Oct. 27, 2023
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When I was young, I used to buy fashionable clothes and suits. A tie and a belt, however, once cost me half a month's salary. Just several months ago, when I cleaned my wardrobe; considering I would have few opportunities to be in very formal places, I threw all the ties to the bin.
Nowadays, nearly all of my clothes are bought online by my wife. She generally selects the most valuable ones for me, and I also refuse to buy expensive ones many times. It's so comfortable to wear leisure and casual clothes.
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Syntax issue. Vocabulary is correct though.
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Very understandable, some phrases to consider learning: threw out, cleaning out my wardrobe
Nowadays, nearly all of my clothes are bought online by my wife.
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Another good phrase: best value for money, valuable has a slightly different meaning
It's so comfortable to wear leisure and casual clothes.
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A generally understandable text!
Oct. 27, 2023
Thank you for your corrections!
When I was young, I used to buy fashionable clothes and suits.
"When I was younger" sounds a little better. "When I was young" makes it sound like you were a kid.
A tie and a belt, however, once cost me half a month's salary.
Just several months ago, when I cleaned out my wardrobe; conside, figuring I would have few opportunities to be in verywear formal placedress, I threw all the ties into the bin.
Nowadays, nearly all of my clothes are bought online by my wife.
It sounds better to say "My wife buys nearly all my clothes online.“ Active voice instead of passive voice.
She generally selects the most valuable ones for me, and I alsobut I often refuse to buy expensive ones many times.
It's so comfortable to wear leisure and casual clothes.
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Excellent job!!
Oct. 27, 2023
Thank you for your corrections!
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When I was young, I used to buy fashionable clothes and suits. When I was young, I used to buy fashionable clothes and suits. "When I was younger" sounds a little better. "When I was young" makes it sound like you were a kid. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A tie and a belt, however, once cost me half a month's salary. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Syntax issue. Vocabulary is correct though. |
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Just several months ago, when I cleaned my wardrobe; considering I would have few opportunities to be in very formal places, I threw all the ties to the bin. Just several months ago, when I cleaned out my wardrobe
Very understandable, some phrases to consider learning: threw out, cleaning out my wardrobe |
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Nowadays, nearly all of my clothes are bought online by my wife. Nowadays, nearly all of my clothes are bought online by my wife. It sounds better to say "My wife buys nearly all my clothes online.“ Active voice instead of passive voice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She generally selects the most valuable ones for me, and I also refuse to buy expensive ones many times. She generally selects the most valuable ones for me, She generally selects the Another good phrase: best value for money, valuable has a slightly different meaning |
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It's so comfortable to wear leisure and casual clothes. It's so comfortable to wear This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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