March 2, 2024
Closing of One Language Exchange Site
A language exchange site, Lang-8, which I had been with for more than 10 years, closed on February 29. Several years ago, it already announced that it would end the service. That’s why I opened my account here on LangCorrect in 2022 just in case.
I visited Lang-8 after the closing date because I was curious to know how it would be. To my surprise, it was still there as usual. Then I realized that it was open until when it will turn March 1 in all the countries.
I went to the site this morning, March 2 in Japan, another language site, the logo of HiNative, appeared. The founder of Lnag-8 has also run it and it seems like a lucrative business. As many Lang-8 users said that HiNative is not interesting, I ignored it.
A former member of Lang-8 has been working hard to develop its improved language site, Nyan-8. It will be released in weeks to come. I’ve already signed up on it and am looking forward to its releasing.
ある語学交流サイトの閉鎖
私が、１０年以上いた語学交流サイトである、Lang-8が２月２９日に閉鎖されました。数年前に、そのことはすでに通知されていました。それで、念のため２０２２年に、ここLangCorrectに登録しました。
Lang-8の閉鎖後、どうなっているのか、興味があって覗いてみました。驚いたことに、まだいつも通り存在しました。それで、世界中が３月１日になるまで運営するのだと気がつきました。
今朝、日本時間３月２日、Lang-8に行ってみると、HiNaiveのロゴが表れました。Lang-8の開設者が、HiNative
も運営していて、HiNativeは儲かるビジネスらしい。多くのLang-8のメンバーが、HiNativeはあまりよくないと言っていたので、それは、無視した。
元Lang-8のメンバーが、Lang-8に改善を加えたNyan-8というサイトを、目下懸命に開発してくれています。
数週間で公開されるそうです。私は、もう登録しました。Nyan-8の公開を楽しみにしています。
Closing of One Language Exchange Site
A language exchange site, Lang-8, which I had been with for more than 10 years, closed on February 29.
Several years ago, ithe creator already announced that it would end the service.
That’s why I opened my account here on LangCorrect in 2022 just in case.
I visited Lang-8 after the closing date because I was curious to know how it would be.
To my surprise, it was still there as usual.
Then I realized that it was open until when it willit turned March 1 in all the countries.
*When* I went to the site this morning, (March 2 in Japan, another language site,) the logo of HiNative, appeared, another language site.
I tried to rearrange your sentence in a more natural order. Please note how I shifted the phrases "another language site" and "the logo of HiNative appeared", to make a different progression. Since you have a very good knowledge of vocabulary and grammar, it may be helpful to consider readability as well.
The founder of Lnang-8 has also runs it, and it seems like a lucrative business.
As many Lang-8 users said that HiNative is not interesting, I ignored it.
A former member of Lang-8 has been working hard to develop its improved language site, Nyan-8.
It will be released in the weeks to come.
I’ve already signed up on it and am looking forward to its releasing.
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Very well written!
March 2, 2024
Thank you for you helpful corrections and detailed explanations.
IN APA FORMAT: Closing of Oone Llanguage Eexchange Ssite
There are also formats such as MLA, University of Chicago, etc. In English many competing formats exisy.
A language exchange site, Lang-8, which I had been with for more than 10 years, closed on February 29.
ALSO POSSIBLE: Several years ago, it already announced that it would end theits service.
ALSO POSSIBLE: That’s why I opened myan account here on LangCorrect in 2022 just in case.
ALSO POSSIBLE: I visited Lang-8 after the closing date becaussince I was curious to know how it would babout its fate.
To my surprise, it was still there as usual.
ALSO POSSIBLE: Then I realized that it was open until when it will turn March 1 in some it seemed to be that because of internationall the countriime zones.
I went to the site this morning, March 2 in Japan, another language site, with the logo of HiNative, appeared.
The founder of Lnag-8 has also runs it and it seems like a lucrative business.
As mLSO POSSIBLE: Many Lang-8 users said that HiNative is not interesting, Ifeel lukewarm about HiNative, so I have ignored it.
A former member of Lang-8LSO POSSIBLE A former Lang-8 member has been working hard to develop itsan improved language site, known as Nyan-8.
It will be released in sometime in the weeks to come.
