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May 19, 2021

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Some people think that if a country is already rich, any addition in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Writing: Money Can't Bring Happiness

1. Economic wealth is necessary for material-based needs, but it does not mean that more material things bring more happiness.
2. Making more money as the only goal in life may lead to inflated desires that lead to unhappiness instead.
3. People who surround the wealthy may neglect of the poor, the needy.

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1. Economic wealth is necessary for material-based needs, but it does not mean that more material things bring more happiness.

2. Making more money as the only goal in life may lead to inflated desires that lead to unhappiness instead.

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June 4, 2021

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June 4, 2021

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Thanks :)

Writing: Money Can't Bring Happiness

Money doesn't bring happiness

Argument: Money Can't Bring Happiness

1. Economic wealth is necessary for material-based needs, but it does not mean that more material things bring more happiness.

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2. Making more money as the only goal in life may lead to inflated desires that lead to unhappiness instead.

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3. People who surround the wealthy may neglect of the poor, the needy.

3. People who surround the wealthy may neglect of the poor, the and needy. 3. People who surround the wealthy may neglect the poor and needy.

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