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I fixed the title a bit differently from part 2 to give you another option!

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In English, you capitalize the first letter of all the nouns, adjetives, adverbs, pronouns, verbs, etc, in the title, as well as the first word.

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Or, "...who would risk hiring him".

Because of his illegal identity, there didn't haveweren't many employers who would take a risk to hirerisk hiring him. Because of his illegal identity, there weren't many employers who would risk hiring him.

He had lived ion the street or in basements. He lived on the street or in basements.

He had to lived i on the street or in basements. He had to live on the street or in basements.

His native language is Cantonese, and he hasd more advantages compared withto other new immigrants. His native language is Cantonese, and he had more advantages compared to other new immigrants.

His native language is Cantonese, and he hasd more advantages compared withto other new immigrants. His native language is Cantonese, and he had more advantages compared to other new immigrants.

Since he hadAfter marriedying a native and got aaining legal identitystatus, his life was gettinggot better. After marrying a native and gaining legal status, his life got better.

Since he had married a native and got a legal identity, his life whas geottingen better. Since he had married a native and got a legal identity, his life has gotten better.

He told me:, “ People always saw the glistening from outside, disregarding moans from the inside, blinding to the agony inat the bottom.” He told me, “ People always saw the glistening from outside, disregarding moans from the inside, blinding to the agony at the bottom.”

He told me:, “ People always saw the glistening from outside, disregarding moans from the inside, blinding to the agony inat the bottom.” He told me, “ People always saw the glistening from outside, disregarding moans from the inside, blind to the agony at the bottom.”