tThe hHotel The Hotel

Words in the topic should have their first letter capitalised.

tThe hHotel The Hotel

This rule should be the same in German. The first letter in words of a title are capitalized.

That hotel wasn't not so good them t. The personal wasnel/staff were not so helplessful and nice and tcourteous. The bedroom was a bit dirty and bed tthe bed was too hard . The food was terrible and cold m. My clothes wasere not goodproperly washed . That hotel wasn't so good. The personnel/staff were not helpful and courteous. The bedroom was a bit dirty and the bed was too hard. The food was terrible and cold. My clothes were not properly washed.

That hotel wasn't not so good them to them. The personanel wasere not so helpless and nice and tful or nice. The bedroom was a bit dirty and the bed too hard . The food terrible and cold my clothes was not goodwas cold and taste terrible. My clothes were (was plural) not washed well. That hotel wasn't not so good to them. The personnel were not so helpful or nice. The bedroom was a bit dirty and the bed too hard. The food was cold and taste terrible. My clothes were (was plural) not washed well.

personal vs personnel, were (them plural), helpless vs helpful, and vs or. You need to work on verb conjugation and clear up differences in similar words. If you can do that, then your sentences will be grammatically correct. The next step will be understanding common phrases and word order used by native speakers. The phrase 'cold and terrible' feels different to native speakers than the phrase 'terrible and cold'. Sometimes native speakers use one phrase and not the other, although both at grammatically correct.

THowever, the bathroom was but good as it was clean and fresh and the hand towels were white and good scentsmelled good. However, the bathroom was good as it was clean and fresh and the hand towels were white and smelled good.

The bathroom was but good clean and freshnice and clean, the hand towel white and good scentfresh. The bathroom was nice and clean, the hand towel white and fresh.

But the lunch was terrible because the sandwiches wasere dry.! But the lunch was terrible because the sandwiches were dry!

But the lLunch was terrible t. The sandwiches wasere dry. Lunch was terrible. The sandwiches were dry.

The out side great I was so higher areas were great. The outer areas were great.

The scenery out side great I was so highthat hotel was beautiful. I was so high up in the mountains. The scenery outside that hotel was beautiful. I was so high up in the mountains.

Your phrase lacks context. The natural area outside the hotel? What do you mean you were high?

The elevator was always going to broken I stuck always there I must use the stage and Inon-functional. I got stuck there often and I had to use the stairs, which was a problem because my room was ion 20the 20th floor and I must wearhad to lug my suitcase self and me self water taken andup the stairs. Worse, my keycard hasdid not work for three hours .! The elevator was always non-functional. I got stuck there often and I had to use the stairs, which was a problem because my room was on the 20th floor and I had to lug my suitcase up the stairs. Worse, my keycard did not work for three hours!

The elevator was always going to broken I stuck always there I must use the stage and I was in 20 floor and I must wear my suitcase self and me self water taken and my keycard has nostalling, but I was on the 20th floor and did not want to walk up the stairs because I still had my suitcase. My room key stopped working and I was locked out wfork for nearly three hours . The elevator was always stalling, but I was on the 20th floor and did not want to walk up the stairs because I still had my suitcase. My room key stopped working and I was locked out for nearly three hours.

The whole sentence needs to be fixed.

Thaen I bywent to the beach, was was therehich was full withof garbage . Then I went to the beach, which was full of garbage.

Than I by the beach was wase beach there was full withof garbage . The beach there was full of garbage.

Than vs then

ByIn the tennisplace court, I was given only one bat and a dirty ball. In the tennis court, I was given only one bat and a dirty ball.

By tennisplace given only one baWhen I wanted to play tennis, they only gave me one racket and a dirty ball. When I wanted to play tennis, they only gave me one racket and a dirty ball.

racket vs bat

Still what in my free drink was a hairThere was a hair in my complimentary drink. There was a hair in my complimentary drink.

Still what iIn my free drink there was a hair. In my free drink there was hair.

What you wrote doesn't make sense.

This hotel was really badawful and unhygienic. This hotel was awful and unhygienic.