March 4, 2022
Climbing is not so hard
When I was a boy I sometimes climbed with my brother, as a child it was a very exciting experience but I never did it as a leader.
Many years afterwards I met a colleague that was going to climb, and after chatting, I began going with him. At the beginning we went to an indoors gym, what is called "bouldering", but after a few months we started to go outdoors and climbed with ropes.
I like the way that climbing teach you how to really focus, especially when you're the climb leader, otherwise you get paralized by fear. Among all the types of climb I prefer rock climbing, mainly multi-pitch routes because it's a team sport indeed.
After 6 years I still work with that guy and nowadays we aren't only colleagues we are climb partners.
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Climbing is not so hard
When I was a boy I sometimes climbed with my brother, a. As a child it was a very exciting experience but I never did it as a leader.
I think this deserves splitting into two sentences. The second sentence may require a comma somewhere so please don't accept it as gospel.
Many years afterwards I met a colleague that was going to climb, and after chatting, I began going with him.
This makes it sound like your colleague was not a regular climber when you were chatting or that he was just about to go for a climbing session.
At the beginning we went to an indoors gym, wthat iwas called "bouldering", but after a few months we started to go outdoors and climbed with ropes.
I like the way that climbing teaches you how to really focus, especially when you're the climb leader, otherwise you get paralized by fear.
Among all the types of climb I prefer rock climbing, mainly multi-pitch routes, because it's indeed a team sport indeed.
My correction makes it sound rather Victorian. I would personally use 'certainly' instead of indeed
After 6 years I still work with that guy and nowadays we aren't onlyjust colleagues we are climb partners.
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When I was a boy I sometimes climbed with my brother, as a child it was a very exciting experience but I never did it as a leader. When I was a boy I sometimes climbed with my brother I think this deserves splitting into two sentences. The second sentence may require a comma somewhere so please don't accept it as gospel. |
Many years afterwards I met a colleague that was going to climb, and after chatting, I began going with him. Many years afterwards I met a colleague that was going to climb, and after chatting, I began going with him. This makes it sound like your colleague was not a regular climber when you were chatting or that he was just about to go for a climbing session. |
At the beginning we went to an indoors gym, what is called "bouldering", but after a few months we started to go outdoors and climbed with ropes. At the beginning we went to an indoors gym, |
I like the way that climbing teach you how to really focus, especially when you're the climb leader, otherwise you get paralized by fear. I like the way that climbing teaches you how to really focus, especially when you're the climb leader, otherwise you get paralized by fear. |
Among all the types of climb I prefer rock climbing, mainly multi-pitch routes because it's a team sport indeed. Among all the types of climb I prefer rock climbing, mainly multi-pitch routes, because it's indeed a team sport My correction makes it sound rather Victorian. I would personally use 'certainly' instead of indeed |
After 6 years I still work with that guy and nowadays we aren't only colleagues we are climb partners. After 6 years I still work with that guy and nowadays we aren't |
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