May 1, 2022
Clown on unicycle
Happy clown perform on single-wheel bicycle, doing balances with a water jar on his head. The jar has some a cute flowers inside. The crowd is watching him. He is glad to entertain to all people, children and adults with his balances. This illustration can put a touch of joy in your lifes. It is perfect as a gift, too.
Clown onThe clown is on a unicycle.
If you are wanting to practice writing using creative/prose/poetic English you can keep what you have. If you want it to be correct grammatically and formal please see the correction.
HThe happy clown performs on a single-wheeled bicycle, doing balances with a water jar on his head.
The jar has some a cute flowers inside.
He is glad to entertain to all of the people, both children and adults, with his balances.
This illustration can put a touch of joy in your lifes.
Additional correction "This image of the clown can put a touch of joy in your life" or "This illustration puts a touch of joy in their lives." (the 2nd option if you are describing a picture and continuing to discuss the people looking at the clown)
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Really fun vocabulary!
May 2, 2022
Thanks for corrections.
Clown on uUnicycle
In English words in titles (all but particles and articles) usually get capitalised.
HA happy clown is performing on single-wheel bicycle, doing balances with a water jaa unicycle, balancing a jug of water on his head.
The jar hasre are some a cute flowers inside the jug.
Without having seen the image I can't say if "cute" is inappropriate here, but "pretty" would be more common.
The crowd is watching him.
He is glad to entertain to all people, children and adults, with his balanceing acts.
This illustration can put a touch of joy in your lifves.
It is perfect as a gift, too.
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Good job.
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Clown on unicycle Clown on In English words in titles (all but particles and articles) usually get capitalised.
If you are wanting to practice writing using creative/prose/poetic English you can keep what you have. If you want it to be correct grammatically and formal please see the correction. |
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Happy clown perform on single-wheel bicycle, doing balances with a water jar on his head.
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The jar has some a cute flowers inside. The Without having seen the image I can't say if "cute" is inappropriate here, but "pretty" would be more common. The jar has some |
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The crowd is watching him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He is glad to entertain to all people, children and adults with his balances. He is glad to entertain He is glad to entertain |
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This illustration can put a touch of joy in your lifes. This illustration can put a touch of joy in your li This illustration can put a touch of joy in your life Additional correction "This image of the clown can put a touch of joy in your life" or "This illustration puts a touch of joy in their lives." (the 2nd option if you are describing a picture and continuing to discuss the people looking at the clown) |
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It is perfect as a gift, too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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