July 30, 2020
climate change effects (1)
The growing climate change is the cost of human progress. In the current decade, the rising-worse climate quality is leading an irreversible result in the global world, for example, the glacier is melting, the green-house is thinning and renewable resources are declining. The unlimited use of free-natural resources is, to say the least, been dangerous than it first starts. But on the plus side, the human's aggression on nature could contribute to the society and economics market thrive.
The effects of climate change effects (1)
Nouns can sometimes be used as adjectives, but here it sounds awkward.
The gGrowing climate change is the cost of human progress.
In the current decade, the rising-worseincreasingly bad climate quality ihas leading and to irreversible result in the globalchanges around the world, f. For example, the glacier iss are melting, the green-house is thinning and renewable resources are declining.
“Global” and “world” are somewhat redundant.
“Greenhouse” doesn’t make sense, especially as I would associate it with greenhouse gases, which are negative. Perhaps you are referring to the ozone layer?
The unlimited use of free- natural resources ihas, to say the least, become moren dangerous than it was when it first startsed.
“Than” requires a clear comparison. A verb like “become” or an adverb to indicate time (like in “is now more dangerous”) is also necessary, because you appear to be comparing what is ostensibly the same thing and we need to indicate that something has changed.
I assumed that “it” refers to when use of those resources began, but other wording may work better if you meant something different.
But on the plus side, the human's aggression ontowards nature could contribute to the society and a thriving economics market thrive.
“On the plus side” is very informal, so I might also change that.
July 31, 2020
do you have any suggestion for my last sentence if don't use "on the plus side"?
and thank your feedback
July 31, 2020
do you have any suggestion for my last sentence if don't use "on the plus side"? and thank your feedback
"On the other hand" could work, but it would also sound incomplete unless you expanded more on the idea that you introduced.
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climate change effects (1) The effects of climate change Nouns can sometimes be used as adjectives, but here it sounds awkward. |
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The growing climate change is the cost of human progress.
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In the current decade, the rising-worse climate quality is leading an irreversible result in the global world, for example, the glacier is melting, the green-house is thinning and renewable resources are declining. In the current decade, the “Global” and “world” are somewhat redundant. “Greenhouse” doesn’t make sense, especially as I would associate it with greenhouse gases, which are negative. Perhaps you are referring to the ozone layer? |
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The unlimited use of free-natural resources is, to say the least, been dangerous than it first starts. The unlimited use of free “Than” requires a clear comparison. A verb like “become” or an adverb to indicate time (like in “is now more dangerous”) is also necessary, because you appear to be comparing what is ostensibly the same thing and we need to indicate that something has changed. I assumed that “it” refers to when use of those resources began, but other wording may work better if you meant something different. |
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But on the plus side, the human's aggression on nature could contribute to the society and economics market thrive. But on the plus side, “On the plus side” is very informal, so I might also change that. |
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