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First letters of words should be capitalized in the title, with the exception of certain words like "and" or "with".

As I mentioned in “Online oOrders” and “A sSea tTrip”, I like streetwear clothes.

First letters of words should be capitalized in the title, with the exception of certain words like "and" or "with".

My wardrobe doesn’t have a lots of my clothes to wear, because I only buy more when some clothes was tornnew ones when they tear or didn’on't fit me anymore.

1. While "lots" would be just fine in casual talk, it is grammatically wrong in this case. "A lot" would fit better.
2. In "when some clothes was torn or didn't fit", we are talking about a certain time. We use present-tense. "Was torn" would become "tear" and "didn't" would become "don't".

I bought some new clothes to prepare for the vacation, just to change my style.

We separate clauses with commas. "I bought some new clothes to prepare for the vacation" is one clause, while "just to change my style" elaborates on what was just said.

When I am at home or hanging out with friends around my hometown, I’ve just dressed up in basic clothes.

In "When I am at home", we are talking about a certain time. We use present-tense. "I've" would become "I" and "dressed" would become "dress".

For me, the basic outfit is a combination of a basic T-shirt with basic trousers, together this summer.

1. Repetition is very unnatural. We are talking about a "basic outfit", so it is just implied that everything else is basic, too.
2. We separate clauses with commas.

It has no textures, -- just a little text to advertise the clothes brand where I bought it.

While it's completely understandable, this is just a bit of advanced grammar. An "em dash" introduces ideas and lists. It's kind of like the comma's big brother.

My favourite mix-up colours to mix are black and white.

It's understandable already, this just adds clarity.

When winter comes, I always put on my school jacket - alsoand a winter uniforms, to go out.

Since they're going together, there is no need to separate the list with an em dash.

One day, after getting used to shopping by myself, my mother said:, “It’s time to choose your own clothes and follow your favourite fashion styles”.

When talking about phrases, we separate them with commas.

I was looking for my friends, to see what they usually wore when they go out, and to find some information about famous online clothing stores.

This is called a "run-on sentence". Remember to use commas to separate clauses, since it makes it easier to read and understand.

I started to buy ithem in grade 8, and that's when I started liking one of the most popular fashion styles: Streetwear.

1. Since "clothes" is a plural word, "it" would not work. Instead, use "them".
2. Commas to separate clauses.

With some textured shirts or T-shirts, -- even polo shirts and cargo pants, -- mixed with hats and sneakers, I can have the coolest outfits to go anywhere.

An em dash would be better to separate the list.

Besides, I’ve also tried jeans clothesdenim, but it’s not suitable for me, especially jeans pants.

Jeans clothing is called "denim".

It is hard to tear, but because of it, Iit feels so hard to move while wearing it.

Nothing too bad. This correction just makes it easier to read and understand.

In short, it’s hard to follow theis fashion trend, but everyone has their ways.

Just extra clarity on which fashion trend you are talking about.

Fashion styles represent theirpeoples' personalities and hobbies, and streetwear not only makes me feel better about my own styles to other people, but I also I like it because of the modernity and coolnests that it’s eye-catching for teenagers like me.

1. Since there was no mention of other people (the new subject) before this sentence, "their" should be replaced with the subject itself: "people".
2. Commas separate clauses.
3. In "but also I", the word order should be "but I also".
4. Changing adjectives to nouns. "Modern" becomes "modernity' and "coolest" becomes "coolness".
5. "It's" is changed to "is" (minor error that would not be caught in casual speaking).

My wardrobe doesn’t have lots of my clothes to wear because I only buy more when some clothes wasare torn or didn’on't fit me anymore.

When I am at home or hanging out with friends around my hometown, I’ve just dressed up in basic clothes.

For me, the basic outfit is a combination of a basic T-shirt with basicand trousers together this summer.

It has no textures, just a little text to advertise the clothesing brand where I bought it.

My favourite mix-upcombination of colours areis black and white.

When winter comes, I always put on my school jacket - alsoand winter uniforms to go out.

One day, after getting used to shopping by myself, my mother said: “, 'It’s time to choose your own clothes and follow your favourite fashion styles”'.

I was looking forto my friends to see what they usually woreear when they go out and finding some information about famous online clothing stores.

I started to buy it inmy own clothing in eighth grade 8 and that's when I started liking one of the most popular fashion styles: Streetwear.

With some textured shirts or T-shirts, even polo shirts and cargo pants, mixed with hats and sneakers, I have the coolest outfits to go anywhere.

Besides, I’ve also tried jeans clothes, but it’s not suitable for me, especially jeans pants.

It is hard to tear, but because of it, Iit feels so hard to move while wearing it.

Moreover, it doesn’t suit my body shape.

In addition, it doesn't suit my body shape.

Fashion styles represent their personalities and hobbies, and streetwear not only makes me feel better about my styles in comparison to other people but also I like it because of theit's modern and, coolest that it’s and eye-catching for teenagers like me.