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ponta

March 15, 2021

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Cleaning the Entrance

This morning, I cleaned my entrance. There were leaves and sand because I hadn't clean there for a long time. Worst of all, there was black mold on the corner of the wallpaper. I guess this is because the entrance is not well-ventilated and often gets moisture by dew condensation from the metal door. I removed the mold using mold killer. I have to clean up where easily gets moldy regularly from now on.

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Cleaning the Entrance to My House/Entryway

Usually in English if you are talking about a house entrance you call it an 'entryway' or the 'entrance to the house' :)

This morning, I cleaned my entrancthe entryway/entrance to the house.

There were leaves and sand because I hadn't clean there for a long time.

Worst of all, there was black mold on the corner of the wallpaper.

I guess this is because the entrance is not well- ventilated and often gets moisture by dewecause of condensation from the metal door.

Don't think well ventilated needs a '-', 'by' can mean 'because of' but the second is less formal, and dew/condensation are the same so only needs one :)

I removed the mold using mold killer.

I have to clean up where it easily gets moldy regularly from now on.

I'd try 'I have to clean up where it gets moldy regularly from now on' having easily sounds wordy :)

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Nice job, very small errors! We have this problem in our entryway too :(

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ponta

March 16, 2021

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Thank you so much!

There were leaves and sand bBecause I hadven't cleaned there forin a long time, there were leaves and sand.

"There were leaves and sand because I haven't cleaned there in a long time." is also correct but less natural sounding.

Worst of all,The worst part was that there was black mold on the corner of the wallpaper.

"Worst of all, there was black mold on the corner of the wallpaper." is correct too.

I guess this is because the entrance is non't well-ventilated and often gets moisture by dew condensation from the metal door.

I removed the mold usingwith mold killer.

I haveFrom now on, I need to clean up wthere easily area that gets moldy regularly from now oneasily on a regular basis.

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ponta

March 16, 2021

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Thank you for your correction!

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arcus

March 17, 2021

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You're welcome!

Cleaning the Entrance


Cleaning the Entrance to My House/Entryway

Usually in English if you are talking about a house entrance you call it an 'entryway' or the 'entrance to the house' :)

This morning, I cleaned my entrance.


This morning, I cleaned my entrancthe entryway/entrance to the house.

There were leaves and sand because I hadn't clean there for a long time.


There were leaves and sand bBecause I hadven't cleaned there forin a long time, there were leaves and sand.

"There were leaves and sand because I haven't cleaned there in a long time." is also correct but less natural sounding.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Worst of all, there was black mold on the corner of the wallpaper.


Worst of all,The worst part was that there was black mold on the corner of the wallpaper.

"Worst of all, there was black mold on the corner of the wallpaper." is correct too.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I guess this is because the entrance is not well-ventilated and often gets moisture by dew condensation from the metal door.


I guess this is because the entrance is non't well-ventilated and often gets moisture by dew condensation from the metal door.

I guess this is because the entrance is not well- ventilated and often gets moisture by dewecause of condensation from the metal door.

Don't think well ventilated needs a '-', 'by' can mean 'because of' but the second is less formal, and dew/condensation are the same so only needs one :)

I removed the mold using mold killer.


I removed the mold usingwith mold killer.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have to clean up where easily gets moldy regularly from now on.


I haveFrom now on, I need to clean up wthere easily area that gets moldy regularly from now oneasily on a regular basis.

I have to clean up where it easily gets moldy regularly from now on.

I'd try 'I have to clean up where it gets moldy regularly from now on' having easily sounds wordy :)

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