only last from 4 months to half a year.
But that said, they say that a virus isn't an organism, but the mutation looks like soit often to make resistance to resists the vaccination.
But that said, they say that a virus isn't an organism, but the mutation looks like it often resists the vaccination.
A bacteria is an organism and it has madebuilt resistance to theagainst antibiotics for a long time.
A bacteria is an organism and it has built resistance against antibiotics for a long time.
In English, articles like 'the' are often omitted.
When we found that an antibiotics for the first time, we were certain that humankind had finally won over theagainst bacteria perfectly.
When we found antibiotics for the first time, we were certain that humankind had finally won against bacteria.
Even now the bacterias still exist and gettare becoming tougher and tougher against thein their resistance of antibiotics.
Even now bacterias still exist and are becoming tougher and tougher in their resistance of antibiotics.
In accordance with new generation of an antibiotic, and It has evolved to resistant to new antibiotics. In accordance with new generation of an antibiotic, and It has evolved to resistant to new antibiotics.
I don't understand the meaning of this sentence, maybe try rewording it.
Like a bacteria, a virus seems to have evolved gradually to resist to the vaccination.
According to the research of an antibody in infected coronavirus patients, a vaccination most likely is valid for four months or so, and this means that we have to vaccinate for every season.
Our future will be dreadful for days to come. Our future will be dreadful for days to come.
These awful days most likely will be ordinarily days.
These awful days most likely will be ordinary days.
Ordinary is an adjective, ordinarily is more of an adverb.
We have to put on a surgical mask every day.
So we have to find any possible avenues to resolve this impossible mission, and I wish it could be done with the latest medical knowledge.
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You had some really great sentences! I would say a thing to focus on, when it comes to using articles, think if you want to talk about the noun in general or a specific noun.
For example
A coronavirus = the type of virus (the shape), not just our current coronavirus
Coronavirus (with no article) = it would be assumed you're talking about the current pandemic coronavirus.
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Dealing with A Coronavirus
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An average Joe like I don't know at all how the mutation of a coronavirus works and how often it changes the nature of the virus.
An average Joe like Using 'a' indicates that you mean not this specific covid-19 coronavirus, but a corona virus in general. |
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However, it seems to me that even the researchers don't know how it works and nobody will end up knowing about it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The antibodies of whooping cough and Japanese B encephalitis usually last from 10 years to 20 years, but the effect of an influenza vaccination will only last from 4 months to half a year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The researchers don't know that mechanism and if a researcher knew the mechanism, the researcher could get a Nobel award for sure. |
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But that said, they say that a virus isn't an organism, but the mutation looks like so often to make resistance to the vaccination.
But that said, they say that a virus isn't an organism, but the mutation looks like |
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A bacteria is an organism and it has made resistance to the antibiotics for a long time.
A bacteria is an organism and it has In English, articles like 'the' are often omitted. |
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When we found that an antibiotic for the first time, we were certain that humankind finally won over the bacteria perfectly.
When we found |
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The bacteria are sure to have own cell membrane and the antibiotics destroy this cell membrane, then the bacteria cannot maintain its form anymore. |
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The cell membrane cannot avoid collapsing. |
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We once thought we had won any of bacterias, but that's not true. |
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Even now the bacterias still exist and getting tougher and tougher against the antibiotics.
Even now |
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In accordance with new generation of an antibiotic, and It has evolved to resistant to new antibiotics. In accordance with new generation of an antibiotic, and It has evolved to resistant to new antibiotics. In accordance with new generation of an antibiotic, and It has evolved to resistant to new antibiotics. I don't understand the meaning of this sentence, maybe try rewording it. |
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Like a bacteria, a virus seems to have evolved gradually to resist to the vaccination. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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According to the research of an antibody in infected coronavirus patients, a vaccination most likely is valid for four months or so, and this means that we have to vaccinate for every season. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Our future will be dreadful days to come. Our future will be dreadful for days to come. Our future will be dreadful for days to come. |
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These awful days most likely will be ordinarily days.
These awful days most likely will be ordinar Ordinary is an adjective, ordinarily is more of an adverb. |
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We have to put on a surgical mask every day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So we have to find any possible avenues to resolve this impossible mission, and I wish it could be done with the latest medical knowledge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Dealing with Coronavirus |
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But with that said, they say that a virus isn't an organism, but the mutation looks like so often to make resistance to the vaccination. |
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These awful days most likely will become |
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our ordinarily days. |
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When we discovered an antibiotic for the first time, we were certain that humankind finally won over the bacteria perfectly. |
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