Aug. 24, 2021
Cleaning My House.
My House always messes with kids' toys.
So, I clean up my house regularly.
At first, I try to clean their toys and books.
Next, I use a washing machine to wash their clothes and shoes.
What's more, I help them clean their desks.
Sometimes, I use a vacuum cleaner and mop the floor.
These are my daily cleaning routine.
Most of case, I spend 1 or 2 hours.
After finishing them, I feel accomplishment and relieve my stress.
My Hhouse is always messesy with kids' toys.
'messes with' is not correct english - you could also say 'My kids' toys always messes the house'
So, I clean up my house regularly.
At fFirst, I try to clean their toys and books.
"at first" is used in the case of a particular incidents, not repeating routines
Next, I use a washing machine to wash their clothes and shoes.
What's moreThen/also/additionally, I help them clean their desks.
'what's more' is not correct here, unless you are emphasising the fact that you have to help them clean
Sometimes, I use a vacuum cleaner and mop the floor.
These areis is my daily cleaning routine.
routine is singular
Most of case,days I spend 1 or 2 hours.
'most of case' is not correct english, you could also say 'in most cases' or 'most of the time'
After finishing them, I feel accomplishmented and relieve myf from stress.
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Overall this is good, just some minor errors.
Aug. 25, 2021
Thank you very much.
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Cleaning My House. |
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My House always messes with kids' toys. My 'messes with' is not correct english - you could also say 'My kids' toys always messes the house' |
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So, I clean up my house regularly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At first, I try to clean their toys and books.
"at first" is used in the case of a particular incidents, not repeating routines |
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Next, I use a washing machine to wash their clothes and shoes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What's more, I help them clean their desks.
'what's more' is not correct here, unless you are emphasising the fact that you have to help them clean |
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Sometimes, I use a vacuum cleaner and mop the floor. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These are my daily cleaning routine. Th routine is singular |
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Most of case, I spend 1 or 2 hours. Most 'most of case' is not correct english, you could also say 'in most cases' or 'most of the time' |
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After finishing them, I feel accomplishment and relieve my stress. After finishing them, I feel accomplish |
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