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paula9099

Aug. 3, 2025

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Clowns need to eat too

The funniest way that I feel capable to earn money is became a clown and trying to conect with people, either in the street or into a theater. I took clown classes some years ago and I loved it, I haven't found any other way as powerful as this one to conect with other person, because the people in the public are a really important character in a clown show. It is like a dialogue, the clown in the stage give an action, a word or just a glance to the public and the public answers laughing, moving, or clapping.
The truth is that I took clown classes to have fun and as a way to forget my problems, and if this activity has to be my way to earn money I think it isn't as fun as it is nowadays.

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The funniest way that I feel capable to earn money is to becaome a clown and tryingo try to connect with people, either in the street or into a theater.

- became is past tense, you want to use to become which is infinitive (same for trying -> to try)
- into a theater is used when you're talking about moving i.e I'm going into the theater to do xyz, if you are talking about being in the theater then you just use in

I took clown classes some years ago and I loved it, I haven't found any other way as powerful as this one to connect with other personople, because the people in the public are a really important characters in a clown show.

- having 'one' is not incorrect but far more natural to leave it out then to put it in
- either put other people (plural) or another person (singular)
- add s to characters as you are talking about people which are plural

It is like a dialogue, the clown in the stage giveing an action, a word or just a glance to the public and the public answers by laughing, moving, or clapping.

- give to giving to correct tense
- adding by makes it the sentence more natural here

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paula9099

Aug. 17, 2025

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Thanks a lot!

Clowns need to eat too!

Punctuation needed - can be a period (.) or an exclamation mark. In this case, given the funny nature of the question, it might be worth using !

The funniest way that I feel capable to earn money is to becaome a clown and trying too try and connect with people, either ion the street or into a theater.

I took clown classes some years ago and I loved it,. I haven't found any other way as powerful as this one to connect with other personople, because the people in the public are a really important character inpart of a clown show.

It is like a dialogue,; the clown ion the stage gives an action, a word or just a glance to the public and the public answers by laughing, moving, or clapping.

The truth is that I took clown classes to have fun and as a way to forget my problems, and i. If this activity hwas to be mythe way I had to earn money, I think it isn'twouldn't be as fun as it is nowadays.

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Great sentences! Some minor mistakes with prepositions (e.g. on vs. in, and some spellings.) Very well done :)

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paula9099

Aug. 17, 2025

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Thank you so much! :)

Clowns need to eat too


Clowns need to eat too!

Punctuation needed - can be a period (.) or an exclamation mark. In this case, given the funny nature of the question, it might be worth using !

The funniest way that I feel capable to earn money is became a clown and trying to conect with people, either in the street or into a theater.


The funniest way that I feel capable to earn money is to becaome a clown and trying too try and connect with people, either ion the street or into a theater.

The funniest way that I feel capable to earn money is to becaome a clown and tryingo try to connect with people, either in the street or into a theater.

- became is past tense, you want to use to become which is infinitive (same for trying -> to try) - into a theater is used when you're talking about moving i.e I'm going into the theater to do xyz, if you are talking about being in the theater then you just use in

It is like a dialogue, the clown in the stage give an action, a word or just a glance to the public and the public answers laughing, moving, or clapping.


It is like a dialogue,; the clown ion the stage gives an action, a word or just a glance to the public and the public answers by laughing, moving, or clapping.

It is like a dialogue, the clown in the stage giveing an action, a word or just a glance to the public and the public answers by laughing, moving, or clapping.

- give to giving to correct tense - adding by makes it the sentence more natural here

I took clown classes some years ago and I loved it, I haven't found any other way as powerful as this one to conect with other person, because the people in the public are a really important character in a clown show.


I took clown classes some years ago and I loved it,. I haven't found any other way as powerful as this one to connect with other personople, because the people in the public are a really important character inpart of a clown show.

I took clown classes some years ago and I loved it, I haven't found any other way as powerful as this one to connect with other personople, because the people in the public are a really important characters in a clown show.

- having 'one' is not incorrect but far more natural to leave it out then to put it in - either put other people (plural) or another person (singular) - add s to characters as you are talking about people which are plural

The truth is that I took clown classes to have fun and as a way to forget my problems, and if this activity has to be my way to earn money I think it isn't as fun as it is nowadays.


The truth is that I took clown classes to have fun and as a way to forget my problems, and i. If this activity hwas to be mythe way I had to earn money, I think it isn'twouldn't be as fun as it is nowadays.

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