- I'm not saying that the upcoming climate change workshop in our school should be a well of knowledge but stillextensive, but its progrsamme still seems slightly deficient.

"a well of knowledge" is more suited for a poetic description, and it doesn't match the tone of this journal. This journal feels more like a straightforward opinion piece.

I'm really enthusiastic about the speeches of eminent environmentalists and researchers on how  to mitigate climate crisis through sustainable business solutions and disruptive technology.

Not lessI'm also excited about the technology showcase disclosing tothat will show students all the breakthrough technologies that the majority of governments agreed to deploy to achieve their 2050 net-zero commitments.

"Disclosing" feels like you're describing a legal document. I think it's technically correct, but I don't think most people would use it in everyday speech.

- That's self-It is evident that a good workshop also needs a practical part .

Practical part sounds awkward- it is also very unclear about what you think a good workshop should include. The next sentence talks about involving the students, so are you talking about audience participation and/or generally suggesting that a good workshop has a hands-on component?

So wWe could involve students by letting them ask questions to the honourable speakers.

No need for "honourable"- we already know they are well respected, knowledgable people. I realize that you might be attempting a formal tone, but too much formality can sound stuffy.

Another argument is that a satisfied, enthused audience will give a good word of mouth aboutreviews of their event.

Are you making an argument here? I didn't feel like you were. It reads like you're listing different attributes of the event and making suggestions. I didn't know how to correct it because I was unsure of your intentions. Are you suggesting that if there's an active component to the workshop where students can ask questions and participate, people will recommend the event to others?

- True, but we won't run the risk of sounding like self-righteous youngsters.

The wording here is unclear in context of your work as a whole. You're saying that you DON'T sound self-righteous if you promote the event as something where student audience members can interact with the speakers? Also, most young people don't call themselves "youngsters" in English. I actually haven't heard many old people call people "youngsters" that often either.

We could persuade the Parents' Board to sponsorgive a gourmet basket with aromatic coffee and decorousative chocolates for the organisers and bouquets for the performers as thank you giftss for their hard work.

-And aAs a professional final touch, the participants would get the Likert Scale feedback forms measuring their satisfaction level with the session on t. The scale ranges from very dissatisfied to very satisfied.

"And" is fine in everyday speech, but is not always accepted in written speech. The sentence runs on a bit so I split it into two.

- I couldn't agree more, but you mustn’ not forget either that what is out of sight will definitely go out of mind in no time.

English speakers nowadays don't really use "mustn't". I think you should just clearly state what you're getting at instead of using the idiom "out of sight out of mind".

Therebyfore, the participants should definitely get some brochures that will both serve as a compendium of basic knowledge about sustainable energy solutions and workshop keepsakes.

"Thereby" isn't commonly used in everyday speech. Adding "definitely" isn't needed- I'm assuming the two people talking are in a position of authority with respect to planning this event and whatever they say is definitely going to be implemented.

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Not lessAnd I'm also excited about the technology showcase disclosing to students all the breakthrough technologies that the majority of governments agreed to deploy to achieve their 2050 net-zero commitments.

- ThaIt's self-evident that a good workshop also needs a practical part .

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-And as a professional final touch, the participants would get the Likert Scale feedback forms measuring their satisfaction level with the session on thea scale from very dissatisfied to very satisfied.