Dec. 22, 2021
Christmas
Christmas is like a dress code for cities. Christmas trees are found in major malls and other public buildings. All kinds of Christmas decorations and glittering lights are hung up from November to next year’s January. After that the traditional Chinese New Year vibes replace them.
Most places have weak religious atmospheres. However, when I studied in university, I was surrounded by lots of religious symbols during Christmas because Fu Jen is a Catholic University. Christmas dance parties were my unforgettable memories in university.
Now, I am a mom. The gift-giving activity in my son’s class annoys me every year because my son and I have to rack our brains to find a perfect gift for another unknown child. My son complains that he has never received the gifts he liked these years.
<p>聖誕節就像城市的著裝要求，在大型商場和其他公共建築中都有聖誕樹，從十一月到明年一月，掛上了各種聖誕裝飾品和閃閃發光的燈飾，之後由傳統的中國新年氛圍取代。</p>
<p>大多數的地方宗教氣氛較弱。 然而，當我在大學學習時，聖誕節期間是被許多宗教象徵包圍的，因為輔仁是一所天主教大學，聖誕舞會是我在大學期間難忘的回憶。</p>
<p>現在，我是媽媽了。 每年兒子班上的交換禮物活動都讓我很煩惱，因為我和兒子必須絞盡腦汁為另一個不知名的孩子找到完美的禮物。我兒子抱怨說他這些年來從沒收到過喜歡的禮物。</p>
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All kinds of Christmas decorations and glittering lights are hung up from November to next year’s January.
Most places have weak religious atmospheres. (or) a weak religious spirit, (or) limited religious character
However, when I studied in university, I was surrounded by lots of religious symbols during Christmas because Fu Jen is a Catholic University.
American English: when I was in college (or) when I was a college student (or) at my university
Christmas dance parties were my most unforgettable memories in university.
(or) were unforgettable memories in college
My son complains that he has never received the gifts he liked all these years.
Dec. 22, 2021
Thank you for the corrections and suggestions.
Christmas
Christmas is like a dress code for cities.
Christmas trees are found in major malls and other public buildings.
All kinds of Christmas decorations and glittering lights are hung up from November toill next year’s January.
After that, the atmosphere switches to a more traditional Chinese New Year vibes replace them.
Since you were talking about decorations earlier and not the atmosphere in general, it's better to add that to specify here.
Most places have weakdon't have much of a religious atmospheres.
However, when I studied in university, I was surrounded by lots of religious symbols during Christmas because Fu Jen is a Catholic University.
Christmas dance parties weremake up some of my unforgettable memories infrom university.
Now, I am a mom.
The gift-giving activity in my son’s class annoys me every year because my son and I have to rack our brains to find a perfect gift for another unknown child.
My son complains that, even after all these years, he has never received theany gifts he liked these yearsthat he actually liked.
I tried to reword it so it would flow more naturally, without changing your message too much.
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Well-written! It was an interesting read.
Dec. 22, 2021
Thank you for the corrections and suggestions.
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After that the traditional Chinese New Year vibes replace them. After that, the atmosphere switches to a more traditional Chinese New Year vibe Since you were talking about decorations earlier and not the atmosphere in general, it's better to add that to specify here. |
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Most places have weak religious atmospheres. Most places Most places have weak religious atmospheres. (or) a weak religious spirit, (or) limited religious character |
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However, when I studied in university, I was surrounded by lots of religious symbols during Christmas because Fu Jen is a Catholic University. This sentence has been marked as perfect! However, when I studied in university, I was surrounded by lots of religious symbols during Christmas because Fu Jen is a Catholic University. American English: when I was in college (or) when I was a college student (or) at my university |
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