Nov. 18, 2020
Last night when I go home an accident happen right in front me.
As usual I use bicycle to go home.
Some part of the road is wide and some part is narrow.
Around half way to my house.
I saw 2 people in front of me about 100 meters.
Both of them are not fast in speed.
So, I slow down myself to keep a distance from them.
Just in a matter of few seconds the middle person is losing control and fall down.
Because I keep a fair distance from them.
So, I can avoid him without crash together.
But that was a really closed call!
Closed call!
Last night when I go homeAs I was going home last night, an accident happened right in front me.
If you are writing about something that happened in the past, make sure to use past tense! Here, I used past continuous (was going home) and simple past (happened)
As usual, I usewas riding my bicycle to go home.
https://www.englishpage.com/verbpage/pastcontinuous.html
Some parts of the road isare wide and some part iss are narrow.
Around half way to my house.,
this is a fragment (as in not everything necessary to make a sentence is inside of it), so I combined it with the next sentence to make it a full sentence.
I saw 2 people in front of me about 100 meters in front of me.
Both of them awere not fast in speedgoing fast.
I hope this is what you wanted to say... were the people going fast or slow?
So, I slowed down myself to keep a distance from them.
Just in a matter of few seconds, the middle person is losinglost control and faell down.
BecausSince I keept a fair distance from them.,
So, I canI was able to avoid him (without crash togethering into him).
But, that was a really closed call!
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Nice journal! I would try to work on making your sentences longer. You had a few fragments that I combined with another sentence to make it a full sentence, and some of your sentences were short. :D
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Closed call! Close |
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Last night when I go home an accident happen right in front me.
If you are writing about something that happened in the past, make sure to use past tense! Here, I used past continuous (was going home) and simple past (happened) |
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As usual I use bicycle to go home. As usual, I https://www.englishpage.com/verbpage/pastcontinuous.html |
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Some part of the road is wide and some part is narrow. Some parts of the road |
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Around half way to my house. Around half way to my house this is a fragment (as in not everything necessary to make a sentence is inside of it), so I combined it with the next sentence to make it a full sentence. |
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I saw 2 people in front of me about 100 meters. I saw 2 people |
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Both of them are not fast in speed. Both of them I hope this is what you wanted to say... were the people going fast or slow? |
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So, I slow down myself to keep a distance from them. So, I slowed down myself to keep a distance from them. |
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Just in a matter of few seconds the middle person is losing control and fall down. Just in a matter of few seconds, the middle person |
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Because I keep a fair distance from them.
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So, I can avoid him without crash together.
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But that was a really closed call! But, that was a really close |
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