Clumsy? yYeah.

Make sure to capitalize!

In my house, I help normalyly help with the schores, but when we have to do other things that we don't do usually do, I will defeinitely make some mistakes.

Just a couple of spelling mistakes. Also, the adverb in these cases sounds better in front of the verb ("normally help," rather than "help normally." Same for "usually" and "do").

I came to the consclusion that maybe it is because I'm more intuitive than sensor.

"conslusion" => "conclusion." I'm not sure what sensor refers to. If it is your mother, then the word would be "her." If it is not a person, you must add an article ("the sensor" in place of "sensor").

OAnother common thing to happen is that I goet distracted so easily forby my own thoughts that I have to tell my mom to repeat againherself because I didn't listen to what she has told me to do.

"Another" takes the place of "other" because you're talking about a specific thing (what happens is "an other thing" gets merged into "another thing"). When you talk about habitual actions, you use the present tense, so "got" becomes "get." The preposition "by" is used instead of "for" in this context. To repeat oneself is to say something again, so "repeat herself" is a more natural way of phrasing it.

I can't help myself no toto not listen.

I think you could say it either way ("not to" or "to not"), but this is just a tweak I would personally make.

So, I came to another conclusion: I can't concentrate ion two things at once.

The "so" needs a comma after it, just like "thus" or "consequently." On the bright side, "another" is correct here! The preposition "on" is used here instead of "in," because it is part of the verb "to concentrate on [something]."

She likes to do things fast and solve problems with practical solutions.

"practic" => "practical"

Even she oftShe evens tells me often that I think a lot inabout things that are not important, like sexuality, religion or, and phyilosophy, or that I'm slow at doing simple things aslike house shold chores.

I'm going to be honest, I don't know why it's better, but, "she even tells me often" sounds less clunky than "even she often tells me." I think that it's because it's in writing; some people would speak it like that in an informal setting, but not write it that way. The verb is "to think about" rather than "to think in," so the preposition changes there, despite splitting the verb with "a lot." However, adding "a lot" to the middle of the verb shows that you know the ways you can manipulate those kinds of verbs. "Phylosophy" => "philosophy," that's a tricky one! I would use "and" instead of "or" just because you're trying to group together those three, not split them up. "House chores" is correct, though "household chores" is a more natural way of saying it.

But house shold chores orand physical work (trabajo físico?)

Again, "and" would be used because the chores and work are being grouped together. Trabajo físico en inglés literalmente sería «physical work», o «manual labor» es otra manera de decirlo.

are not my only problems, I'm also clumsy forat moving my body.

Because the previous part of the sentence had both the chores and the physical labor, "problems" is plural. The preposition "at" makes a little more sense here. I see in the sentences down below that you talk about dancing, so an English expression to say someone is bad at dancing is, "to have two left feet."

I was in a fraternity of Caporales dancers -—I left because my days were becoming busier-, —and I had a crisis because I started with my sister and she got better way faster than me.

The em-dash (—) doesn't have a comma after it, because it works similar to a comma.

I felt really bad atfor myself, especially when I was preparing for some contest with my sister and other friends.

"To feel bad for [someone]" not "to feel bad at [someone]."

The ones in charge, -a couple-, were obligated to choose just five women of eight.

Enclosing a piece of you sentence with commas on either side allows you to add information to a sentence that doesn't change the meaning fundamentally, i.e. you could remove what is in the commas from the sentence, and it would still make sense. "Chose" => "choose"

I almost believed that I was simply not born for it, thaand it felt horrible.

"And" here acts as a conjunction, joining two parts of the sentence. You could very much use "that" instead of "it," subjectively, though, I think "it" seems better fit there.

Luckily, I was not alone,: my family and friends were there to tell me that I shouldn't think like that, that I had been doing very well lately.

The colon (:) just shows that you are elaborating on a previous statement. "My family and friends were there" provides context for "I was not alone."

They reminded me of how far I gothad come and how much better I gothad gotten since I started with the rehearsals.

Reminded is in the past tense, so the verb is conjugated to reflect that. The other changes are just little things that make it more smooth, but aren't strictly required.

I gained confindence again, and I put a lot of effort like I have never done.

"Confindence" => "confidence," "effot" => "effort."

In my house I help normally with the schores, but when we have to do other things that we don't do usually, I will defeinitely make some mistake.

your sentence is fine, but I personally would've written:
In my house I usually help with the chores without an issue, but whenever we do something out of the ordinary, I always make a mistake.

I came to the consclusion that maybe it's because I'm more intuitive than sensorperceptive.

I think "sensory" would also work.

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It's worse when there's music or my mom is watching something on TV.

"music" -> "music playing" sounds a bit better

I can't help myself no to listenbut listen to the music or TV.

So I came to another conclusion: I can't concentrate ion two things at once.

She likes to do things fast and solve problems with practical solutions.

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are not my only problem, I'm also clumsy forwhen moving my body.

I was in a fraternity of Caporales dancers -I left because my days were becoming busier-, and I had a crisis because I started with my sister and she got better way faster than me.

I felt really bad atfor myself, especially when I was preparing for some contest with my sister and other friends.

We were going to do a choreography.

The ones in charge -a couple- were obligated to choose just five women out of eight.

I got really anxious back then and started to doubt if I was really capable of performing a choreography.

They remind ofed me how far I gothad gotten and how much better I gothad gotten since I started with the rehearsals.

I gained confindence again and I put a lot of effort like I haved never done.

Nowadays, sometimes I still feel bad because of somthe difficulties I have at doing certain things, but I'm trying to accept that and just move forward because I like learning and dancing.

Clumsy? yYeah

INormally in my house I help normaly with the schores, but when we have to do other things that we don't do usually, I will defeinitely make some mistakes.

I came to the consclusion that maybe it is because I'm more intuitive than sensorperceptive.

OAnother common thing tohat happens is that I goet distracted so easily forby my own thoughts that I have to tellask my mom to repeat againherself because I didn't listen to what she has told me to do.

"Ask" is more polite than "tell" and we usually ask our parents to do something.

I can't helpmake myself no to listen.

So I came to another conclusion: I can't concentrate ion two things at once.

She likes to do things fast and solve problems with practical solutions.

Even sShe oftens tells me that I think a lot inabout things that are not important, like sexuality, religion or phyilosophy, or that I'm slow at doing simple things such as house schores.

But house schores or physical work (trabajo físico?)

are not my only problem, I'm also clumsy forwhen moving my body.

I was in a fraternity of Caporales dancers -but I left because my days were becoming busier-, and. Also, I had a crisis because I started withjoined the fraternity at the same time as my sister and she got better way faster than me.

Or: because I started dancing at the same time as my sister

I felt really bad about myself, especially when I was preparing for somea contest with my sister and other friends.

We were going to do a choreographyed dance.

The ones in charge - a couple - were obligated to chose just five women of eight.

I got really anxious back then and started to doubt if I was really capable of performing a choreographyed dance.

I almost believed that I was simply not born for it, t. That felt horrible.

Luckily, I was not alone, m. My family and friends were there to tell me that I shouldn't think like that, and that I had been doing very well lately.

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