Oct. 30, 2024
It's been a while since I last wrote here. Yeah, I do have eased up and slowed down with my English studying, pretty much just from being lazy and procrastinating a lot. Also, the end of the year is closing in and it might have something to do with my energy. That doesn't mean I quit studying English. Anyways, I've been playing some Club Penguin for a couple of days because of the halloween event. Yes, I'm a twenty one year old, grown man playing Club Penguin. But that's a tradition, Ok? I always visit CP for such events basically every year just for the nostalgic vibes. Plus, I can practice my English since it is a social game with players from all over the world.
Disney shut down the original Club Penguin in 2017, and since then, a plenty of unofficial versions came out and became available especially for old school fans, like me. Recently, I've discovered "Club Penguin Journey" where for my surprise, all of its servers are almost always full of players. It was really surprising for me because I only was aware of another CP version that was more popular here in Brazil, but it looks it's not the most popular worldwide comparing to that one.
It's funny because I still use my previous and awful nickname that I currently don't like it. This is because I have a weird fantasy of my old online friends actually recognizing me and my nickname from twelve years ago. People can dream, can't they? There's a misterious charm when you join the game and listen to the old tracks, decorate your igloo or even design your outfit. I know it sounds silly and dork, I can agree, but at the same time, it brings me back when I was young and more cheerful than the actual days. Sometimes I don't feel I'm an adult, I look more like a child inside an adult body, and I have no idea if this is good or not.
Club Penguin
It's been a while since I last wrote here.
Yeah, I do have eased up on and slowed down with my English studying, pretty much just from being lazy and procrastinating a lot.
Also, the end of the year is closing in and it might have something to do withbe affecting my energy.
As written, it makes it sound like your energy is causing the end of the year to close in.
That doesn't mean I've quit studying English.
Anyways, I've been playing some Club Penguin for a couple of days because of the hHalloween event.
I think it would be better to either say "...playing some Club Penguin because..." or "playing Club Penguin for a couple of days because...". I can't explain why, but it feels strange to have both of these elements together.
Yes, I'm a twenty -one -year -old, grown man playing Club Penguin.
But thait's a tradition, Ook?
I always visit CP for such events basically every year just for the nostalgic vibes.
Plus, I can practice my English since it is a social game with players from all over the world.
Disney shut down the original Club Penguin in 2017, and since then, a plenty of unofficial versions cahave come out and becaome available, especially for old school fans, like me.
The comma in front of "like" is correct, but because there are so many commas in this sentence, you might choose to remove that one for stylistic reasons.
Recently, I've discovered "Club Penguin Journey" where for, to my surprise, all of its servers are almost always full of players.
It was really surprising forto me, because I only was aware of another CP version that was more popular here in Brazil, but it looks it's not the mostas popular worldwide comparinged to that one.
It's funny because I still use my previous and awful nickname that I currently don't like it.
This is because I have a weird fantasy of my old online friends actually recognizing me and my nickname from twelve years ago.
People can dream, can't they?
There's a miysterious charm when you join the game and listen to the old tracks, decorate your igloo or even design your outfit.
I know it sounds silly and dorky, I can agree, but at the same time, it brings me back to when I was younger and more cheerful than the actual nowadays.
Dork -> noun
Dorky -> adjective
Sometimes I don't feel I'm an adult,; I lookfeel more like a child inside an adult body, and I have no idea if this is good or not.
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Aww this has made me miss Club Penguin! I didn't realise that the fan-made versions of Club Penguin were so popular - maybe I'll try one out for old times' sake haha.
Club Penguin
It's been a while since I last wrote here.
Yeah, I do have eased up and slowed down with my English studying, pretty much just from being lazy and procrastinating a lot.
Also, the end of the year is closing in and it might have something to do withbe affecting my energy.
That doesn't mean I quit studying English.
Anyways, I've been playing some Club Penguin for a couple of days because of the halloween event.
Yes, I'm a twenty one year old, grown man playing Club Penguin.
But that's a tradition, Ok?
I always visit CP for such events basically every year just for the nostalgic vibes.
Plus, I can practice my English since it is a social game with players from all over the world.
Disney shut down the original Club Penguin in 2017, and since then, a plentybunch of unofficial versions came out and became available especially for old school fans, like me.
Recently, I've discovered "Club Penguin Journey" where forto my surprise, all of its servers are almost always full of players.
It was really surprising for me because I only was aware of another CP version that was more popular here in Brazil, but it looks like it's not the most popular worldwide comparinged to that one.
It's funny because I still use my previous and awful nickname that I currently don't like it.
This is because I have a weird faintasy of hope that my old online friends actuawilly recognizing me and my nickname from twelve years ago.
People can dream, can't they?
There's a misterious charm when you join the game and listen to the old tracks, decorate your igloo or even design your outfit.
I know it sounds silly and dork, I can agree, but at the same time, it brings me back when I was young and more cheerful than the actual days.
Sometimes I don't feel like I'm an adult, I look more like a child inside an adult body, and I have no idea if this is good or not.
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screw what everybody else says. Do what makes you happy.
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