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Christmas Dinner

Christmas brought to the table in my life a lot of new relationships, though it was surprising. When my boyfriend and I came over to his parents’ home, I was out of the blue surrounded by his relatives, friends, aunts, and others. In some cases, I was even frightening since I’ve never came round so many people at the same time. It goes without saying it that all of them were caring, supportive, and friendly. Having said that, I haven’t got used to family get-togethers and felt quite awkward. At first I’ve tried to support endless chit-chat and numerous dialogs, but after a while I just decided to take a back seat, keep quiet and enjoy the family atmosphere.

In spite of the fact that I’m not into cooking, I had to recall my poor cooking skills and help others with food for Christmas dinner in December. On the one hand, I could relax and watch movies because, frankly speaking, nothing required my help. At the same time, I really wanted to get into these Christmas deals, so my help was out of the question. Even though occasionally I heard from these lovely folks exclamations such as “Just make yourself comfortable and rest up, we’ll do everything,” I saw that they appreciated my enthusiasm in the kitchen.

So what did we actually cook? Well, all kinds of things, ranging from simple salads to complicated dishes with specific spices and herbs. Generally speaking, we just chopped, boiled, roasted, and did all the things people usually do on the kitchen when they arrange holiday food. I also heard that cookers don’t like to eat food they make, and I’ve found it to be true for me. When I was cooking, I’ve tasted all the dishes, so when it came to eating them beside the table with others, I wasn’t that interested. Happily, at some point roasted chicken got me in the mood, so I tasted everything we’ve cooked. Honestly, I was bowled over by the specific flavors and tastes. Indeed, food was perfect.

The one thing that bothered me was others' compliments to my cooking skills. I didn’t feel like I deserved all the compliments about the food which I’ve got. Really, I haven't cooked everything by myself! This family just took me under their wing, so without their guidance everything I would have done would be an omelette. So, in Christmas evening, I kept tasting, drinking, and chatting with others, though at some point, I thought "enough is enough" and went to sleep.


I'm surprised that Christmas has a lot of new relationships into my life. When my boyfriend and I went over to his parents’ home, I was suddenly surrounded by his relatives, friends and neighbors. In some cases, I was even frightened since I’ve never been around so many people at the same time. Of course, all of them were caring, supportive, and friendly. Having said that, I haven’t gotten used to family get-togethers and have felt quite awkward. At first I tried to support endless chit-chat and numerous dialogues, but after a while I just decided to take a back seat, keep quiet and enjoy the family atmosphere.

Despite being bad a cooking, I still helped his family prepare Christmas dinner. On the one hand, I could relax and watch movies because, frankly speaking, nothing required my help. At the same time, I really wanted to get into the Christmas spirit, so not helping was out of the question. Even though occasionally I heard from these lovely folks exclamations such as “Just make yourself comfortable and rest up, we’ll do everything,” I saw that they appreciated my enthusiasm in the kitchen.

So what did we actually cook? Well, all kinds of things, ranging from simple salads to complicated dishes with specific spices and herbs. Generally speaking, we just chopped, boiled, roasted, and did all the things people usually do in the kitchen when they prepare holiday food. I also heard that people who cook don’t like to eat the food they make and I’ve found it to be true for me. When I was cooking, I tasted all the dishes, so when it came to eating them at the table with the others, I wasn’t that interested. Happily, at some point, roasted chicken got me in the mood, so I tasted everything we cooked. Honestly, I was bowled over by the specific flavors and tastes. Indeed, the food was perfect.

The one thing that bothered me were the compliments others made about my cooking skills. I didn’t feel like I deserved all the compliments about the food I cooked. Really, I didn't cook everything by myself! This family just took me under their wing, so without their guidance, everything I would have made would have been an omelette. So, Christmas evening, I kept tasting, drinking, and chatting with the others. Though at some point, I thought, "Enough is enough" and went to bed.

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Christmas dinner

I'm suprised that Christmas has brought to the table in my life a lot of new relationships, though it was surprising into my life.

I get the feeling you were wanting to practice using the phrase "brought to the table" here. I can't think of a way for it to work without sounding strange.

When my boyfriend and I camewent over to his parents’ home, I was out of the blue I was surrounded by his relatives, friends, aunts, and others family.

like the last sentence, I get the feeling you wanted to practice using out of the blue. I think it is okay in this sentence, but simply saying "I was suddenly surrounded by..." would sound more natural.

In some cases, I was even frighteninged since I’ve never came been around so many people at the same time.

It goes without saying it that all of them were caring, supportive, and friendly.

