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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 24, 2021

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Christmas eve

Because all of my coworkers worked hard, we were able to work off on time.

Now I am having dinner with my family at home.

We have a stake, a pizza, a pasta and some donuts.

With my sons, we set many lights on the Christmas tree and on the walls.

Tomorrow morning, they are going to receive the nice gifts from Father Santa.

I hope they will be happy.

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Christmas eEve

Because all of my coworkers worked hard, we were able to get off work off on time.

We have aare having steake, a pizza, a pasta and some donuts.

With my sons, weMy sons and I set many lights on the Christmas tree and on the walls. / I set many lights on the Christmas tree and on the walls with my sons.

Tomorrow morning, they are going to receive the nice gifts from Father SantaSanta. / Tomorrow morning, they are going to receive nice gifts from Santa Claus.

I hope they will be happy.

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Great work, and happy holidays! :)

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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 25, 2021

402

Thank you. Happy Holydays.

Because all of my coworkers worked hard, we were able to workget off on time.

Could also be "get off work on time," "finish work early," or "get home early."

Now I am having dinner with my family at home.

We have a steake, a pizza, a pasta, and some donuts.

No need to add "a" when enumerating food unless you're stating a definite amount.

WithI and my sons, we set many decorated lights on the Christmas tree and on the walls.

Tomorrow morning, they are going to receive the nice gifts from Father SantaSanta Claus.

It's a bit weird calling "Father Santa" because it sounds stiff. Santa could also suffice. (Or maybe you mean yourself lol)

I hope they will be happy.

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Happy holidays! Keep up the good work :)

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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 25, 2021

402

Happy holidays.

Tomorrow morning, they are going to receive the nice gifts from Father Santa.


Tomorrow morning, they are going to receive the nice gifts from Father SantaSanta Claus.

It's a bit weird calling "Father Santa" because it sounds stiff. Santa could also suffice. (Or maybe you mean yourself lol)

Tomorrow morning, they are going to receive the nice gifts from Father SantaSanta. / Tomorrow morning, they are going to receive nice gifts from Santa Claus.

Christmas eve


Christmas eEve

Because all of my coworkers worked hard, we were able to work off on time.


Because all of my coworkers worked hard, we were able to workget off on time.

Could also be "get off work on time," "finish work early," or "get home early."

Because all of my coworkers worked hard, we were able to get off work off on time.

Now I am having dinner with my family at home.


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We have a stake, a pizza, a pasta and some donuts.


We have a steake, a pizza, a pasta, and some donuts.

No need to add "a" when enumerating food unless you're stating a definite amount.

We have aare having steake, a pizza, a pasta and some donuts.

With my sons, we set many lights on the Christmas tree and on the walls.


WithI and my sons, we set many decorated lights on the Christmas tree and on the walls.

With my sons, weMy sons and I set many lights on the Christmas tree and on the walls. / I set many lights on the Christmas tree and on the walls with my sons.

I hope they will be happy.


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