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Today，i have a new name，i am choose name for oneself，Lris. Beacuse my Chinese name one is "Hong（rainbow）" inside .But idon't kown my new name ，does it sound strange?
今天，我有一个新名字了，我给自己取的名字是Lris。因为我的中文名字里面有一个虹字，但是我不知道我的新英文名字会不会很奇怪。
cChoose name
Today，i have, I got a new name，i am. I choose a name for onemyself，, Lris.
Beacause my Chinese name one is "Hong（rainbow）" inside" .
But iI don't known about my new name, ，does it sound strange?
cChoose ning a Name
(1) I reworded the title so that it sounds more natural.
(2) Typically, all words in a title are capitalised.
Today，i, I have a new name，i am. The name I choose name for onemyself， is Lris.,
(1) The pronoun "I" is always capitalised.
(2) I think the writing will flow better if this sentence is split into two. I would also suggest merging the second half with the next sentence, so I replaced the period at the end with a comma.
Beacbecause my Chinese name one ishas the character "Hhong（" (rainbow）") inside (it).
As mentioned earlier, I'd suggest merging this sentence with the one above. Therefore, I uncapitalised "because".
But iI don't known, does my new name ，does it sound strange?
Feedback
“Lris”这个名字可能会有点难念，因为“lr”这个字母组合通常不会出现在英文单词的开头。包含“lr”的单词有“already”、“ballroom”、“walrus”等，但你会发现“lr”总是出现在单词中间。或许你所想的名字是“Iris”？
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yes, my new name is lris，I thought capitalize the first letter
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You do indeed capitalise the first letter! However, you seem to have typed the letter "L" instead of the letter "I". In any case, "Iris" is a fantastic name and doesn't at all sound strange.
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Oh, thank you! I’m glad it doesn’t sound strange.
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choose name
(1) I reworded the title so that it sounds more natural. (2) Typically, all words in a title are capitalised.
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Today，i have a new name，i am choose name for oneself，Lris. Today (1) The pronoun "I" is always capitalised. (2) I think the writing will flow better if this sentence is split into two. I would also suggest merging the second half with the next sentence, so I replaced the period at the end with a comma. Today |
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Beacuse my Chinese name one is "Hong（rainbow）" inside .
As mentioned earlier, I'd suggest merging this sentence with the one above. Therefore, I uncapitalised "because". Be |
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But idon't kown my new name ，does it sound strange? But But |
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