The sentence is gramattically okay, its just feels incorrect here because the previous sentence talks about you being frightened, so "it goes without saying" is a pretty strong statement. "His mom is a great cook, so it goes without saying that dinner was delicious." is a more natural use of this phrase.

Having said that, I haven’t got used to family get-togethers and felt quite awkward.

At first I’ve tried to support endless chit-chat and numerous dialogs, but after a while I just decided to take a back seat, keep quiet and enjoy the family atmosphere.

In spite of the fact that I’m not into cooking, I had to recall my poor cooking skills and help others with food for Christmas dinner in December.

This sentence is okay, but something like "Despite being bad a cooking, I still helped his family prepare Christmas dinner. "

So what did we actually cook?

Well, all kinds of things, ranging from simple salads to complicated dishes with specific spices and herbs.

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Great work!

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I'm suprised that Christmas has brought to the table in my life a lot of new relationships, though it was surprising into my life.

yeah, I think you're right

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When my boyfriend and I camewent over to his parents’ home, I was out of the blue I was surrounded by his relatives, friends, aunts, and others family.

thank you!

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It goes without saying it that all of them were caring, supportive, and friendly.

thank you for this explanation 💪

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In spite of the fact that I’m not into cooking, I had to recall my poor cooking skills and help others with food for Christmas dinner in December.

it sounds much better

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thank you for your comments and explanations! It was useful 😇

Christmas dDinner

Christmas brought to the table inof my life a lot of new relationships, though it was surprising.

When my boyfriend and I camewent over to his parents’ home, I was out of the blue surrounded by his relatives, friends, aunts, and others.

In some cases, I was even frighteninged since I’ve never came been around so many people at the same time.

It goes without saying it that all of them were caring, supportive, and friendly.

Lucky you!

Having said that, I haven’t gotten used to family get-togethers and have felt quite awkward.

At first I’ve tried to support endless chit-chat and numerous dialogues, but after a while I just decided to take a back seat, keep quiet and enjoy the family atmosphere.

In spite of the fact that I’m not into cooking, I had to recall my poor cooking skills andto help others with food for Christmas dinner in December.

On the one hand, I could relax and watch movies because, frankly speaking, nothing required my help.

At the same time, I really wanted to get into these Christmas dealsspirit, so mynot helping was out of the question.

I don't know what you mean by "getting into Christmas deals" so I'm unsure how to correct this. It's not a natural sentence in the US.

Even though occasionally I heard from these lovely folks exclamations such as “Just make yourself comfortable and rest up, we’ll do everything,” I saw that they appreciated my enthusiasm in the kitchen.

So what did we actually cook?

Well, all kinds of things, ranging from simple salads to complicated dishes with specific spices and herbs.

Generally speaking, we just chopped, boiled, roasted, and did all the things people usually do oin the kitchen when they arrangprepare holiday food.

I also heard that people who cookers don’t like to eat the food they make, and I’ve found it to be true for me.

Me, too. I can hardly taste anything I cook so it's not fun to eat it.

When I was cooking, I’ve tasted all the dishes, so when it came to eating them besideat the table with the others, I wasn’t that interested.

ikr?

Happily, at some point, roasted chicken got me in the mood, so I tasted everything we’ve cooked.

Honestly, I was bowled over by the specific flavors and tastes.

Indeed, the food was perfect.

The one thing that bothered me was others'ere the compliments tothers made about my cooking skills.

I didn’t feel like I deserved all the compliments about the food which I’ve gotI cooked.

Really, I havedidn't cooked everything by myself!

This family just took me under their wing, so without their guidance, everything I would have donmade would behave been an omelette.

hahahaha!

So, in Christmas evening, I kept tasting, drinking, and chatting with the others, t. Though at some point, I thought, "eEnough is enough" and went to sleep.

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It sounds as if you had a terrific Christmas! Good for you and well written!

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At the same time, I really wanted to get into these Christmas dealsspirit, so mynot helping was out of the question.

thnx, I like your option

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I also heard that people who cookers don’t like to eat the food they make, and I’ve found it to be true for me.

😭😂

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When I was cooking, I’ve tasted all the dishes, so when it came to eating them besideat the table with the others, I wasn’t that interested.

😃

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yeah, it was great :) thank you for your corrections! I appreciate your help 🎄

Christmas dinner


Christmas dDinner

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Christmas brought to the table in my life a lot of new relationships, though it was surprising.


Christmas brought to the table inof my life a lot of new relationships, though it was surprising.

I'm suprised that Christmas has brought to the table in my life a lot of new relationships, though it was surprising into my life.

I get the feeling you were wanting to practice using the phrase "brought to the table" here. I can't think of a way for it to work without sounding strange.

When my boyfriend and I came over to his parents’ home, I was out of the blue surrounded by his relatives, friends, aunts, and others.


