Jan. 30, 2026
In the garden of my apartment, I'm glowing several kinds of plant and flowers. However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them became unhealty. From a day on when the hign tempreture reacned only 0 degree, the dianthus buds have not opened. Also, viola do not become big. I hope the spring comes early. I planted tulip bulbs last December, so I'm looking forward to seeing them sprout.
アパートのベランダで、いくつかの植物を育てています。でも、ここ数日の寒さでほとんどが元気を失ってしまいました。最高気温が0℃だった日から、ダイアンサスのつぼみは開かなくなってしまい、ビオラも大きくならなくなってしまいました。早く春になってほしいです。去年の12月にチューリップの球根を植えたので、芽が出るのを楽しみにしています。
Flowers in the gardenbalcony
Flowers in the balcony
Since it is ベランダ in the Japanese version, balcony is a better matching word.
In the gardenbalcony of my apartment, I'm glrowing several kinds of plants and flowers.
In the balcony of my apartment, I'm growing several kinds of plants and flowers.
However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them became unhealthy. However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them became unhealthy.
From athe day on whenich the hignhest temprerature reacnhed only 0 degrees, the dianthus buds have not opened.
From the day on which the highest temperature reached only 0 degrees, the dianthus buds have not opened.
Also, the viola do not become bis have stopped growing.
Also, the violas have stopped growing.
I hope the spring comes earlysoon.
I hope spring comes soon.
I planted tulip bulbs last December, so I'm looking forward to seeing them sprout.
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Hope the weather gets better for them (and us) soon! 🌻🌼🌷
Flowers in the garden
In the garden of my apartment, I'm glrowing several kinds of plants and flowers.
In the garden of my apartment, I'm growing several kinds of plants and flowers.
However, because of the coldness weather in the(se) past few days, most of them have becaome unhealthy.
However, because of the cold weather in the(se) past few days, most of them have become unhealthy.
From a day on whenOne day, the hignhest temprerature reacned only 0 degree,corded outside was 0 degrees, and since then the dianthus buds have not opened.
One day, the highest temperature recorded outside was 0 degrees, and since then the dianthus buds have not opened.
Also, my viola do not become bigplans don't grow in size.
Also, my viola plans don't grow in size.
I hope the spring comes early.
I planted tulip bulbs last December, so I'm looking forward to seeing them sprout.
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Well done!
In the garden of my apartment's garden, I'm glrowing several kinds of plant and flowers.
In my apartment's garden, I'm growing several kinds of plant and flowers.
"Apartment's garden" sounds a little odd, as a garden is normally used for an outdoor patch of flowers, and most apartments don't have their own outdoor areas as the outdoor areas are common areas of the apartment block. Is it definitely a garden, or are you just growing flowers on your balcony?
However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them have becaome unhealthy.
However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them have become unhealthy.
Since being unhealthy is a state, and they're presumably still in that state, I think "have become" is a little more natural.
FromSince a day on when thwhere hignhest temprerature reacnedwas only 0 degree, the dianthus buds have not opened.
Since a day where highest temperature was only 0 degree, the dianthus buds have not opened.
Also, the viola do not becomes have not gotten bigger.
Also, the violas have not gotten bigger.
In the garden of my apartment, I'm glrowing several kinds of plant and flowers.
In the garden of my apartment, I'm growing several kinds of plant and flowers.
From a day on when the hignh temprerature reacnhed only 0 degree, the dianthus buds have not opened.
From a day on when the high temperature reached only 0 degree, the dianthus buds have not opened.
Since the day when the highest temperature was only 0 degrees,(?)
Also, the violas doid not become big.
Also, the violas did not become big.
I hope the spring comes early.
I hope spring comes early.
In the garden of my apartment, I'm glrowing several kinds of plants and flowers.
In the garden of my apartment, I'm growing several kinds of plants and flowers.
However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them became unhealty. However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them became unhealty.
From a day on when the hignEver since the temprerature reacned onlydropped to 0 degrees, the dDianthus buds have not yet opened.
Ever since the temperature dropped to 0 degrees, the Dianthus buds have not yet opened.
Also, vViola doid not become biggrow (too much).
Also, Viola did not grow (too much).
I hope the spring comes early (or soon). I hope the spring comes early (or soon).
I planted tTulip bulbs last December, so I'm looking forward to seeing them sprout.
I planted Tulip bulbs last December, so I'm looking forward to seeing them sprout.
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In the garden of my apartment, I'm glowing several kinds of plant and flowers.
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In the garden of my apartment, I'm g
In "Apartment's garden" sounds a little odd, as a garden is normally used for an outdoor patch of flowers, and most apartments don't have their own outdoor areas as the outdoor areas are common areas of the apartment block. Is it definitely a garden, or are you just growing flowers on your balcony?
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However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them became unhealty. However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them became unhealty. However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them became unhealty.
However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them have bec Since being unhealthy is a state, and they're presumably still in that state, I think "have become" is a little more natural.
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From a day on when the hign tempreture reacned only 0 degree, the dianthus buds have not opened.
From a day on when the hig Since the day when the highest temperature was only 0 degrees,(?)
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I planted tulip bulbs last December, so I'm looking forward to seeing them sprout.
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