May 8, 2025
Are there any challenges you want to have a go at one day?
One day I would like to hold my art gallery. Even though I don't have much confidence whether my painting can be sold or not, I want to show my painting for many people. So I have to paint more.
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Are there any challenges you want to have a go at one day?
One day I would like to hold myave my own art gallery.
One day I would like to have my own art gallery.
You could also say ‘host my own art show’. It depends on your intention.
Have your own art gallery = owning an art gallery, where you would show your own art work and others (or just your own artwork).
Host your own art show = you would like to show off your art in an art show. This means that you don’t own the gallery but you are responsible for overseeing and managing the various aspects of an event, in this case showcasing (showing off) your art.
Even though I don't have mucha lot of confidence in whether my paintings can be sold or not, I want to show my painting for manys to a lot of people.
Even though I don't have a lot of confidence in whether my paintings can be sold or not, I want to show my paintings to a lot of people.
I’m assuming that you have multiple paintings you wish to show, so I made the word plural. Whilst ‘many people’ works, I think it’s more natural to say ‘a lot of people’ in this context.
So I have to paint more.
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Your writing is improving with every post! You’re doing really well. :)
I think you should pursue your dream to show your art! It’s nice to have something to aspire to and something that you will achieve! (I have faith that if you keep at it, you will achieve your dream!)
I’m wishing you good luck!
May 9, 2025
Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
Not only the corrections but also your additional comments are very encouraging.
I'm going to continue studying and painting.
One day, I would like to holdst my own art gallery.
One day, I would like to host my own art gallery.
Even though, I don't have much confidence whether my paintings can be sold or not, I want to show my painting fors to many people.
Even though, I don't have much confidence whether my paintings can be sold or not, I want to show my paintings to many people.
So, I have to paint more. So, I have to paint more.
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Keep it up! I hope you are able to achieve this one day!
May 9, 2025
Thank you very much for the careful correction.
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One day I would like to hold my art gallery.
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One day I would like to h You could also say ‘host my own art show’. It depends on your intention. Have your own art gallery = owning an art gallery, where you would show your own art work and others (or just your own artwork). Host your own art show = you would like to show off your art in an art show. This means that you don’t own the gallery but you are responsible for overseeing and managing the various aspects of an event, in this case showcasing (showing off) your art. |
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Even though I don't have much confidence whether my painting can be sold or not, I want to show my painting for many people.
Even though, I don't have much confidence whether my paintings can be sold or not, I want to show my painting
Even though I don't have I’m assuming that you have multiple paintings you wish to show, so I made the word plural. Whilst ‘many people’ works, I think it’s more natural to say ‘a lot of people’ in this context. |
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