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Mana

Jan. 30, 2026

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Flowers in the garden

In the garden of my apartment, I'm glowing several kinds of plant and flowers. However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them became unhealty. From a day on when the hign tempreture reacned only 0 degree, the dianthus buds have not opened. Also, viola do not become big. I hope the spring comes early. I planted tulip bulbs last December, so I'm looking forward to seeing them sprout.


アパートのベランダで、いくつかの植物を育てています。でも、ここ数日の寒さでほとんどが元気を失ってしまいました。最高気温が0℃だった日から、ダイアンサスのつぼみは開かなくなってしまい、ビオラも大きくならなくなってしまいました。早く春になってほしいです。去年の12月にチューリップの球根を植えたので、芽が出るのを楽しみにしています。

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Flowers in the gardenbalcony

Since it is ベランダ in the Japanese version, balcony is a better matching word.

In the gardenbalcony of my apartment, I'm glrowing several kinds of plants and flowers.

However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them became unhealthy.

From athe day on whenich the hignhest temprerature reacnhed only 0 degrees, the dianthus buds have not opened.

Also, the viola do not become bis have stopped growing.

I hope the spring comes earlysoon.

I planted tulip bulbs last December, so I'm looking forward to seeing them sprout.

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Hope the weather gets better for them (and us) soon! 🌻🌼🌷

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Mana

Jan. 31, 2026

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Thank you for your correction 🌷🌼

Flowers in the garden

In the garden of my apartment, I'm glrowing several kinds of plants and flowers.

However, because of the coldness weather in the(se) past few days, most of them have becaome unhealthy.

From a day on whenOne day, the hignhest temprerature reacned only 0 degree,corded outside was 0 degrees, and since then the dianthus buds have not opened.

Also, my viola do not become bigplans don't grow in size.

I hope the spring comes early.

I planted tulip bulbs last December, so I'm looking forward to seeing them sprout.

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Well done!

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Mana

Jan. 31, 2026

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Thank you very much!

In the garden of my apartment's garden, I'm glrowing several kinds of plant and flowers.

"Apartment's garden" sounds a little odd, as a garden is normally used for an outdoor patch of flowers, and most apartments don't have their own outdoor areas as the outdoor areas are common areas of the apartment block. Is it definitely a garden, or are you just growing flowers on your balcony?

However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them have becaome unhealthy.

Since being unhealthy is a state, and they're presumably still in that state, I think "have become" is a little more natural.

FromSince a day on when thwhere hignhest temprerature reacnedwas only 0 degree, the dianthus buds have not opened.

Also, the viola do not becomes have not gotten bigger.

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Mana

Jan. 31, 2026

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Thank you very much for your corrections! Yes, I should have said “balcony”.

In the garden of my apartment, I'm glrowing several kinds of plant and flowers.

From a day on when the hignh temprerature reacnhed only 0 degree, the dianthus buds have not opened.

Since the day when the highest temperature was only 0 degrees,(?)

Also, the violas doid not become big.

I hope the spring comes early.

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Mana

Jan. 31, 2026

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Thank you very much!!

In the garden of my apartment, I'm glrowing several kinds of plants and flowers.

However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them became unhealty.

From a day on when the hignEver since the temprerature reacned onlydropped to 0 degrees, the dDianthus buds have not yet opened.

Also, vViola doid not become biggrow (too much).

I hope the spring comes early (or soon).

I planted tTulip bulbs last December, so I'm looking forward to seeing them sprout.

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Mana

Jan. 31, 2026

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Thank you very much!!

Flowers in the garden


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Flowers in the gardenbalcony

Since it is ベランダ in the Japanese version, balcony is a better matching word.

In the garden of my apartment, I'm glowing several kinds of plant and flowers.


In the garden of my apartment, I'm glrowing several kinds of plants and flowers.

In the garden of my apartment, I'm glrowing several kinds of plant and flowers.

In the garden of my apartment's garden, I'm glrowing several kinds of plant and flowers.

"Apartment's garden" sounds a little odd, as a garden is normally used for an outdoor patch of flowers, and most apartments don't have their own outdoor areas as the outdoor areas are common areas of the apartment block. Is it definitely a garden, or are you just growing flowers on your balcony?

In the garden of my apartment, I'm glrowing several kinds of plants and flowers.

In the gardenbalcony of my apartment, I'm glrowing several kinds of plants and flowers.

However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them became unhealty.


However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them became unhealty.

However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them have becaome unhealthy.

Since being unhealthy is a state, and they're presumably still in that state, I think "have become" is a little more natural.

However, because of the coldness weather in the(se) past few days, most of them have becaome unhealthy.

However, because of the coldness in the past few days, most of them became unhealthy.

From a day on when the hign tempreture reacned only 0 degree, the dianthus buds have not opened.


From a day on when the hignEver since the temprerature reacned onlydropped to 0 degrees, the dDianthus buds have not yet opened.

From a day on when the hignh temprerature reacnhed only 0 degree, the dianthus buds have not opened.

Since the day when the highest temperature was only 0 degrees,(?)

FromSince a day on when thwhere hignhest temprerature reacnedwas only 0 degree, the dianthus buds have not opened.

From a day on whenOne day, the hignhest temprerature reacned only 0 degree,corded outside was 0 degrees, and since then the dianthus buds have not opened.

From athe day on whenich the hignhest temprerature reacnhed only 0 degrees, the dianthus buds have not opened.

Also, viola do not become big.


Also, vViola doid not become biggrow (too much).

Also, the violas doid not become big.

Also, the viola do not becomes have not gotten bigger.

Also, my viola do not become bigplans don't grow in size.

Also, the viola do not become bis have stopped growing.

I hope the spring comes early.


I hope the spring comes early (or soon).

I hope the spring comes early.

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I hope the spring comes earlysoon.

I planted tulip bulbs last December, so I'm looking forward to seeing them sprout.


I planted tTulip bulbs last December, so I'm looking forward to seeing them sprout.

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