Aug. 25, 2025
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Hello,
If your stock is empty, we can cover the lack by credit note. Please sensu us a credit note for 1pc of JP129190 , after that I could prepare the faulty one for your pick up.
I am waiting for your reply.
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Hello,
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If your stock is empty, we can cover the lackshortage by credit note.
Please sensud us a credit note for 1pc of JP129190 , after that I couldwhich we can prepare the faulty one for your pick up.
(1) I am not familiar with how credit notes work, but I assume you meant "send" here.
(2) You have been using the third-person pronouns ("we" and "us"), so the sudden use of the first-person pronoun "I" is rather abrupt.
I am waiting forWe await your reply.
(1) The original sentence might come across as slightly forceful.
(2) Same as above: for consistency, you might consider using the third-person pronoun instead.
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Hello, If your stock is empty, we can cover the lack by credit note. Hello, |
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Please sensu us a credit note for 1pc of JP129190 , after that I could prepare the faulty one for your pick up. Please sen (1) I am not familiar with how credit notes work, but I assume you meant "send" here. (2) You have been using the third-person pronouns ("we" and "us"), so the sudden use of the first-person pronoun "I" is rather abrupt. |
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I am waiting for your reply.
(1) The original sentence might come across as slightly forceful. (2) Same as above: for consistency, you might consider using the third-person pronoun instead. |
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