Nov. 28, 2019
Christmas present
I already bought Christmas presents for my son and hubby.
For my son, I bought a car toy that he has been wanting and a “cars” DVD.
For my husband, I bought a dragon ball designed hair wax!
And for both of two, I got matching clothes!
I’m really really looking forward to giving those presents to them!
私は息子と夫にもうクリスマスプレゼントを買いました。
息子には、ずっと欲しがっている車のおもちゃと、カーズのDVD。
夫には、ドラゴンボールのデザインのワックス！
そして二人に、おそろいの服を買いました。
プレゼントを渡すのがとても楽しみです！
For my son, I bought a car toy that he has been wanting and a “cCars” DVD.
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Capitalise names of movies, shows, books, etc. Proper nouns.
And for both of twohem, I got matching clothes!
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I’m really really looking forward to giving thoese presents to them!
You use “these," because you have them & you’re talking about them.
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Very good!
Dec. 4, 2019
Thank you for the correction!
Ah, I should study the difference between “those” and “these” again!
For my son, I bought a car toy that he has been wanting and a “cCars” DVD.
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Capitalize the names of shows, movies, etc. "Cars" is a movie.
For my husband, I bought a dragon ball designed hair wax!
Dragon Ball hair wax!¶
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For my husband, I bought hair wax designed after Dragon Ball!¶
Capitalize "Dragon Ball" as it is the name of a TV show. I gave a couple of alternatives to your original sentence.
I’m really really looking forward to giving thoese presents to them!
For my husband, I bought a dragon ball designed hair wax!
And for both of two, I got matching clothes!
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And for both of them, I got matching clothes!
Adding 'the' as in the previous correction is fine, but it is fine without it also.
I’m really really looking forward to giving those presents to them!
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Excellent!
Nov. 30, 2019
Thank you for the correction!😊✨
Christmas present
I already bought Christmas presents for my son and hubby.
For my son, I bought a car toy that he has been wanting and a “cCars” DVD.
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Proper noun (name of item) gets capitalized
For my husband, I bought a dragon ball designed hair wax!
And for the both of twohem, I got matching clothes!
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I’m really really looking forward to giving those presents to them!
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Glad your Christmas shopping is out of the way! I only have one more present to go and then I'm done too!
Nov. 28, 2019
Thank you for the correction!
You’re preparing for it too😊
I feel this Christmas will be an exciting one😆🎄💝
Nov. 29, 2019
For my husband, I bought a dragon ball designed hair wax!
Do you mean a wig?
Nov. 29, 2019
And nice corrections 😊
Nov. 29, 2019
Ah, no no, it’s just a wax in a dragon ball shaped case😂
https://p-bandai.jp/item/item-1000136203
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For my son, I bought a car toy that he has been wanting and a “cars” DVD. For my son, I bought a car toy that he has been wanting and a “ Proper noun (name of item) gets capitalized For my son, I bought a car toy that he has been wanting and a “ Capitalize the names of shows, movies, etc. "Cars" is a movie. For my son, I bought a car toy that he has been wanting and a “ Capitalise names of movies, shows, books, etc. Proper nouns. |
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For my husband, I bought a dragon ball designed hair wax! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! For my husband, I bought Capitalize "Dragon Ball" as it is the name of a TV show. I gave a couple of alternatives to your original sentence. |
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I’m really really looking forward to giving those presents to them! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! I’m really really looking forward to giving th I’m really really looking forward to giving th You use “these," because you have them & you’re talking about them. |
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