I’ve already signed up on it and am looking forward to its public releasinge.
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Well written! I included a few alternative wordings.
March 2, 2024
Thank you for correcting my entry and letting me know alternative expressions.
I didn't know there are several ways to write a title. I often wondered why a title was written this or that way, which are different from what I had learned. My long-time question was solved. Thanks.
Several years ago, it had already announced that it would end the service.
That’s why I opened my account here on LangCorrect in 2022, just in case.
It seems to me that the comma is useful because "just in case" is an afterthought.
Then I realized that it was open until when it willit turns March 1 in all the countries.
When I went to the site this morning, March 2 in Japan, another language site, with the logo of HiNative, appeared.
The founder of Lnang-8 has also run it, and it seems like a lucrative business.
AsBecause many Lang-8 users said that HiNative is not interesting, I ignored it.
A former member of Lang-8 has been working hard to develop its improved language site, Nyan-8.
The use of "its" implies that Nyan-8 is designed as an improvement over Lang-8. If it has nothing to do with Lang-8, then I would write "to develop an improved language site."
I’ve already signed up on it and am looking forward to its releasinge.
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Your English is really good. I also spent a number of years on Lang-8. I thought it was a good site.
March 2, 2024
Thank you for your helpful corrections and explanations.
Oh, I see some members of Lang- 8 here.
Closing of One Language Exchange Site
A language exchange site, Lang-8, which I had been with for more than 10 years, closed on February 29.
Several years ago, it already announced that it would end the service.
That’s why I opened my account here on LangCorrect in 2022 just in case.
I visited Lang-8 after the closing date because I was curious to know how it would be.
To my surprise, it was still there as usual.
Then I realized that it wasill be open until when it will turn March 1 in all the countries.
The founder of Lnang-8 has also run it and it seems like a lucrative business.
A former member of Lang-8 has been working hard to develop its improved language site, Nyan-8.
I’ve already signed up on it and am looking forward to its releasinge.
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Oh I hope that where ever you go you learn something new !
March 2, 2024
Thank you for your helpful corrections.
Closing of One Language Exchange Site
A language exchange site, Lang-8, which I had been witha part of for more than 10 years, closed on February 29.
Several years ago, it had already announced that it would end the service.
That’s why I opened my account here on LangCorrect in 2022 just in case.
I visited Lang-8 after the closing date because I was curious to know how it would be.
To my surprise, it was still there as usual.
Then I realized that it was open until when it will turnit was March 1 in all theevery countries.
I went to the site this morning, March 2, in Japan, and another language site, the logo of, HiNative, appeared.
The founder of Lnang-8 has also run it and it seems like a lucrative business.
This seems to have been a typo.
As many Lang-8 users said that HiNative is not interesting, I ignored it.
A former member of Lang-8 has been working hard to develop itsan improved language site, Nyan-8.
It will be released in the weeks to come.
I’ve already signed up on it and am looking forward to its releasinge.
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Your entry is very well written; most of my corrections were to make it as smooth as possible. I will also join Nyan-8 when it opens.
March 2, 2024
Thank you for your helpful corrections and nice comment. I'm happy to know you would join Nyan-8.^^
The Closing of OneA Language Exchange Site
A language exchange site, Lang-8, which I had been witha member of for more than 10 years, closed on February 29.
Several years ago, it already announced that it would end theits service.
I visited Lang-8 after the closing date because I was curious to know how it would be.
To my surprise, it was still there as usual.
Then I realized that it wasould stay open until when it will turnit is March 1 in all the countriimezones.
I went to the site this morning, March 2 in Japan, and the logo of another language site, the logo of HiNative, appearedwas shown.
The founder of Lnang-8 has also runs it and it seems like a lucrative business.
As many Lang-8 users said thathave said, HiNative is not interesting, so I ignored it.
A former member of Lang-8 has been working hard to develop itsan improved language site replacement, Nyan-8.
It will be released in the weeks to come.
I’ve already signed up onfor it and am looking forward to its releasinge.
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Did you export all of your Lang-8 entries to Nyan-8?
March 2, 2024
Thank you for your helpful corrections.
Oh, yes! I did export all of my language entries to Nyan-8 .^^
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