When my boyfriend and I camewent over to his parents’ home, I was out of the blue surrounded by his relatives, friends, aunts, and others.

When my boyfriend and I camewent over to his parents’ home, I was out of the blue I was surrounded by his relatives, friends, aunts, and others family.

like the last sentence, I get the feeling you wanted to practice using out of the blue. I think it is okay in this sentence, but simply saying "I was suddenly surrounded by..." would sound more natural.

In some cases, I was even frightening since I’ve never came round so many people at the same time.


In some cases, I was even frighteninged since I’ve never came been around so many people at the same time.

In some cases, I was even frighteninged since I’ve never came been around so many people at the same time.

It goes without saying it that all of them were caring, supportive, and friendly.


It goes without saying it that all of them were caring, supportive, and friendly.

Lucky you!

It goes without saying it that all of them were caring, supportive, and friendly.

The sentence is gramattically okay, its just feels incorrect here because the previous sentence talks about you being frightened, so "it goes without saying" is a pretty strong statement. "His mom is a great cook, so it goes without saying that dinner was delicious." is a more natural use of this phrase.

Having said that, I haven’t got used to family get-togethers and felt quite awkward.


Having said that, I haven’t gotten used to family get-togethers and have felt quite awkward.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At first I’ve tried to support endless chit-chat and numerous dialogs, but after a while I just decided to take a back seat, keep quiet and enjoy the family atmosphere.


At first I’ve tried to support endless chit-chat and numerous dialogues, but after a while I just decided to take a back seat, keep quiet and enjoy the family atmosphere.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In spite of the fact that I’m not into cooking, I had to recall my poor cooking skills and help others with food for Christmas dinner in December.


In spite of the fact that I’m not into cooking, I had to recall my poor cooking skills andto help others with food for Christmas dinner in December.

In spite of the fact that I’m not into cooking, I had to recall my poor cooking skills and help others with food for Christmas dinner in December.

This sentence is okay, but something like "Despite being bad a cooking, I still helped his family prepare Christmas dinner. "

On the one hand, I could relax and watch movies because, frankly speaking, nothing required my help.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At the same time, I really wanted to get into these Christmas deals, so my help was out of the question.


At the same time, I really wanted to get into these Christmas dealsspirit, so mynot helping was out of the question.

I don't know what you mean by "getting into Christmas deals" so I'm unsure how to correct this. It's not a natural sentence in the US.

Even though occasionally I heard from these lovely folks exclamations such as “Just make yourself comfortable and rest up, we’ll do everything,” I saw that they appreciated my enthusiasm in the kitchen.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So what did we actually cook?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Well, all kinds of things, ranging from simple salads to complicated dishes with specific spices and herbs.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Generally speaking, we just chopped, boiled, roasted, and did all the things people usually do on the kitchen when they arrange holiday food.


Generally speaking, we just chopped, boiled, roasted, and did all the things people usually do oin the kitchen when they arrangprepare holiday food.

I also heard that cookers don’t like to eat food they make, and I’ve found it to be true for me.


I also heard that people who cookers don’t like to eat the food they make, and I’ve found it to be true for me.

Me, too. I can hardly taste anything I cook so it's not fun to eat it.

When I was cooking, I’ve tasted all the dishes, so when it came to eating them beside the table with others, I wasn’t that interested.


When I was cooking, I’ve tasted all the dishes, so when it came to eating them besideat the table with the others, I wasn’t that interested.

ikr?

Happily, at some point roasted chicken got me in the mood, so I tasted everything we’ve cooked.


Happily, at some point, roasted chicken got me in the mood, so I tasted everything we’ve cooked.

Honestly, I was bowled over by the specific flavors and tastes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Indeed, food was perfect.


Indeed, the food was perfect.

The one thing that bothered me was others' compliments to my cooking skills.


The one thing that bothered me was others'ere the compliments tothers made about my cooking skills.

I didn’t feel like I deserved all the compliments about the food which I’ve got.


I didn’t feel like I deserved all the compliments about the food which I’ve gotI cooked.

Really, I haven't cooked everything by myself!


Really, I havedidn't cooked everything by myself!

This family just took me under their wing, so without their guidance everything I would have done would be an omelette.


This family just took me under their wing, so without their guidance, everything I would have donmade would behave been an omelette.

hahahaha!

So, in Christmas evening, I kept tasting, drinking, and chatting with others, though at some point, I thought "enough is enough" and went to sleep.


So, in Christmas evening, I kept tasting, drinking, and chatting with the others, t. Though at some point, I thought, "eEnough is enough" and went to sleep.

Christmas Dinner


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